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Following is Introduction of the essay. This took about 30 minutes to write. I chose this topic randomly from a past paper; no prior research done on it. Please be harshly critical. What is wrong with it? How can I improve? I have a habit of elaborating unnecessarily. Is it obvious in the paragraph below? How do I improve it?


Is Colonial Mentality Impending Pakistan's progress?


"He that apes others will never be himself."

Before I elaborate on the above mentioned adage, let me underscore some quirky habits and beliefs of an average Pakistani. Firstly, he is awe-inspired by anyone who speaks fluent English and considers English an ultimate measure of intelligence irrespective of whether the substance of the speaker carries any weight or not. Secondly, he considers fair complexion a standard symbol of beauty and makes every effort to look fairer. Thirdly, it is relatively easier for an average Pakistani to either climb up the career ladder, coax superiors into accepting his ideas and boss around the subordinates if he is well versed in English. All these elements indicate rather deeply embedded aftermath of colonialism. As my grandfather puts it eloquently, "The Englishmen left, but we are still very much under their spell...dancing to the music that does not resonate with us, laughing at the jokes pretentiously we do not even find funny and taking pride in the culture that does not even belong to us." Anatol Leivon, a British himself, rightly mocks upper-middle class Pakistani youth's snobbish attitude that stems from their pseudo sense of superiority of being better versed at English, in his widely acclaimed book: Pakistan a Hard Country. This inferiority complex runs raft in the Pakistani society, to the extent that it stifles the intellectual growth and suppresses the creativity of indigenous fellow beings. The idea of trying to adopt to the customs that are no where near our true identity has resulted in longstanding identical crisis. Hence the above mentioned proverb accurately describes a social quagmire that Pakistan has been facing since 1947; Pakistan's enslavement to colonial ways is indeed impending its growth indeed.

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Important Quotations for Essays
EDUCATION
Knowledge is my companion, it is with me wherever I go. My heart is its container, not the bookshelf.
–Ali RA

“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.”
― Nelson Mandela

A learned man who doesn’t restrain his passions is like a blind man holding a torch, he guides others but not himself.
-Shaykh Sa’di

“I have never let my schooling interfere with my education.”
― Mark Twain

“You can never be overdressed or overeducated.”
― Oscar Wilde

“Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

“Education is the ability to listen to almost anything without losing your temper or your self-confidence.”
― Robert Frost

“Intelligence plus character-that is the goal of true education.”
― Martin Luther King Jr.

“Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.”
― Aristotle
RELIGION
“Knock, And He'll open the door
Vanish, And He'll make you shine like the sun
Fall, And He'll raise you to the heavens
Become nothing, And He'll turn you into everything.”
― Rumi
“Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind.”
― Albert Einstein


“God has no religion.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

“The mind is its own place, and in itself can make a heaven of hell, a hell of heaven..”
― John Milton

“Science and religion are not at odds. Science is simply too young to understand.”
― Dan Brown

“My concern is not whether God is on our side; my greatest concern is to be on God's side, for God is always right.”
― Abraham Lincoln

“When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. That's my religion.”
― Abraham Lincoln

“My religion is very simple. My religion is kindness.”
― Dalai Lama XIV

“I love you when you bow in your mosque, kneel in your temple, pray in your church. For you and I are sons of one religion, and it is the spirit. ”
― Kahlil Gibran

“I believe in the fundamental truth of all great religions of the world.”
― Mahatma Gandhi
WAR ON TERROR
“The number of people killed by the sanctions in Iraq is greater than the total number of people killed by all weapons of mass destruction in all of history.”
― Noam Chomsky
“When the people fear the government there is tyranny, when the government fears the people there is liberty.”
― Thomas Jefferson

“The United States finds itself with forces of reaction. Do I have to demonstrate this? The Taliban's annihilation of music and culture? The enslavement of women?”
― Christopher Hitchens
“Terrorism': the word that means nothing, yet justifies everything.”
― Glenn Greenwald

“War is politics for everyone but the warrior.”
― Tiffany Madison

'One Man's Terrorist is Another Man's Freedom Fighter'

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is any guide book available for essays for preparation of this subject
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No. You can consult to any language expert who can guide you step by step.

I joined a library. I studied entirely on my own, didn't seek anyone's advice and frankly, didn't write in excessive detail like most people do in the exam. I am hoping the quality of my answers will help me pass. Don't just study from guide books and reproduce what's in them, because most people do that.