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the person who attempted essay with this outline is passed

i attempted the same essay with the following outline......seniors needs to give their precious remarks...
1. Introduction
2. Deprivation of women of their rights
a. Ancient Civilization
b. Hinduism
c. Christianity
d. ISlam
3. Women's treatment in developed countries
4. Condition of women in Pakistan
a. Control of feudal lords
b. Tribal System
c. Women suppressing laws
d. Economic problems
e. Agricultural issues
f. Forced labour
g. Inheritance problems
h. Social problems
i. Inhumane customs
j. Illiteracy among women
k. Low health facilities
l. Rape attacks
m. Acid attacks
n. dowry abuse
5. Impact of women's depression on society
a. Schizophrenia and suicide attempts
b. Results in low literacy rate
c. Feminist movements
d. Beggary
e. Eloping results in prostitution
6. Role of govt of Pakistan
a. Huddod Ordinance 2006
b. Women empowerment act 2007
c. Protection against harrasment of women act 2010
d. 10 % quota for women in civil services
e. women police stations
f. abolishment of jirga system 2004
g. BISP and KAshf foundation
h. Darul Aman
i. SAF
j. Blue Veins
k. Pakistan federation of business and professional women for technical education
l. APWA
m. Induction of women in defence forces
7. Solution to the problem
a. Suitable legislation
b. Perfect educational infrastructure
c. Provision of better health facilities
d. Media
e. Development of backward areas
f. Role of NGO's and Ulemma
8. Conclusion

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I attempted “politics,not economics is the key to success”
Respected seniors please evluate and give your preciuos comments wheter I will be able to pass or not .

Thesis statement
A sound political order is the solution of all economic and social problems.

Outline

Economic growth follows the political development- evidential support

• Westrern example (USA ,UK,France )-success in domestic and foreign spheres

• Their sound political system helped them earn prestige in the family of nations

• Their politcal systems ensured liberty and utility for citizens

• Kingdom saudi arabia despite economic strenght failed to provide good life to their citizens and failed to play a desicive role in world politics

• Political theorists overhauled wester n political system in 18 century-that follwed by sustainable ,economic growth

It is the policy that give framwork and impetus to ecnomic growth


• Policy making is the purview of politicians

• Poltical order also oversee the impimentation o f policies

• Sound policies lead to ecnomic growth

• Politics shapes and reshape domestic and foriegn policies regarding economic growth


Why political system of pakistan failed to deliver good


• Mass indifference,apathy toward politics

• Mass ilitracy and unwarness of poitics

• Lack of consensus among political stakeolders against extralegal measures

• Myth and misconceptions regarding democracy in polity
Electoral process is zentith of democracy

• No Pro-people ecnomic growth at political agenda
Political development in west is the result of pro-people policies

• Dynastic politics, leadership crises
We have leaders but no statesman

• Political parties :the private limited companies
Political parties are at the heart of all type of political activities
Undemocratic organisation pattern
Politics a corporate affair

Coclusion


30 marks Karachi centre

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striving to discover the undiscovered to serve the humanity

Free Speech should have limitations.

1-INTRODUCTION

2-FREE SPEECH AS BENCHMARK OF DEMOCRACY

a) UN article 59(1)
b) 1st amendment of USA's constitution
c)Article 19 of human rights declaration
d)Article 19 of the constitution of Pakistan

3-Misuse of Free Speech: a Global Scenario

a) Rwanda Genocide
b) Anti Muslim sentiments
c) Propaganda tool
h) Hate Machinery
e) Promotion of corporate culture

4- Scholars who ask for limitation on free speech

a) Noam chomsky
b) Karl Marx
3) Thussu

5- Freedom of Speech: Pakistan a case study

I analysed the role of media in light of article 19 of the constitution of Pakistan

a) Decency and Morality
b) Relations with other nations
c) Promotion of Islam
d) National Security of Pakistan
e) Yellow Journalism
f) Rating Race

6) Freedom always comes with responsibility

a) Media should realise its role as the fourth pillar of sate
b) Media should follow the journalistic ethics
c) Implication of "Watchdog" and "Social Responsibility"
d) Positive and constructive role

7) Conclusion

I got 20 marks

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Yeh Aseer Sehzadi Choot bhi tou Skti hay

Your outline to the question is very comprehensive and detailed. I would add a few points here and there but even in what you have right now, I think it is a skeleton of a great edifice. I am baffled to think as to why were you not able to pass the exam.

I am surprised as this is worth passing outline. Now my belief is getting more and more strong that FPSC passes the candidates on PARCHI SYSTEM

No need for outline point no 2 and its subheadings .essay is about limitations of free speech not on its importance or meaning .
Outline seems attractive on reading but in 2 and a half hours how can one manage to write so many paragraphs ? Your outline consists of almost 30 sub headings and headings , did you write 30 pages?
Maximum outline limit should a page and a half , a maximum of 10 to 12 headings .

Try to be more FOCUSSED and concise in your next attempt , you will get through Insha Allah , and don't get carried away if you happen to be well read in the asked topic .


Stay blessed.


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There is always room for improvement , it's the biggest room in the house.

Gender equality is a myth: 34
Length 2500
Length got me down as mistake must have been more and there is ample chance that I added non sense information

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You mean your essay was very long that is why you committed many grammatical mistakes in your paper??? Can you post your outline too if possible?

Have you got through essay paper if yes let us know about your marks, strategy and outline.

Ammara c thresd "qualifiers in 1st attempt

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