troubles in essay ....

[Aamnah chaudhary]

i have a query ..... infact queries ...... i want to knw few things essay as i havnt joined any academy so m lacking info which troubling me .....
1. is this important to write all the outline ... i have seen senior's posts in which they had wrote only few one not all sub points ..... so all sub points are needed to write ?

2. can we draw anything e;g figures , any map or like pictorial expressing some theory better ?

3.we usually rushes towards length of the essay which really effcts the quality some times .... so can we limit it though it exceed definitely required words .. ofcourse more than 5000 words ...
4 . jo mainy asl main pochna tha wo tu main bholi hoe hun ...
when we have written outline e:g political instability is the point in main outline lyng certainly in 8th point .... doest it important every para must b in appropriate to outline in place ....ufff ... agr examiner exactly only 8th para osi sequence main check kren nd we have written some other there ,that one might be ahead while writng ....will it effect on scoring ??????????????

[usmanwrites]

All sub points are not necessary as long as the outline reflects the essay, the outline should be as simple and as concrete as possible.

Maps and figures are generally no go zone in an essay

Quality should be focused not quantity people with 1200 words have passed

Outline reflects the sequence not the paragraph number one can merge two points of outline in single paragraph and also one point can be elaborated in more than one paragraphs.

[Ahmed Faisal]

Originally Posted by Aamnah chaudhary

i have a query ..... infact queries ...... i want to knw few things essay as i havnt joined any academy so m lacking info which troubling me .....
1. is this important to write all the outline ... i have seen senior's posts in which they had wrote only few one not all sub points ..... so all sub points are needed to write ?

As to your first question, Yes you must write all the points and sub-point. Reason? First impression is the last impression. Sometimes examiner judges your whole essay on the basis of your outline. You must write even those points which you don,t expand in the body of your essay.

2. can we draw anything e;g figures , any map or like pictorial expressing some theory better ?

hmmmm I think not... You should focus on your grammar, expression and relevancy rather than graphs picture and whatnot.

3.we usually rushes towards length of the essay which really effcts the quality some times .... so can we limit it though it exceed definitely required words .. ofcourse more than 5000 words ...

Although the required limit is 2500-3500 words, very few can write that much within 3 hours. You can easily pass the essay paper with the help of only 1700-2000 words provided the quality of your essay is appealing.

4 . jo mainy asl main pochna tha wo tu main bholi hoe hun ...
when we have written outline e:g political instability is the point in main outline lyng certainly in 8th point .... doest it important every para must b in appropriate to outline in place ....ufff ... agr examiner exactly only 8th para osi sequence main check kren nd we have written some other there ,that one might be ahead while writng ....will it effect on scoring ??????????????

Yes it is necessary to write your essay according to the sequence of your outline. You must not try to write point no 2 in place of point no 8. Secondly, When you start your paragraph, highlight the point in your topic sentence for the convenience of the examiner.

Your any other query is most welcome.

[Aamnah chaudhary]

thanks .....
i want to ask one more thing ..it is recommended that try to write outlines in for example in c.a ... before every question ...i dont think so it is always true ... when i write answer with proper headingz nd sub heading then wt is the need to write outlines .... when question is already follow well managed coherent pattern ... so what do u say ?

..one more question ... in g.k if question arises of 5 marks ... one para is enuf ? to write along with if v hav any diagram ?

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m very gud at writng skills .... i have seen various posts in which i observed that my way is comperatively better than otherz but unable to make out why did i score less in c.a.........

[Ahmed Faisal]

Originally Posted by Aamnah chaudhary

thanks .....
i want to ask one more thing ..it is recommended that try to write outlines in for example in c.a ... before every question ...i dont think so it is always true ... when i write answer with proper headingz nd sub heading then wt is the need to write outlines .... when question is already follow well managed coherent pattern ... so what do u say ?

..one more question ... in g.k if question arises of 5 marks ... one para is enuf ? to write along with if v hav any diagram ?

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Yes you are right, you don,t need to make outlines in any paper except Essay. Just try to fulfill requirements of certain question. I personally believe that giving headings and sub- headings in answers are far better than making only outline.

Originally Posted by Aamnah chaudhary

m very gud at writng skills .... i have seen various posts in which i observed that my way is comperatively better than otherz but unable to make out why did i score less in c.a.........

My experience says good score in c.a or any other paper is not only dependent on writing skill but also on relevancy, facts, figures and examples. You just need to keep one thing in your mind, examiners have no value of stories. They give score to those outstanding candidates who prove their stance with facts and figures. In simple words, whatever you say prove it with solid arguments. You will be rewarded I.A .