Hy aspirants and seniors! I would like you to comment regarding the essay I attempted, Pakistani sportswomen as ambassador of soft image of Pakistan .My outline was primarily based on "How sportswomen have been able to create softer image for pakistan?
Keeping this basic premise i attempted the whole essay. I personally believe that there was no need of argumentation on lack of ground,playing facilities and achievements of sportswomen.
My outline included the following points though i dont remember the whole:
Sportswomen representing egalitarian Pakistani society,Representing that Pakistan is peace loving country,Potraying Pakistan as exclusive member of the world community,eliminating gender discrimination and inspiring womens of other nations.
Now keeping in view the point of "No deviation from the topic" I attempted the whole essay although there was paucity of ideas but i remained confined to the topic.
I would request seniors and fellow aspirants to comment on this.
Thanks

forgive me sir but you want comments because you want to know whether you will pass it or not. why don't you do something better. why don't you write outlines for 2015 and upload them then i can guarantee people will comment.

sir tashfeen alam 42 CTP (PAS) never failed an essay and he never wrote more than 1400 words! essay is about keeping it as simple as possible.

check these threads for his outlines:
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...s-topic-3.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...tml#post693032