women sports persons as new ambassadors of the soft image of Pakistan
 

i am starting this thread to invite all those who have opted this essay in 2014. please share your outline and the the understanding of the topic around which your outline revolves. As per my understanding this topic demands to discuss following.
how women sports persons portray soft image?
does male sports persons serve the same purpose?
what are the old ambassadors if women sports persons are new?
image of pakistan?
is it soft or of hardliners?
and important of all i have seen many of the outlines in which aspirants have discussed problems of women sports i am also one of them.
Should this be part of essay?

Here are my outlines:
 

Women Sports-persons as New Ambassadors of the Soft Image of Pakistan


Outlines:

(i): Introduction
(ii): Sports in modern world
(iii): Womens' participation in world sports
(iv): Women sports-persons as ambassadors
(v): Women sports-persons of Pakistan and the world
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan and the world
(vii): Sports opportunities for women in Pakistan
(viii): Role of women sports-persons in the world
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan
(xi): Problems that Pakistan is facing at the moment
(xii) Image of Pakistan in the world
(xiii) How can the soft image of Pakistan be developed?
(xiv) Conclusion

well, brother., first of all thanks for your participation in the thread. your outline seems quite balanced, with full emphasis on women sports and its positive point is that; it does not focus on Pakistan only rather compares it with the world.

Outline:

(i): Introduction
(ii): History or Sports and the entrance of women into the category
(iii): Pakistani women and sport (upbringing)
(iv): Societal view on women playing sports
(v): Women sports-persons of the world and Pakistan (ranking)
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan vs the world
(vii): Difference between budgets for men sports and women in Pakistan
(viii): Lives of Pakistani sportswomen
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan (diplomatic)
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan for women
(xi): Problems that Pakistani sportswomen face
(xii): How the world views our sportswomen
(xiii): Conclusion: Future of these sportswomen and generations to come

[QUOTE=Mrkhansaab;736079]Outline:

(i): Introduction
(ii): History or Sports and the entrance of women into the category
(iii): Pakistani women and sport (upbringing)
(iv): Societal view on women playing sports
(v): Women sports-persons of the world and Pakistan (ranking)
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan vs the world
(vii): Difference between budgets for men sports and women in Pakistan
(viii): Lives of Pakistani sportswomen
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan (diplomatic)
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan for women
(xi): Problems that Pakistani sportswomen face
(xii): How the world views our sportswomen
(xiii): Conclusion: Future of these sportswomen and generations to come[/QUOTE]

dear your outline seems good as for as women sports are concened. will you please elaborate where in the essay you analyzed image of pakistan being softened by these...

After days and days of brainstorming and going through the outlines of people who have qualified previous css attempts, i believe outline for this essay should be like this.

Current image of Pakistan
Fundamentalists
Extremists
Terrorists
Male chauvinism
Beggars
Lack of opportunities (education, employment, sports)
Lack of freedom of speech
Gender discrimination
How women sportspersons deny this and portray soft image of Pakistan
Women sportspersons deny honour killing
Deny house arrest
Deny acid throwing
Deny Male chauvinism
Deny gender discrimination
Deny women rights persecution
Deny the fact that blood is cheaper than water
Women sports person depict a society where following prevails
Freedom of speech
Right of choice
Equal.opportunities
Progressive society
Conclusion women sportspersons effectively portray soft image of pakistan..

[QUOTE=Muhmmad Ali Raza;743718]After days and days of brainstorming and going through the outlines of people who have qualified previous css attempts, i believe outline for this essay should be like this.

Current image of Pakistan
Fundamentalists
Extremists
Terrorists
Male chauvinism
Beggars
Lack of opportunities (education, employment, sports)
Lack of freedom of speech
Gender discrimination
How women sportspersons deny this and portray soft image of Pakistan
Women sportspersons deny honour killing
Deny house arrest
Deny acid throwing
Deny Male chauvinism
Deny gender discrimination
Deny women rights persecution
Deny the fact that blood is cheaper than water
Women sports person depict a society where following prevails
Freedom of speech
Right of choice
Equal.opportunities
Progressive society
Conclusion women sportspersons effectively portray soft image of pakistan..[/QUOTE]

I curse myself for wandering around the topic and not hitting the hammer at hot iron..aspirants i believe it is not compulsory to start writing every topic with stereotype style such as
Intro
History
Body
Drawbacks
Recommendations
Conclusion etc etc.......
Essay style should be as per the demand og topic if it is arguementative than it should be full of arguements.
Anyone may differ with me but this is truth that can be verified by comparing outlines of successful candidates with the failures..