Let us start practice of making outlines of past papers of english essay.I,ll post one topic every week and we,ll make outlines on that topic. Seniors,ll guide us through their comments.

first topic is domestic violence in Pakistan. My outlines are as under. need your suggestions.


DOMESTIC VIOLENCE IN PAKISTAN

OUTLINES:-
1) INTRODUCTION
2) VIOLENCE
3) DOMESTIC VIOLENCE
4) PRESENT SCENARIO OF DOMESTIC VIOLENCE IN PAKISTAN
5) CAUSES OF DOMESTIC VIOLENCE IN PAKISTAN
i) SOCIAL CAUSES
a)Illiteracy
b) Defined role of both sexes in society.
c)Accepted dominant role of men in society
d) considering family as private sphere and under male control.
ii) ECONOMIC CAUSES
a) Limited access to employment in formal and informal sector
b) Women,s economic dependence on men
c) Limited access to cash and credit
d) Discriminatory laws regarding inheritance and property rights
e) Limited access to training programs
iii) RELIGIOUS CAUSES
a) Misinterpretation of Islam
b) Narrow minded religious approaches
iv) POLITICAL CAUSES
a) Under representation of women in power,politics, bureaucracy media and technical professions
b) Domestic violence not taken seriously
c) Notion of family being private is beyond control of state
d) Risk of challenges to status quo/ religious laws.
6) EFFECTS OF DOMESTIC VIOLENCE
i) Tarnished international image
ii) Negative impact on future generations
iii) Poverty in society
7) Solutions
i) Education
ii) Women should be financially empowered
iii) Religious leaders should play their role in bringing awareness among masses about women rights
iv) International and national organizations should play their role.
8) CONCLUSION

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good to get 50+ marks

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Radia your effort is good , how much time do you intend to give each topic ?

I,ll post new topic after one week inshAllah if u people are interested

very good effort Radia it's helpful for juniors like me.

Go wisely nd slowly, those who rush stumble and fall (william shakespeare)

Nice effort but attempt it fully so that we may point out your mistakes for your improvement.

Be Blessed.

Violence is the Last Refuge of the Incompetent

1. Introduction

2. Violence, Incompetency, and Last Refuge

a. What does the word "Violence" mean here?
b. Incompetency and Violence: A correlation
c. Last Refuge; why not first?

3. Highlights of Incompetent(s)-led Violence around the Globe

a. Syria, 2011: Shooting on Peaceful Protests
b. Egypt, 2011: Crackdown on Citizens
c. Assassination of Liaqat Ali Khan, in 1951
d. Assassination of Sheikh Mujib-ur-Rehman, in 1975
e. Indian Atrocities in State of Jammu and Kashmir
f. Lal Masjid Operation, in 2007

4. Causes of Incompetent(s)-driven Violence

a. Issues in Governance
b. Dictatorships
c. Limited Economic Opportunities
d. Absence of Social Security Schemes
e. Government Ignorance towards Reforms
f. Foreign Intelligence Services Involvement
g. Weak Domestic Security Apparatus

5. Impact of Such Violence in Societies/Countries

a. General Sense of Insecurity
b. Slow, or no Economic Growth
c. Psychological Problems i.e. Depression
d. Brain-drain

6. Solutions for Tackling such Violence

a. Democracy: in a true sense
b. Public-friendly Governance
c. Strong and Effective Justice System
d. Social Security Schemes: Britain's Case Study
e. Economic/Employement Opportunities
f. Effective Domestic Security Apparatus

7. Conclusion

@ Radia. forgive me sister I saw it later that you were supposed to choose the topic. won't happen again, sorry

Please check this outline

Ideas change the course of History

Outline

1. Introduction

1.1 If the past is passed on to the future without any vestige of creativity then humanity does not progress

1.2 Ideas have the power to change the course of history

2. Body

2.1 Some Ideas that changed the course of history

2.1.1 The invention of zero in India

2.1.2 Einstein and Relativity

2.1.3 Freud and Oedipus complex

2.1.4 Darwin and theory of Evolution

2.1.5 Marx and Socialism

2.1.6 Averroes and Secularism

2.1.7 Adam Smith and Wealth of Nations

2.1.8 Heat Engine and Industrialization

2.2 Why these Ideas changed the course of history

2.2.1 Man’s urge to solve problems of mankind

2.2.2 Man’s curiosity to know the truth

2.2.3 Man’s struggle towards an easier life

2.2.4 Man’s will to expand

2.3 How these ideas changed the course of history

2.3.1 Man was able to perform vast calculations

2.3.2 Man got the knowledge to explore space and science found a new direction

2.3.3 Man was able to take better decisions and make better organizations

2.3.4 Man gained a new insight of his beginnings

2.3.5 Man was able to create new kind of state

2.3.6 Man was able to escape the clutches of superstition

2.3.7 Man was able to create more wealth and comfort for masses

2.3.8 Man was able to produce and travel quickly and save time

2.4 Comparison

2.4.1 Mechanized agriculture in developed countries and traditional methods in developing ones

2.4.2 Enlightenment in the West and dogmatism in the east

2.4.3 Dominance of west over east

2.5 Recommendations

2.5.1 Reforms in education

2.5.2 Awareness through media

3. Conclusion

3.1 Ideas change the course of history