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M.A.N Thursday, May 10, 2007 01:44 PM

Essay-writing Guide
 
[B][SIZE="5"][U]PART-1[/U][/SIZE][/B]
[SIZE="5"][U][B]ESSAY-WRITING THE ESSENTIAL GUIDE[/B][/U][/SIZE]

In a subject like Communications Studies, much of your university work will be assessed by essay – whether that’s an essay you prepare in your own time over a period of days or weeks, or one you concoct in an examination hall in the space of an hour. It therefore follows that if you learn how to prepare, organise and present essays, you will do much better in your degree overall. So this document might also be called:

[B]HOW TO GET BETTER MARKS WITHOUT (NECESSARILY) DOING MORE WORK[/B]

We’ll assume that you’ve read widely about the particular subject of your essay, and have a good understanding of the broader area within which that topic is located. Broad and deep research is the essential basis of an essay. You will have lots of notes on the subject – see the ICS Study Skills Guide to Note-Making for tips on how to do this.
So now it’s time to write the essay. You sit down in front of the keyboard and start typing: you put the title, you try to group some similar bits of information or argument together, and then you put a conclusion on the end saying that there are many interesting points of view on this subject, right?
No, of course you don’t. You’ve got to start off with an essay plan. By designing this you’ll come up with the structure. A well thought-out structure is at the heart of every good essay.

[B]What is a good structure?[/B]
It isn’t enough to make sure that you have an
introduction at the start, a conclusion at the end, and
the other stuff in between. So what do you need?

[B]1. [/B]You do need a solid introduction. It will probably
contain something about how you have interpreted the
question, and it is often a good idea to state a thesis
(an argument) which you are going to illustrate or
explore in the body of the essay – although you may
prefer to save the ‘findings’ of your exploration to the
end, in which case you have to introduce the question
carefully at the start.

[B]2.[/B] And you need a tight, powerful conclusion which is
the logical consequence of everything that has gone before.
The good essay has developed a number of related
strands which the conclusion ties together. It may also
contain an extra, surprising thing which you saved to
throw in at the end with a flourish.

[B]3. [/B]So what happens in between? Well…
Six really awful ways to begin the essay ‘Why have baked beans become so popular in twentieth century Britain?’:
“The question of why baked beans have become so popular in twentieth century Britain is an interesting…”
“The Oxford English Dictionary defines ‘baked beans’ as…”
“In this essay I will explore the question of why baked beans have become so popular in twentieth…”
“The Penguin English Dictionary defines ‘popular’ as…”
“The twentieth century has been going for quite a while now and…”
“The Collins English Dictionary defines ‘twentieth century’ as…”
! Why are these awful? Because they are so predictable, uninspiring and limp. What should you do instead? Something else.

*Note[Reference would be revealed later]

M.A.N Friday, May 11, 2007 04:20 PM

[SIZE="5"][B]PART-II

[U]ESSAY WRITING GUIDE[/U][/B][/SIZE]

You need to organize your material so that it flows from one area, sub-section or argument to the next in a logical order. Each part should build upon, or at least reasonably follow on from, the previous parts, and the whole thing should be pulling the reader, clearly and inescapably, to your triumphant conclusion.
The box on the right shows unimaginative kinds of essay structure, which are likely to get low marks. But what can you do instead?
One good approach is to look through your notes and identify a handful of themes within the discussion, and to structure your essay around consideration of those. You should order the analysis of each theme so that the essay builds up towards the conclusion.
[B][SIZE="3"]
DON’T KNOW HOW TO START? [/SIZE][/B]

If you’ve got some notes but you don’t know how to start the next stage, get a nice big clean sheet of paper and write down phrases which summarise all of your thoughts about the subject, the different questions and ideas you’ve had in your mind, and the areas and problems that have been covered in your reading. Then look for similarities, and related concerns, and group them together in whatever way makes sense to you. After that, see if you can number these areas into an order – the order in which you will weave your way through the material.
And voila! You’ve accidentally created an essay structure. Now just check it, tweak it a bit to make it more coherent, and you’re ready to go.

[SIZE="3"][B]More analysis = more marks[/B][/SIZE]

You will often need to describe something before you give an analysis of it. But the more analysis the better. Only include as much description as is needed for the analysis to make sense. The analysis is what you will get the marks for. Of course, a muddled, illogical and unsubstantiated analysis can still leave you with no marks. We’ll be looking for a clear, coherent and consistent analysis, supported by evidence.

[B][SIZE="3"]Don’t just repeat what some books (or your lecture notes) say – we want your analysis.[/SIZE][/B]
However, you should also show your awareness of other people’s analyses!

[B][SIZE="3"]Don’t wander off the subject[/SIZE][/B]

Answer the question, and only the question. And keep checking that you are remaining on track throughout the essay. If there’s something interesting that you want to include, but which is of dubious relevance to the main argument or theme of the essay, put it in a footnote.

[SIZE="3"][B]Don’t rush[/B][/SIZE]

You might remember that you ‘did all right’ last time you stayed up all night on
pharmaceuticals, the day before the deadline, to research and write an essay. But this most likely means that you would have done much better if you had started reading and researching, and then writing, days or weeks before that. It is always obvious to your tutors when an essay is rushed.

[SIZE="3"][B]Don’t cheat[/B][/SIZE]

Plagiarism – using other people’s words and ideas without acknowledging where you got them from – is regarded as an enormous sin, the penalties for which are actually worse than just getting zero for the essay. Just say no. Or more specifically, make sure that you have got perfect references: see pages 4 – 5.

[B][SIZE="3"]Two dull kinds of essay structure:[/SIZE][/B]The one that’s not well enough organised:

1. Definition of the thing
2. Some stuff about the thing
3. Summary

The one that’s too formulaic
:
1. Introduction, saying that we will discuss the thing
2. Three arguments in favour of the thing
3. Three arguments against the thing
4. Summary of the above

*Note[Reference would be revealed later]

M.A.N Saturday, May 12, 2007 05:08 PM

[SIZE="5"]Part III

Essay Writing Guide

Style as well as substance[/SIZE]

Whilst it would seem ‘nice’ if the ideas of a genius would be appreciated even when written in horrible prose, you should not bank on this. The good student not only has good ideas to write about, but can write about them well. And it seems particularly wasteful to be losing marks just because you didn’t spend a little bit of time learning a few style tips.

[SIZE="5"]WAFFLE AND PADDING: NOT THE KEYS TO SUCCESS[/SIZE]

Don’t use superfluous words, phrases or sentences. If a sentence means the same thing with a word taken out, take it out. The same applies to whole phrases and sentences within the wider context of a paragraph. Using words and phrases which don’t add anything to what you’re saying will mean that your examiners will conclude that (a) you don’t have enough to say to meet the required essay length, and that (b) you are trying to hide this by means of a slow, repetitive and boring writing style. Which is not clever.

[SIZE="5"]For example — don’t write: When you could write:[/SIZE]
[I]Greg Dyke transformed the BBC, changing it so that it was altogether different from what it had been like before. Greg Dyke transformed the BBC.
Some people feel that he is a megalomaniac who wants to take over the world, whilst at the same time other people feel that he is a fundamentally weak man who lacks strength.
Some people feel he is a megalomaniac; others contend that he is fundamentally weak.Nevertheless, we can certainly see that he clearly wields a considerable and substantial degree of direct power, influence and the ability to change things around within the organisation. Nevertheless, he clearly has a considerable degree of direct power within the organisation.[/I]

The above para contains 250 per cent more words than the right-hand column, but it contains zero per cent more information. Your examiners spot this kind of thing. Furthermore, by not inflating her essay with space-filling nonsense, the pithy writer of the right-hand column has got room to show her understanding of the subject by expanding on all of these points: what did Dyke do? Why might he be seen as power-crazed, or weak? How has he demonstrated his personal power? In other words, she has got room for lots of analysis, which, as we established above, is good news.

[SIZE="5"]CAN I SAY “I FEEL THIS ARGUMENT IS WRONG BECAUSE...”?[/SIZE]

There are different preferences about whether you should say “I” in an essay or not. Sometimes it can look really good if you confidently say “Rather, I would argue that...”. But saying “I feel this argument is wrong because...” can look a bit ponderous, and some tutors don’t like it. A solution to this is to be even more assertive and say “However, this argument is weak, since...”. It will still be clear to your examiners that you are making your own argument – and we definitely do like you to make your own argument. Whatever you are saying, make sure you back it up with argument and evidence.

[SIZE="5"]SURELY THIS STUFF ABOUT ‘STYLE’ IS JUST SUPERFICIAL AND ISN’T VERY IMPORTANT?[/SIZE]

Wrong. If your essay is badly-written, you will be losing marks. And, in the outside world, you would be losing readers (whether you are writing books and screenplays, or company reports and letters... or even job applications!). It is very important to write in a crisp, clear style, with good sentence construction and proper punctuation. Needless to say, spelling mistakes also fail to impress.

M.A.N Tuesday, May 29, 2007 07:23 PM

[B][SIZE="5"]PART-4[/SIZE][/B]

[B][SIZE="4"]TWO MORE EXAMPLES OF BAD WRITING[/SIZE][/B]
Bad thing: What’s wrong with it?:
The film was criticised for it’s drug-taking, violence, etc.
! You only put an apostrophe in “it’s” where you are using it as an abbreviation of
“it is” (e.g. “it’s a great film”).

! The writer should really have put “…criticized for its depictions of drug-taking…” – otherwise the reader might wrongly infer that the production of the film involved actual drug-taking and violence, for example.
! The use of ‘etc.’ shows that the writer wanted to suggest that the film had been criticized for other things, but hadn’t got a clue what these were. It’s better to simply say: “The film was criticized for its depictions of drug-taking and violence”.

The theory was very popular, Foucault was said to be ‘more popular than the Beatles’. ! Two units of meaning – parts that could stand alone as sentences, such as “The theory was very popular” – cannot just be strung together with a comma in the middle. In this case, the comma could be replaced with a full stop, or a semi-colon (which represents a more emphatic pause than a comma, and suggests a connection
between the material before and after it). Or add a connecting word: “The theory was very popular, and Foucault was said to be ‘more popular than the Beatles’”. ! You want a reference for that quote, of course, too.

[SIZE="5"][B]References[/B][/SIZE]
As you may know, there are a range of different ways of writing references. Some of them involve using footnotes, or having separate lists called ‘References’ and ‘Bibliography’, and generally give you a headache. We therefore recommend the ‘Harvard’ system of referencing, which is straightforward, and widely-used by publishers and academics. THE HARVARD REFERENCE SYSTEM It’s quite simple. When you quote or paraphrase something, you cite the author’s last name, the year of publication, and the page reference, in brackets. For example: The popularity of baked beans soared when Elvis Presley was seen to eat six whole tins on Entertainment Tonight in 1959 (Heinz, 2000: 34).
At the end of the essay you then include a ‘References’ section which must include every item you’ve referred to in the essay. If there are two or more works by an author published in the same year, distinguish them as 2000a, 2000b, and so on. References are written in the following style:
[B][SIZE="5"]
Type of reference: Example of reference:[/SIZE][/B]

Book Heinz, Edward (2000) A History of Baked Beans, London: Arnold.
Article in book Johnson, Sarah (1998a) ‘The Cornflake in History’ in Norman Jennings (ed.)
Food for Thought, Edinburgh: Edinburgh University Press.
Article in journal Johnson, Sarah (1998b) ‘Deconstructing the pre-millennial diet: Special K and
postmodernism’, Cultural Studies 11, 1: 32–44.

[SIZE="5"][B]Explanation: This means that an article by Sarah Johnson [/B][/SIZE]called ‘Deconstructing the pre-millennial
diet: Special K and postmodernism’ was published in the journal Cultural Studies,
volume 11, number 1, on pages 32 to 44. This issue of the journal was published in 1998.
The piece is listed here as ‘(1998b)’ since it’s the second of two articles by Sarah Johnson,
which we are referring to, published in 1998.

[B][SIZE="4"]Article in newspaper[/SIZE][/B]
Ratner, Clifford (2000) ‘Magazine sparks love feud’, The Independent,
10 October 2000, Thursday Review section: 14.
Article from the internet

Wherever possible, identify the author, so you can have a reference like this:
Holmes, Amy (2000), ‘Greenpeace wins media war’, at [url]http://www.independent[/url].
co.uk/international/green25.htm (accessed: 25 November 2000).
Always state the date you visited the site. If you can’t state the author, have a reference like this:
BBC Online (2000) ‘Radical autumn shake-up’, at [url]http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/[/url]
10276.htm (accessed: 8 December 2000).

M.A.N Saturday, June 02, 2007 02:39 PM

[B]PART-5[/B]

And that’s it. The Harvard system is easy to use, relatively simple to produce, and the reader doesn’t need to keep stopping to look up references in footnotes. Instead, as you write your essay you can use footnotes for extra bits of information which are surplus to requirements in the main body of the essay, such as extra details about the subject, or interesting quotes.
However, remember that when writing footnotes, just as when you are writing the main body of the essay, you should draw out the relevance of the material you are using. Use them to enhance the impact of your argument.

[B]The complete short tips collection...[/B]

The tips below (like all of this guide) are based on an informal survey of ICS teaching staff which established what they do and don’t like in essays. Each point has been kept brief, so that you can write each tip on a piece of coloured card and turn them into a lovely mobile to hang above your bed.

M.A.N Saturday, June 02, 2007 02:43 PM

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Sadia Munawar Wednesday, December 09, 2009 04:24 AM

Essay writing during exams
 
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[B]Preparation[/B]
Essay or subjective exams may include either short answer questions or long general questions. These exams have no one specific answer per student. They are usually scored on an opinion basis, although there will be certain facts and understanding expected in the answer. The main reason students fail essay tests is not because they cannot write, but because they fail to answer the questions fully and specifically, and because their answer is not well organized.
Essay exams require recall learning. Carefully figure out the major content areas to learn. If you are not caught up, this is not a time to read everything in a frantic manner. Focus on the key source for the test: notes or textbook, or whatever you think will be most heavily covered on the test. It's better to understand and know a few things very well than to have a large quantity of unorganized, poorly learned material. These suggestions may help:[LIST=1][*]List all topics sure to be a part of the test. List important subtopics for each.[*]Skim all the materials to be covered, checking those to be more intensively studied.[*]Write down all the key topics covered in class and in your reading up until the test date (probably about 5 or 6 topics at mid-quarter and 9 or 10 at finals).[*]Read or reread all materials not understood; use a specific purpose when reading.[*]Develop a pool of information for each topic. Answering words like "who," "what," "where located," "how works," "key characteristics, " "cause-effect," and "examples" for each topic will help to cover the critical information.[*]Finally, take 2-3 blue books to class and a mechanical pencil that won't need sharpening. If the instructor specifies ink, take a pen with erasable ink.[/LIST]
[B]Taking the Essay Test[/B]
Read all the directions and questions.[LIST][*]Note the number of items, point distribution, range of difficulty, and time available.[*]Jot down any immediate answers that come to your mind - lists, outlines, etc. Jot down any other key information you might forget.[/LIST]Analyze the test question and divide it into its main parts and subparts.[LIST][*]From the parts quickly construct a rough outline.[*]Note the instructional words included in the question, e.g., compare or contrast.[*]Use the outline as a "map" to answer the essay question. If you don't have time to finish the whole test, this outline may give you some points. More importantly, the outline helps you to stay focused.[/LIST]Make you answer as specific as possible.[LIST][*]If you know the answer, write only what you are asked.[*]Avoid generalities.[/LIST]Use part of the test question in your test answer at the beginning of the paragraph. This signals to the reader that you are answering this part of the essay here! This will earn you points.
Include an introductory statement at the beginning and a summary paragraph at the end.
Review your answers. Your essay is written under the intensity of a deadline, but it is graded under much more relaxed conditions. Allow sufficient time to check for spelling, grammar, omitted words, incorrect dates, etc. This is when you will be glad you wrote in pencil.

[B]A Glossary of Essay Test Words[/B]
[U]ANALYZE:[/U] When asked to analyze, separate (a thing, idea, etc.) into its parts to find out their nature, proportion, function, interrelationship, etc.
[U]COMMENT: [/U]When asked to comment, you are asked to explore the impact and meaning of something; give a note in explanation, criticism, or illustration of something written or said; remark or make an observation made in criticism or as an expression of opinion
[U]COMPARE: [/U]Examine qualities or characteristics in order to discover resemblance's. The term compare is usually stated as compare with, and it implies that you are to emphasize similarities, although differences may be mentioned.
[U]CONTRAST: [/U]Tell how two or more topics are different from associated things, qualities, or events, etc.
[U]CRITICIZE, INTERPRET, and REVIEW:[/U] Express your judgment with respect to the correctness or merits of the factors under consideration. Give the results of your own analysis and discuss the limitations and good points or contributions of the plan or work in question.
[U]DEFINE: [/U]Definitions call for concise, clear, authoritative meanings. Details are not required, but boundaries or limitations of the definition should be cited. Keep in mind the class to which a thing belongs and whatever differentiates the particular object from all others in the class.
[U]DIAGRAM, and ILLUSTRATE:[/U] Present a drawing chart, plan, or graphic representation in your answer. You may be expected to label the diagram or add a brief explanation or description.
[U]DISCUSS:[/U] Examine, analyze carefully, and present detailed considerations pro and con regarding the problems or items involved. Often found in essays.
[U]EVALUATE:[/U] Present a careful appraisal of the problem, stressing both advantages and limitations. Evaluation implies authoritative and, to a lesser degree, personal appraisal of both contributions and limitations
[U]EXPLAIN, RELATE: [/U]Clarify and interpret the material you present. State the "how" or "why," reconcile differences in opinion or experimental results, and state causes if possible. In brief, tell how it all happened.
[U]JUSTIFY, PROVE:[/U] To justify your answer, provide factual evidence or logical reasons. In such an answer, evidence should be presented in convincing form. Establish your answer with certainty by evaluating and citing experimental evidence or by logical reasoning.
[U]LIST, ENUMERATE:[/U] Present an itemized series or tabulation. Be concise.
[U]OUTLINE:[/U] Give main points and essential supplementary materials, omitting minor details, and present the information in a systematic arrangement or classification.
[U]SUMMARIZE: [/U]Give the main points or facts in condensed form. Omit details, illustrations and examples.
[U]TRACE:[/U] Give a description of progress, historical sequence, or development from the point of origin. Such narratives may call for probing or deductions.

Bibliography
Deese, James and Ellin K. Deese. How To Study (3rd ed). New York: McGraw-Hill, Inc., 1979.
Examination Skills and Techniques. Lincoln, Nebraska: Cliff Notes, Inc., 1968.
Millman, Jason and Walter Pauk. How to Take Tests. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1969.
Pauk, Walter. How To Study In College (2nd Ed). Boston: Houghton Mifflin Co., 1974.

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