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[U][B][CENTER]The position of women in a society is an index of its civilization[/CENTER][/B][/U]
[U]outline[/U]
1)[B]Woman as an integral member of society[/B]
a) The creature spiritually equal to man
b) Her role in survival of human race and civilization
2)[B]Definition of civilized society[/B]
The society having following traits
a) Equality
b) Justice
c) Tolerance
d) Freedom of expression
e) Respect
3) [B]Direct relationship between women's status and civilization in society[/B]
4) [B]Low social status of women leads to uncivilized society[/B]
i) Proof from pre Islamic Arab era
a) Barbarian society burying women alive
b) Inequality towards women regarding right of education
c) Unjust society denying freedom of expression for women
d) Unjust society snatching the property of women
ii) Proof from pre enlightenment English era
a) Superstitious society stigmatizing women
b) maltreatment to women lead to savagery
c) lack of respectable employment opportunities
5)[B] negligence towards women lead to the emergence of uncivilized society[/B]
a) no social progress
b) decline in human development indices
c) erosion of human sentiments(love, peace, tolerance)
6) [B]securing women's position gives rise to civilized society[/B]
i) proof from Islamic era
a)divine guidance regarding women
b) practice of holy prophet(P.B.U.H)
c) civilized society gave respect to women
d) gave them share in property showing justice
e) allowed them freedom of expression showing equality
f) allowed them good employment opportunities
7) [B]social emancipation ensures positive role of women[/B]
8) [B]equal status of both genders guarantees progressive society[/B]
9)[B] conclusion[/B]

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