Sportswomen as new ambassador to the soft image of pakistan
 

CE-14 was my first attempt and i havent prepared the essay paper but i attempted Sportswomen as the new ambassador to project the soft image of pakistan,though i dont rememember exactly but i can present the outline of my essay as i attempted,will be grateful if you can respond to this...
OUTLINE:
1:Pakistan is not having a soft image(in this i tried to explain why pakistan is not having a soft image by stating the violation of different types of human rights.)
2; what is soft image (here i had explained the soft image in international community according to the charter of basic human rights of UNO.
3; Women rights and Rights to play sports (here i had explained that both women rights and to play sports is among the thirty basic human rights devised by the UNO,AND FURTHUR i had made the foundation of my essay over here that countries where basic human rights are exercised are graded and look as soft imaged countries and had elaborated that women had always been neglected and igonored one way or the other way by every society and women rights and their right to play sports is very much prone to be fulfilled and the countries where these rights are exercised signify that others must be fullfilled and taken care off......then from this generalization i came to pakistan scenario and supported the topic
4..Sportswomen in pakistan and their contribution and the image inflicted to the globe
5..Maria toor a Waziristani squash player (here i explained that waziristan on one hand is notrious in the world for the menace of terrorism over there and on the other hand maria toor has shown the brighter face of waziristan and pakistan to the globe by winning laurels from the other parts of the world
7..Sana meer pakistan women cricket team captain...
8..then i had given the suggestions how to improve women sports which inturn would make pakistan as soft imaged country...
(All the seniors kindly if you can comment over this and let me know whether i had taken the right approach to the topic or not)
thanks..

Nice effort dr lee. Few international women sports persons examples like serena williams, maria sharapova, sania mirza etc would have added extra milleage.

[QUOTE=Raja Bahar;759288]Nice effort dr lee. Few international women sports persons examples like serena williams, maria sharapova, sania mirza etc would have added extra milleage.[/QUOTE]

yes dear u are right,i was short of time as i wasted first 45 minutes on making outline on great nations win without fighting,then changed my mind as i was nt happy from that outline even after 45 minutes of workout.
and then i preferred to give time to the concept of essay rather than the examples.

Dr Lee here goes mine outlines. Have a look and do comment kindly.

[B]Women Sports-persons as New Ambassadors of the Soft Image of Pakistan[/B]


Outlines:

(i): Introduction
(ii): Sports in modern world
(iii): Women's' participation in world sports
(iv): Women sports-persons as ambassadors
(v): Women sports-persons of Pakistan and the world
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan and the world
(vii): Sports opportunities for women in Pakistan
(viii): Role of women sports-persons in the world
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan
(xi): Problems that Pakistan is facing at the moment
(xii) Image of Pakistan in the world
(xiii) How can the soft image of Pakistan be developed?
(xiv) Conclusion

[QUOTE=doc lee;759291]yes dear [COLOR="Red"]u[/COLOR] are right,[COLOR="Red"]i [/COLOR]was short of time as [COLOR="Red"]i[/COLOR] wasted first 45 minutes on making outline on great nations win without fighting,then changed my mind as[COLOR="Red"] i [/COLOR]was [COLOR="Red"]nt[/COLOR] happy from that outline even after 45 minutes of workout.
and then i preferred to give time to the concept of essay rather than the examples.[/QUOTE]

Avoid regular use of "Net speak" or other "cute" grammar or spelling (For example: writing "R U a woman?" instead of "Are You a woman?"). Also, always write the 'I' in capitals when writing it alone ..

[QUOTE=doc lee;759106]CE-14 was my first attempt and i havent prepared the essay paper but i attempted Sportswomen as the new ambassador to project the soft image of pakistan,though i dont rememember exactly but i can present the outline of my essay as i attempted,will be grateful if you can respond to this...
OUTLINE:
1:Pakistan is not having a soft image(in this i tried to explain why pakistan is not having a soft image by stating the violation of different types of human rights.)
2; what is soft image (here i had explained the soft image in international community according to the charter of basic human rights of UNO.
3; Women rights and Rights to play sports (here i had explained that both women rights and to play sports is among the thirty basic human rights devised by the UNO,AND FURTHUR i had made the foundation of my essay over here that countries where basic human rights are exercised are graded and look as soft imaged countries and had elaborated that women had always been neglected and igonored one way or the other way by every society and women rights and their right to play sports is very much prone to be fulfilled and the countries where these rights are exercised signify that others must be fullfilled and taken care off......then from this generalization i came to pakistan scenario and supported the topic
4..Sportswomen in pakistan and their contribution and the image inflicted to the globe
5..Maria toor a Waziristani squash player (here i explained that waziristan on one hand is notrious in the world for the menace of terrorism over there and on the other hand maria toor has shown the brighter face of waziristan and pakistan to the globe by winning laurels from the other parts of the world
7..Sana meer pakistan women cricket team captain...
8..then i had given the suggestions how to improve women sports which inturn would make pakistan as soft imaged country...
(All the seniors kindly if you can comment over this and let me know whether i had taken the right approach to the topic or not)
thanks..[/QUOTE]
its impressive Doc lee, i think you took a right approach. By the way how did you explain the soft image and "soft image in international community according to the charter of basic human rights of UNO" ?? can you kindly share it ?

[QUOTE=Raja Bahar;759631]Dr Lee here goes mine outlines. Have a look and do comment kindly.

[B]Women Sports-persons as New Ambassadors of the Soft Image of Pakistan[/B]


Outlines:

(i): Introduction
(ii): Sports in modern world
(iii): Women's' participation in world sports
(iv): Women sports-persons as ambassadors
(v): Women sports-persons of Pakistan and the world
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan and the world
(vii): Sports opportunities for women in Pakistan
(viii): Role of women sports-persons in the world
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan
(xi): Problems that Pakistan is facing at the moment
(xii) Image of Pakistan in the world
(xiii) How can the soft image of Pakistan be developed?
(xiv) Conclusion[/QUOTE]
You too have made nice effort,you had written much on sports unlike me,i did write on sports but not to this extent,i have emphasized on the concept of soft image and then co related it with the sports,like i mentioned earlier that i didnt go for many examples of sportswomen,anyhow now the ball is in examineer court and lets hope he be kind to all of us :)

[QUOTE=water;759761]its impressive Doc lee, i think you took a right approach. By the way how did you explain the soft image and "soft image in international community according to the charter of basic human rights of UNO" ?? can you kindly share it ?[/QUOTE]

Dear as the essay wanted to show the soft image to the outside world,so i explained that UNO is the international body which deals with international issues and indicators,and according to the UNO soft imaged countries are those who exercise most of the 30 basic human rights declared by the said organization,and in these 30 basic human rights there comes women rights and rights to play sports...this way i elaborated.i hope and wish it makes sence.

[QUOTE=Raja Bahar;759631]Dr Lee here goes mine outlines. Have a look and do comment kindly.

[B]Women Sports-persons as New Ambassadors of the Soft Image of Pakistan[/B]


Outlines:

(i): Introduction
(ii): Sports in modern world
(iii): Women's' participation in world sports
(iv): Women sports-persons as ambassadors
(v): Women sports-persons of Pakistan and the world
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan and the world
(vii): Sports opportunities for women in Pakistan
(viii): Role of women sports-persons in the world
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan
(xi): Problems that Pakistan is facing at the moment
(xii) Image of Pakistan in the world
(xiii) How can the soft image of Pakistan be developed?
(xiv) Conclusion[/QUOTE]
my outline was more or less the same as yours .. i believe i mentioned Problems faced by Pakistan much earlier ,,, and then moved down to the depth and the soft image bla bla bla :p

I wrote on the similar topic.
Essay was related to How sportswomen are creating soft image? we had to answer this Soft image was the main target ...look my outline...i donot remeber the whole but it was like this:
1.Women sportsperson representing an egalitarian society
2.Representing a tolerant society.
3.women sportspersons inspiring other womens.
4.Presenting a new Pakistan
5.Need of the softer image

in these headliept that i presented the concept that how image of Pakistan has been tarnished and how beautifully our womens in sports have created a new,soft,better image through their hardwork,determination,endurance and backing by Pakistani people
i am no body to judge essays but its my perspective.
Best of luck

[QUOTE=futuristic;761453]I wrote on the similar topic.
Essay was related to How sportswomen are creating soft image? we had to answer this Soft image was the main target ...look my outline...i donot remeber the whole but it was like this:
1.Women sportsperson representing an egalitarian society
2.Representing a tolerant society.
3.women sportspersons inspiring other womens.
4.Presenting a new Pakistan
5.Need of the softer image

in these headliept that i presented the concept that how image of Pakistan has been tarnished and how beautifully our womens in sports have created a new,soft,better image through their hardwork,determination,endurance and backing by Pakistani people
i am no body to judge essays but its my perspective.
Best of luck[/QUOTE]
Dear futuristic i agree that your essay is hundred percent related. But will you please tell me your word count. Because by restricting yourself to only this you cant write more than 1000 words..