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If i have to write this essay
i will write instead of cause= factors responsible for terrorism instead of effects= grave implications of terrorism instead of solutions= Quick fix of terrorism try to use synonyms it will bring beauty in your essay. Additionally try to start paragraph with topic sentence and end with concluding sentence. |
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mysterious me (Wednesday, October 29, 2014) |
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And Allah Knows, while you know not. (Al-Quran) Last edited by Z Bokhari; Wednesday, October 29, 2014 at 08:22 PM. Reason: merged |
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Aoa,First of all i am a beginner so treat me like one
Well what i have to say is a bit different and it goes that for eg someone opt for this topic "Extremism the bane of our society" is it mandatory for him/her to follow the theme as said couldnt He go like The bane is actually the injustice, the divided and scattered system of education, poverty (i think these are major things) that had eventually lead to extremisim whatver its kind is. So Iam saying that someone could go on that theme that extremism is okay the current main issue but but the real problems are those which have been for 60 years and has led to exrtrsm.So we should address those so extremism will be gone itself mostly. Hope u understand it. Regards |
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[QUOTE=mysterious me;774498]Thanks for the valuable suggestions. By the way i did try to give the topic sentence to every paragraph, so it need more work maybe
I said Topic as well as concluding sentence its very important for proper paragraph and use transitional words to bring coherence between sentences and paragraphs.
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mysterious me (Thursday, October 30, 2014) |
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keenTHEquest (Thursday, October 30, 2014) |
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Its like that
extremism is , okay the current ... |
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