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Although it seems risky but i appreciate you. May be your essay completely encompasses all relevant material instead of irrelevant.
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Yes ! 3.25 sheets in other words.

I don't have joint hand writing and give spaces while writing. There might be maximum 120 words on one leaf.

My outline was of just five lines.

1. Introduction
2. Why do Great Nations win without fighting.
3. How to Great Nations win without fighting.
4. When do Great Nations win without fighting.
5. Conclusion

I am 99% sure that i did not do any spelling or grammar mistake. I used very natural and simple English. Didn't use high vocabulary but decorated my essay with transitional words. In-fact, while preparing for essay, i focused only on my spellings and the usage of transitional words.
You did it right. Let me tell you I did the same in CE-2011.

Topic: Disaster Management & Govt. Preparedness

Outline:
Introduction
1. Why disaster should be managed?
2. How disaster can be managed?
3. Which types of disasters are manageable?
4. Govt. (Pakistan's) Preparedness
5. Recommendations
6. Conclusion

It was a 13-pages (6 & 1/2 Sheets) essay, +-1600 words.
My diction was also simple, tried to remain focused.
As long as you remain relevant, examiner spares you.

That's why I am here today.


Regards,
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Yes ! 3.25 sheets in other words.

I don't have joint hand writing and give spaces while writing. There might be maximum 120 words on one leaf.

My outline was of just five lines.

1. Introduction
2. Why do Great Nations win without fighting.
3. How to Great Nations win without fighting.
4. When do Great Nations win without fighting.
5. Conclusion

I am 99% sure that i did not do any spelling or grammar mistake. I used very natural and simple English. Didn't use high vocabulary but decorated my essay with transitional words. In-fact, while preparing for essay, i focused only on my spellings and the usage of transitional words.
Subhan'ALLAH. Masha'ALLAH

That's certainly commendable

I can comprehend that you have written free grammatical mistake English but I couldn't digest your outlines... Well brother allow me to say fortune has shunned its feathers in-front of you and favored you, indeed.

Best of luck and stay blessed.
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Well I also attempted the same topic and I got 45 marks. My outline was also a simple one.
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Hahahaha. That's great dear. Paper checker boht rehmdil the essay kay koi, ya to paper check e ni hue hain
dear brother essay liknay me heading likni hoty hy ya ni...direct new paragraph start kerty hy
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dear brother essay liknay me heading likni hoty hy ya ni...direct new paragraph start kerty hy
No heading, first you have to draw outlines, then direct attempt it from introduction to conclusion without any heading and you are done
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Great ! but i think that's just sheer luck
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You did it right. Let me tell you I did the same in CE-2011.

Topic: Disaster Management & Govt. Preparedness

Outline:
Introduction
1. Why disaster should be managed?
2. How disaster can be managed?
3. Which types of disasters are manageable?
4. Govt. (Pakistan's) Preparedness
5. Recommendations
6. Conclusion

It was a 13-pages (6 & 1/2 Sheets) essay, +-1600 words.
My diction was also simple, tried to remain focused.
As long as you remain relevant, examiner spares you.

That's why I am here today.


Regards,


Simply smart work !
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6.5 sheets produce that type of material which is suitable for more than 15 sheets.Mostly peoole saying that few words are best,if these few words are written with best material,definitly,success sure...
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The theme of essay is also matters.
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