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law grinds the poor and rich man rules the law

Introduction:
Defining the poor and the rich
Double standards of word powers
1. No accountability of US for violating international laws
2. No Trials for Israel War crimes against Palestinian
3. Geneva convention violation by world powers
4. Violation of NPT
5. Misuse of Veto Power
How the unprivileged class is exploited in our society
1. Feudalism
2. immunity of Prime minister and President from laws
3. Misogyny
4. Tax paid by the poor mostly
Consequences
1. clash of classes
2. social revolution
3. Division within societies
4. social awakening
Recommendation
1. Role of UN
2. Role of ICC
3. Political will
4. Effective Laws
Conclusion

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Dear,

You have digressed after few good lines.. The beginning is OK but since this is the real essence of the essay, you must drop few points beneath your idea of 'the poor and the rich'.

Like Poor and Rich individuals
Poor and rich societies
Poor and rich nations

Then try to explain how law gives these 'rich' entities liberties and how it represses the 'poor' ... Better stay focused on your definition of the rich and the poor.

Then, you can argue as to why it happens OR even better, discuss some contemporary issues. Here you can give your favourite example of USA,,,But you must put some more example.. USA is not the only rich entity.. and then also mention the laws that give USA such leisure.

Then you can discuss why it happens, and how it can be extirpated..

How the unprivileged class is exploited in our society ?? Here you added some good lines..you can add more...

Plus the effect part is also relevant..
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Thank you for your comments can you kindly share your outline for this essay
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