Really helpfull, af anyone taken it seriously.

I did attempt this topic in today's paper. Below is the overview of my outline.

Outline:

Thesis Statement:
Illeteracy is one of the root causes of an unsuccessful democracy.

1) Introduction:
a. Meaning and purpose of democratic system of governance.
b. How illeteracy affects the democratic setup.

2) How democracy is helping modern countries achieve holistic progress?
a. Government of people
b. Highly educated politicians
c. Masses are educated and well informed.
d. People are working towards a common goal
e. Harmony among national interests and political motives
f. Effective accountability
g. Coherency

3) Developed countries with higher literacy rate and centuries old democracies progressing at exponential growth.

4) How illeteracy affects progress of a developing country?
a.
b.
c.
d.
e.
f.

5) Developing countries with high illiteracy rate facing issues with their democratic setups and stuck in one crisis or another.

6) Conclusion
a. Democracy - helping countries with higher literacy rates to progress holistically.
b. Illeteracy - a challenge for the developing countries with democratic form of governance.

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I wrote on this topic but could only manage 1600+ plus words. What is the minimum limit to be on a safe side?

Statement : Democracy is a popular governing system that ensures human development and eradicates illiteracy.Although, weak democracy in Pakistan failed to increse literacy.

Outline:
A) Introduction

B) Under democracy current situation of literacy:
1) citizens are deprived of basic right
2) Article 25(a); yet to implement
3) lliteracy rate decline 60% to 58%
4) Human development Index 150

C) Impacts of illiteracy on democratic system:
1) political unrest
2) set-back of economy
3) social degeneration
4) Rise of radicalism and extremism

D) Factors that increase illiteracy under democracy:
1) lack of political will
2) no interest of judiciary
3) lack of infrastructure
4) phantom schools and teachers
5) patriarchal society
6) religious manipulation
7) low budget

E)Way forward to strengthen democray and uplift education :
1) strategic vision
2) ensure Article 25
3) special parliamentary committee
4) uniformity of education
5) promote girls education
6) control mardsa system
7)

F) conclusion

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It seems quite relevant and precise according to the demand of topic and easily defendable.
thank you

Hello Junaid. Can you please share your points in this part

4) How illiteracy affects progress of a developing country?
a.
b.
c.
d.
e.
f.

Also, what in your opinion was the nature of the essay, i.e., argumentative, descriptive et cetera?

Is there anyone who attempted this topic and passed the exam?

very good

here is my outline plz evaluate

1) Introduction
A literate electorate ensures the well-functioning of democracy.

2) Essentials of democracy
3) Democarcy and illiteracy with relevance to millenium development goals of the UN.

4) Merits of literate electorate to democracy
a) a literate electorate knows the value of its vote
b) it holds its representatives accountable during elections.
c) it evaluates the manifestos of political parties while casting vote.
d) it raises voice forcivil and political rights in a peaceful manner.
e) it is a bullwark against corruption and ensures transparency.
f) it prevents non-democratic forces to trample on and crush the system.

5) Disadvantages of illiteracy to democracy.
a) it is unaware of the worth of its vote.
b) it is carried away by demagogues and rhetoric.
c) it prefers vested interest while casting vote.
d) it fails to raise voice for human rights.
e) an illiterate electorate cannot prevent non-democratic forces and dynastical rules.

6) A case study of pakistan with relevance to democracy and illiteracy.

7) suggestions to improve literacy rate for the well-functioning of democracy.
a) political will is required for raising literacy rate.
b) Allocation of 6% of GDP for education.
c) Universal curriculum in all provinces.
d) Enrollment of all out of school children.

8) Conclusion

the examiner failed me by giving 10 marks.