War On Terrororism

[Mudasir Rasool]

War on Terrorism is contributing towards growing abuse of Human Rights

Outlines:-
o Introduction
o War on terrorism
o Loss of Human livings
o Arbitrary Detention
o Extraordinary Rendition
o Denial of right of petition
o Repressive laws
o Discrimination
o Invasion of privacy
o Sexual harassment
o Loss of Education and Health System
o Loss of livings and Infrastructure in Pakistan
o An Alternative Idea
o Recommendations


“We must remember that any oppression, injustice or hatred is wedge designed to attack our civilization”

Franklin D. Roosevelt


Introduction:-
War on terrorism that began in 2001 is proved tremendously painful for millions of people across the world especially in Afghanistan, Iraq, Syria and Pakistan. War on terrorism is contributing towards growing abuse of human rights. War on terrorism is contributing in loss of human livings, torture, detention, denial of freedom of speech and sexual harassment. It also violates international boundaries of states on name of just saving humans from bloody terrorists. America is violating privacy of different states from many years.

War on terrorism:-
War on terrorism is not a simple kind of war. Because in this case enemy terrorism has no limits, boundaries and it does not respect international laws. So, while tackling with such kind of enemy one should have to take steps carefully. Because if we involve ourselves in this war, then we have to take care of human rights. Terrorists and other human traffickers don’t respect humans and they choose such weak points to get their dangerous aims.

Loss of Human livings:-
But if we study consequences of internationally war on terrorism, then we come to know that it violates human rights on extreme level. According to ‘Browns University’s Watson Institute of International Studies’, due to this war on terror more 350,000 people lost their lives directly and millions of people who are effected due to this war. Due to this war millions of people lost their houses, luggage and children. Millions of people take shelter in their neighbor countries and live their lives under pathetic conditions.

Arbitrary Detention:-
One of alarming truth of this war on terror is arbitrary detentions. World powers like America use arbitrary detentions to hide prisoners in them from rest of the world. Living standards in these jails is worse; prisoners have no access to common necessary daily life things. One such type of jails is in Afghanistan, which are called ‘Black Jails’ and they were remained hide from international world and against Geneva pact. Because these jails are not like for humans livings.

Extraordinary Rendition:-
Another illegality of this war on terror is extraordinary rendition. American agencies like CIA first made black jails to hide terrorists from international laws and then in order to make their propaganda's more secure they shift terrorists from one place to another. So, in order prove themselves innocent they transfer prisoners from one state to another state.

Denial of right of petition:-
Another pathetic fact about this war on terror is that they denied detainee rights to appeal for justice. In this way they are violating their own established laws. When international organizations see about conditions of detainees, then they came to know that most of the detainees are innocent and they are kept under any self –claimed threats.

Repressive laws:-
In order to fulfill their aims, USA and its allies started pressurizing other under developed state to help them in war on terror. USA stressed on this thing to make oppressive laws to tackle with this terror which is actually in minds of USA and its allies. For example ‘Hosni Mubarak’ in Egypt used these oppressive laws by increasing its force strength, banning on freedom of expression. When international organizations asks questions about these laws, then USA hide themselves under veil of war on terror claiming that everything is right in war and love.

Discrimination:-
Another most critical issue in war on terror is discrimination between different sects, races and religions. For example in America black people are considered as terrorist and they are treated in distinguish way than White people. Similarly, due to this war on terror people started negative thinking about Muslims and claiming about every Muslim that he or she is a terrorist or supporting terror. Due to this Muslims in all over the world especially in US can’t live independently and sword of terrorism is linking on their heads.

Invasion of privacy:-
USA is violating privacy of international borders only on the name of war on terror. Although every country is giving data bout suspected people to USA by hiding their names, passport and other identities, which is according to international laws. But America does not trust on its own allies and it stealing data of its ally states and again hide itself behind wall of war on terrorism, which is one of the biggest jokes of 21st century.

Sexual harassment:-
One of the most shameful acts for human beings which USA and its allies are using to interrogate is sexual harassment of both men and women. But international organizations are silent on this harassment of innocent people, because USA always used its veto power to achieve its aims. It is fact that there jails like ‘Guantanamo Bay’ and ‘Abu Gharib Jail’ in Afghanistan, in which personnel of American agency ‘CIA’ uses sexual harassment with girls and women to investigate them.

Loss of Education and Health System:-
War on terror leaves its hazardous impacts on education and health systems in Iraq and Syria. If we see towards history of Iraq and Syria under so called autocrats before American invasion on these states on name of war on terror, then health and education in that time was very good. Along with this situation in Syria and Iraq, if we see condition of Afghanistan although it was not good before American invasion. But situation of Afghanistan is worse than ever in its history.

Loss of livings and Infrastructure in Pakistan:-
Now moving towards situation and loss of human livings in our beloved country Pakistan, then we came to know that as being American ally in this war on terror, we face more loss economically and socially as compare to any other state. Because as being an under developed state with no more any assets like Iraq has mineral oil, but when we involve ourselves in others war on terrors its consequences are before us. Now Pakistan is considered as terrorist state neglecting our services in war on terror.

Pakistan lost more 50,000 livings directly due to war on terror from 2004 onward. Our tribal areas face more losses than other areas of Pakistan, because they are near to Afghanistan border and any change in Afghanistan directly affect our tribal areas. These areas were initially backward, because during British govt. on Hindustan they neglected these tribal areas. Now due to this war on terror, it left many hazardous effects in these areas.

Education and health systems in tribal areas of Pakistan are not present. People of these areas are living in stone ages in this modern world of 21st century. America who is called itself survivor of human’s civilizations and rights should have to look towards pathetic conditions of these people. As Pakistani if we want to win this war on terror, then we should have to ensure these people that they respectable citizens of this country and they are entitled to equal rights as others.

An Alternative Idea:-
Now if ‘War on terror’ is not giving favorable results, then what we have to do. Although it is a good strategy to fight against these terrorists and collect information about them. But if we look inside techniques which USA and its allies usually used to tackle with this terrorism, then we come to know that should have to revise their strategy towards this war on terror. Because only though war they can’t get favorable results. So, they should have to treat with suspects under human rights and international established boundaries. They should have to close black jails like ‘Guantanamo Bay’, stop sexual harassment, invasion of privacy and discrimination among different sects.

Recommendations:-
At the end if international powers especially USA move towards in war on terror humanly and they also take care of effected people, then people of that era will help them and they can get success in their ambitions. Otherwise history will revise itself and its results will be more dangerous than ever.

“Injustice anywhere is threat to justice everywhere “
Martin Luther King Jr.

[Siddique]

i think you should first define in what context human rights are abused and the explain further, and if your second heading start with this point it would be awesome for the reader;
in the broader sense terrorism is defined as "the unofficial or unauthorized use of violence and intimidation in the pursuit of political aims." Because in this case enemy terrorism has no limits, boundaries and it does not respect international laws. So, while tackling with such kind of enemy one should have to take steps carefully. Because if we involve ourselves in this war, then we have to take care of human rights. Terrorists and other human traffickers don’t respect humans and they choose such weak points to get their dangerous aims.

and last but not least
in introduction: this quotation of george bush
'we don not create terrorism by fighting the terrorist. we invite terrorism by ignoring them '

[faisal4pro]

Precisely good! and in fact a little precise too!

[Towards Success]

Your headings should be sub- headings of
How war on terrorism abusing human rights
War on terrorism
Introduction
War on terror
Historical perspective
Current scenario: a sad picture
E.g Iraq , desirability in afghanistan pakistan etc
Players of war on terror
How war on terrorism humiliating human rights?
# Illegal detention
#Black laws
#Destruction of infrastructure
___Education , cultural
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_____
_____
Solution or suggestions to stop humiliation of human rights
...
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...conclusion

[IS Baloch]

can we put heading in the main body of essay

[Monk]

Originally Posted by IS Baloch

can we put heading in the main body of essay

Never

[Aamish Bhatti]

Originally Posted by Mudasir Rasool

War on Terrorism is contributing towards growing abuse of Human Rights

Introduction:-
War on terrorism that began in 2001 is proved tremendously painful for millions of people across the world especially in Afghanistan, Iraq, Syria and Pakistan. War on terrorism is contributing towards growing abuse of human rights. War on terrorism is contributing in loss of human livings, torture, detention, denial of freedom of speech and sexual harassment. It also violates international boundaries of states on name of just saving humans from bloody terrorists. America is violating privacy of different states from many years.

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Brother I am not an expert but I can feel that there is room for improvement. Two mistakes that I have noticed are weak opening sentence and lack of connection between sentences.

Seniors can better advise you what should be the opening sentence of this essay.