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Seniors please give a read to my essay outline and introductory and conclusion paragraphs. Criticism will be heartily welcomed.

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
• Introduction
Dalliance leads to consistent failures. Inveighing life starts from here. Since my childhood I’ve been hearing that “Life means struggle”. It seems like a pipe-dream that life will always offer and reward you lavishly and with success. Always expecting complaisance from life may be or can be considered as someone’s naivety. Often times in real world and in the race of life, life gives us lemons. Lemonade in life is not our heirloom. It always does not knock on our door and present his highness.
Whenever life gives lemon, I have to notable person with commendable qualities to make lemonade of the lemon which I have been given and then enjoy the joyous taste that lemonade contentedly. Making “Invincible” as “vincible” makes such a person a “Hero” and distinguishes him from others.
Defining the word “Blood” in real world rather than scientific world means hardship, struggle and mettlesomeness.
“Anything worthy in life is achieved by love or by blood”
Achieving the lemonade in life or turning the lemon to lemonade demands resilience, endurance and struggle. The life, then, implores the lemon to turn into lemonade.
• Bludgeoning of chances
• Treating disasters as Triumphs
• Fortitude in making lemonade
• History of White house and servitude and making of lemonade
• Life of different people, lemons of their lives and making lemonade
1. Mandela
2. Brain Acton
3. Hugh Herr
4. J.K Rolling
• Wretched failure to palatial success
• Requirements of lemonade making
• Be Master of Fate
• Conclusion
The sturdy lemons of life are when stupefied results in stupendous lemonade. The rumpus of life often makes a man elusive enough that he forgets how to make lemonade of lemon. He, in fact, does not even try to make lemonade of the lemon in hand.

Reinvigoration of someone feelings and nihilism to failure turns lemon to lemonade. Than man then rises like air. Making lemonade of the lemon acquires every namby-pamby person to be determinant enough. The sullen silence from lemons of life must not let be the master. It’s called courageousness that turns lemon to lemonade and decides one’s fate.
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Bravo! Nice outline yet i feel you have incessantly overused the words "lemon" and "lemonade". Reading your outline, i felt you took these words way too literally at so many places, which affects your overall expression negatively. The proverb just sends out a message that you have to pick up and paint a picture of our lives keeping that in mind.
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Seniors please give a read to my essay outline and introductory and conclusion paragraphs. Criticism will be heartily welcomed.

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
• Introduction
Dalliance leads to consistent failures. Inveighing life starts from here. Since my childhood I’ve been hearing that “Life means struggle”. It seems like a pipe-dream that life will always offer and reward you lavishly and with success. Always expecting complaisance from life may be or can be considered as someone’s naivety. Often times in real world and in the race of life, life gives us lemons. Lemonade in life is not our heirloom. It always does not knock on our door and present his highness.
Whenever life gives lemon, I have to notable person with commendable qualities to make lemonade of the lemon which I have been given and then enjoy the joyous taste that lemonade contentedly. Making “Invincible” as “vincible” makes such a person a “Hero” and distinguishes him from others.
Defining the word “Blood” in real world rather than scientific world means hardship, struggle and mettlesomeness.
“Anything worthy in life is achieved by love or by blood”
Achieving the lemonade in life or turning the lemon to lemonade demands resilience, endurance and struggle. The life, then, implores the lemon to turn into lemonade.
• Bludgeoning of chances
• Treating disasters as Triumphs
• Fortitude in making lemonade
• History of White house and servitude and making of lemonade
• Life of different people, lemons of their lives and making lemonade
1. Mandela
2. Brain Acton
3. Hugh Herr
4. J.K Rolling
• Wretched failure to palatial success
• Requirements of lemonade making
• Be Master of Fate
• Conclusion
The sturdy lemons of life are when stupefied results in stupendous lemonade. The rumpus of life often makes a man elusive enough that he forgets how to make lemonade of lemon. He, in fact, does not even try to make lemonade of the lemon in hand.

Reinvigoration of someone feelings and nihilism to failure turns lemon to lemonade. Than man then rises like air. Making lemonade of the lemon acquires every namby-pamby person to be determinant enough. The sullen silence from lemons of life must not let be the master. It’s called courageousness that turns lemon to lemonade and decides one’s fate.

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First it is necessary to understand the topic.Here the first part of proverbial phrase is,''when life gives you lemon'' it clearly means what we can call as ill-luck,fate, destiny or natural defects.For example some infants are born with birth-defects,or someone sustaine a major injury in life,so the life gave them lemons.now, lemonade means when they mould that particular defect for their benefit.Dale Carnegie used that phrase for a girl who wanted to become a singer but she has big teeth.he observed that when the girl was singing,she was trying to hide her teeth.which made her voice unpleasant.when carnegie talked to her and told her that it was alright to sing with big teeth.then she bacame a great singer.
carnegie also gave an example of a war veteran who got a hole in his forehead by a bullet.he made this defect as a source of income by displaying some acrobatics at circus.

your examples here are irrelevant.Nelson mandela was born in royal family,he studied politics and delibrately came in politics,he was leader even before his jail term.Brian Acton,the developer of whattsapp, studied from stanford university,world's fifth top ranked university.Hugh herr was born-blessed,with exceptional athletic skills.J.K rowling was writer before her OCD and crisis in her life.

the difference between preserverence and making lemonade is subtle.All the above mentioned personalities have struggled really really hard but they life did not gave them lemons and even they were blessed.
Honestly,the examiner is looking for very basic mistakes in our essays.you digressed an inch and you are out of the race.
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When life gives you lemon, make lemonade.
1. Introduction.
Life is a name of vicissitude. It is not always a smooth sailing because sometimes life brings upon us storms of difficulties from which only an optimist and brave can get out and those who feel afraid are forever drown in this storm. An optimist takes this as a challenge and with courage he takes control of his destiny and takes it to prosperity.
2. Positive mindset a hallmark of success in life.
3. Courage and endurance to tackle the difficulties.
4. Cope with physical and mental deficiencies.
5. Prime examples of people who made the best of their situation in the face of adversity and of great people caught in worse positions and getting triumph out of them I.e.
• John Milton
• Homer
• Stephen Hawking.
6. Take Hold of the reigns of your life and take it to greatness.
7. No escapism but challenge the difficulties.
8. Contribute to the development of your “self” and equip yourself with all the necessary assets to fight back the ordeals of life.
9. Stay away from negativity and be honest to yourself.
10. Conclusion.
Errors or other mistakes are regretted if any. This is my first attempt of this kind. Criticism will be welcomed as well.
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Seniors please give a read to my essay outline and introductory and conclusion paragraphs. Criticism will be heartily welcomed.

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
• Introduction
Dalliance leads to consistent failures. Inveighing life starts from here. Since my childhood I’ve been hearing that “Life means struggle”. It seems like a pipe-dream that life will always offer and reward you lavishly and with success. Always expecting complaisance from life may be or can be considered as someone’s naivety. Often times in real world and in the race of life, life gives us lemons. Lemonade in life is not our heirloom. It always does not knock on our door and present his highness.
Whenever life gives lemon, I have to notable person with commendable qualities to make lemonade of the lemon which I have been given and then enjoy the joyous taste that lemonade contentedly. Making “Invincible” as “vincible” makes such a person a “Hero” and distinguishes him from others.
Defining the word “Blood” in real world rather than scientific world means hardship, struggle and mettlesomeness.
“Anything worthy in life is achieved by love or by blood”
Achieving the lemonade in life or turning the lemon to lemonade demands resilience, endurance and struggle. The life, then, implores the lemon to turn into lemonade.
• Bludgeoning of chances
• Treating disasters as Triumphs
• Fortitude in making lemonade
• History of White house and servitude and making of lemonade
• Life of different people, lemons of their lives and making lemonade
1. Mandela
2. Brain Acton
3. Hugh Herr
4. J.K Rolling
• Wretched failure to palatial success
• Requirements of lemonade making
• Be Master of Fate
• Conclusion
The sturdy lemons of life are when stupefied results in stupendous lemonade. The rumpus of life often makes a man elusive enough that he forgets how to make lemonade of lemon. He, in fact, does not even try to make lemonade of the lemon in hand.

Reinvigoration of someone feelings and nihilism to failure turns lemon to lemonade. Than man then rises like air. Making lemonade of the lemon acquires every namby-pamby person to be determinant enough. The sullen silence from lemons of life must not let be the master. It’s called courageousness that turns lemon to lemonade and decides one’s fate.
In CSS Examination, try to keep the essay simple. Using simple words will make your essay coherent. Otherwise, you have done well the interpretation of the topic.
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