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Half knowledge is a bad thing. - Complete Essay (Please review)
AoA Seniors, Please review my essay. Let me know your suggestion and please do not forget to give me marks out of 100. Thanks in advance.
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wsalam. i am junior .
i think ''A Little knowledge is bad thing'' will be correct to say . i have not read your essay thoroughly but u should have given examples in every paragraph to justify stance .it will make your essay lengthy and attractive. |
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EarlGrey (Wednesday, March 29, 2017) |
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Your flow in expressions are good. But improve your outlines, It probably wont work. Give examples to justify the statement. I am also having half knowledge
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EarlGrey (Wednesday, March 29, 2017) |
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Thank you so much @Whitehulk and @Greenboat for your comments.
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I will keep that in mind and will try to improve my outlines. I have tried to give examples to justify the statements in serveral parts of the essay, but I will review it again for sure. Thank you @Greenboat and do not hesitate to add anything else you have in mind. I will be thankful to you. |
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Greenboat (Wednesday, March 29, 2017) |
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