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Okay so you did not gave much of a thesis statement but you made your point clear. Anyways your main point looks relevant. I wanted to attempt this essay, but i could not comprehend the basic statement of essay - the word 'really' was creating confusion for me. Nonetheless i like your systematic approach. I admire trotsky59's perspective of feminism waves, these were excellent points. Did you discuss 3rd world feminism in the light of economic, social and political issues? If so then your essay looks excellent. Best of luck
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Okay so you did not gave much of a thesis statement but you made your point clear. Anyways your main point looks relevant. I wanted to attempt this essay, but i could not comprehend the basic statement of essay - the word 'really' was creating confusion for me. Nonetheless i like your systematic approach. I admire trotsky59's perspective of feminism waves, these were excellent points. Did you discuss 3rd world feminism in the light of economic, social and political issues? If so then your essay looks excellent. Best of luck
Thank you very much for your evaluation Saniam.
Unfortunately, I didn't discuss third world feminism as such but instead kept focusing on how feminist ideas in general are suitable, or necessary, for third world. The reasons feminism is not considered seriously, how to tackle these and how tackling these will be useful for third world. I did mention social, economic, political reasons feminism in not taken seriously, how to overcome these issues and social, and political, economic, social benefits that would be acquired from considering feminism a third world issue.
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How it be to write in the sense that first world countries have problems.

they have rhetoric for the feminism but actually their women facing much difficulties like rhetoric political power were granted
culture, as source of transmitting knowledge to offspring, has distorted,
heightened stress over weak shoulders of women,
diminishing womanhood qualities,
futile effort for equality ,
as well as used for sexual abuses and harassment.
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feminism is not really a third world issue is totally different topic.Every time topic is given in which you discussed condition of third world countries like women empowerment,social economic condition of women ,gender equality.But this time paper setter directly give topic from first world countries.This question already give cue that this problem is exist in third world countries now you discussed first world countries feminism whose feminist always argued that this problem is exist in third world countries.But third feminism not only protect woman from harrasment,rape but they also give much freedom to women by allowing them in prostitution,allowing of sex with other men.Some of third world feminist even claim that prostitution is symbol of women empowerment.You discussed that by giving so much freedom to women rape is common as there is no need of hijab.If you want to read report on rape in united state then you find its on net.They only hit islamic countries that give all of right to women even before feminist.However as lack of knowledge of islam and injustice in pakistan these laws is not followed that formed in parliment.I found your views on essay is more better than other people.In my view you are on right track and insha ALLAH passed essay.But you must discussed issue of too much freedom and did not take hijab is main cause of rape in western countries that is already provided by islam.Islam give freedom to women but also put some restriction that is benificial for women like taking hijab.Now western countries spread propaganda by using education of islamic teaching that islam create problem for women freedom.Third world feminism create too much vulgarity in first world countries.But i am agree with your views on essay and you mention some of very good point and your outline is better that other people who attempt essay.
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Thank you very much for your reply. I didn't mention third wave feminism or any wave for that matter. I just said that because the overall goal of feminism is positive to achieve equality of women, to empower them, to improve their health, education, economic clout etc it should be considered an issue of third world. I discussed that reason it is not considered an issue in third world is because of misconceptions, religious reasons, economic conditions, etc. While saying that, I did mention that not all the ideas of feminism are suitable for implementation(like third wave feminism) but its overall goal is positive for third world and we can mold ideas of feminism according to our cultural conditions. I mentioned that implementing feminist ideas that are compatible with our religion and culture will improve economic health, political participation, and conditions of a family that serves as building block of society.

This pretty much sums up my essay and about as much as I can remember accurately. I am hesitant to keep adding details that I couldn't have possibly mentioned in the paper because that would mean that I am exaggerating. Looking forward to your comment on this. Thank you again.

feminism is not really a third world issue is totally different topic.Every time topic is given in which you discussed condition of third world countries like women empowerment,social economic condition of women ,gender equality.But this time paper setter directly give topic from first world countries.This question already give cue that this problem is exist in third world countries now you discussed first world countries feminism whose feminist always argued that this problem is exist in third world countries.But third feminism not only protect woman from harrasment,rape but they also give much freedom to women by allowing them in prostitution,allowing of sex with other men.Some of third world feminist even claim that prostitution is symbol of women empowerment.You discussed that by giving so much freedom to women rape is common as there is no need of hijab.If you want to read report on rape in united state then you find its on net.They only hit islamic countries that give all of right to women even before feminist.However as lack of knowledge of islam and injustice in pakistan these laws is not followed that formed in parliment.I found your views on essay is more better than other people.In my view you are on right track and insha ALLAH passed essay.But you must discussed issue of too much freedom and did not take hijab is main cause of rape in western countries that is already provided by islam.Islam give freedom to women but also put some restriction that is benificial for women like taking hijab.Now western countries spread propaganda by using education of islamic teaching that islam create problem for women freedom.They removed restriction of hijab that automatically become main reason for harrasment and rape which feminism want to avoid.Third world feminism create too much vulgarity in first world countries.But i am agree with your views on essay and you mention some of very good point and your outline is better that other people who attempt essay.
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[QUOTE=akkk;1034371]feminism is not really a third world issue is totally different topic.Every time topic is given in which you discussed condition of third world countries like women empowerment,social economic condition of women ,gender equality.But this time paper setter directly give topic from first world countries.This question already give cue that this problem is exist in third world countries now you discussed first world countries feminism whose feminist always argued that this problem is exist in third world countries.But third feminism not only protect woman from harrasment,rape but they also give much freedom to women by allowing them in prostitution,allowing of sex with other men.Some of third world feminist even claim that prostitution is symbol of women empowerment.You discussed that by giving so much freedom to women rape is common as there is no need of hijab.If you want to read report on rape in united state then you find its on net.They only hit islamic countries that give all of right to women even before feminist.However as lack of knowledge of islam and injustice in pakistan these laws is not followed that formed in parliment.I found your views on essay is more better than other people.In my view you are on right track and insha ALLAH passed essay.But you must discussed issue of too much freedom and did not take hijab is main cause of rape in western countries that is already provided by islam.Islam give freedom to women but also put some restriction that is benificial for women like taking hijab.By removing hijab rape is common in western countries.Now western countries spread propaganda by using education of islamic teaching that islam create problem for women freedom.Third world feminism create too much vulgarity in first world countries.But i am agree with your views on essay and you mention some of very good point and your outline is better that other people who attempt essay.
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