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I have tried to make the outline of the above mentioned essay by following the the exactly same pattern, plz have a look. TIA. 1.Epilogue a) Emergence of the Feminist approach/ movement. b) Grievances of the stake holders ( NGOs, IOs and Women rights activists). c)Thesis statement: Feminism is solely a a third world issue. d) Structural violence in the Eastern societies e) Non-constructive role in society. 2. Ground Realities. a) cultural, religious and moral obligations. b) Creation of a lesser status. c) Pre-defined gender roles. d)Women: A prime subject of customes and rituals ( Vanni, Sawara in Pakistan and Satti in India). 3. Pakistani Society: A classic example of Injustice. a) Prioritizing male child over female. b) Unequal educational opportunities. c) Discrimination at profesaional level. d) Different sites and forms of violence. e) Absence of an Academic discipline. 4. Limited representation at National level. a) Lack of political awareness. b) State's negligence towards educational and vocational training. c) Low literacy rate- A real obstacle. d)Strong opposition against legal struggle For the supermacy of Women rights. e) Dilemma of the; Rural-Urban division. 5. Birth of Global Feminism. a) Prevalent situation in the Asian Societies. b) Comparative study Of Eastern and Western values , W.R.T Status of Women. c) Case studies from other Asian states ( India, Bangladesh and etc) d) Rise of several movement for advocacy. 6. Conclusion: a) The established order of TWCs is gender Biased in nature. b) The Mass mentality of developung states is discriminatory towards women. |
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I have tried to make the outline of the essay: "Feminism is not really a third world issue". By following the the exactly same pattern, plz have a look. TIA. 1.Epilogue a) Emergence of the Feminist approach/ movement. b) Grievances of the stake holders ( NGOs, IOs and Women rights activists). c)Thesis statement: Feminism is solely a a third world issue. d) Structural violence in the Eastern societies e) Non-constructive role in society. 2. Ground Realities. a) cultural, religious and moral obligations. b) Creation of a lesser status. c) Pre-defined gender roles. d)Women: A prime subject of customes and rituals ( Vanni, Sawara in Pakistan and Satti in India). 3. Pakistani Society: A classic example of Injustice. a) Prioritizing male child over female. b) Unequal educational opportunities. c) Discrimination at profesaional level. d) Different sites and forms of violence. e) Absence of an Academic discipline. 4. Limited representation at National level. a) Lack of political awareness. b) State's negligence towards educational and vocational training. c) Low literacy rate- A real obstacle. d)Strong opposition against legal struggle For the supermacy of Women rights. e) Dilemma of the; Rural-Urban division. 5. Birth of Global Feminism. a) Prevalent situation in the Asian Societies. b) Comparative study Of Eastern and Western values , W.R.T Status of Women. c) Case studies from other Asian states ( India, Bangladesh and etc) d) Rise of several movement for advocacy. 6. Conclusion: a) The established order of TWCs is gender Biaesd in nature. b) In Developing nations, the overall mass mentality is discriminatory towrads women. Sent from my SM-J700H using Tapatalk Sent from my SM-J700H using Tapatalk |
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No outline is not a mandatory part of CSS essay subject. I know at least three CSP's who have passed essay exam without outline. In my opinion, they were few exceptional cases who have excellent command on essay writing. Not every person can convince examiner in introduction. So, good outline is required to show examiner that what are you going to discuss in the essay and in which direction your essay will move. Outline, introduction and conclusion are the three parts which usually decide the fate of your essay paper. Body is important but less as compared to 3 other parts. I will strongly recommend you to write outline in essay paper. About complain of examiner that students are not following outlines in their essays or adding material in the essay which was not in the outline, it is indeed true. He has not said that students have not written outlines. He is saying that students are writing one thing in outline but in essay they are writing something different. For example if topic is "Not economy but politics is the key to success". What some of the student do is that they takes a stance by agreeing to the statement but in essay they write something contradictory to their stance in the outline. One must develop comprehensive outline of about 1.5-2.5 pages depending upon your writing speed. Usually students who have sound knowledge of topic write about 15-25 paragraphs. Pages vary between 14-20 on average.
Outline should be well constructed and elaborative. I will advise you to leave estimated space for outline at the start. Use rough outline to write body of the essay in well constructed format. Write your outline at the end. Cohesion, coherence and clarity of ideas are important for good essay apart from other essentials. Writing outline at the end will give you edge that you will only write those points in outline which you have already written in main essay. Only write those points in outline on which detailed paragraph is present in your essay. Do not give contradictory statements. Be very clear. I am neither a CSP nor a senior experienced person. I have only appeared once in CSS examination but surely I know a thing or two about essay writing as I have passed English Essay in 2017 attempt with exceptionally good marks. I hope my answer was helpful for you.
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Thanks for the clarification but an outline of 15-25 paragraphs? Did you mean lines?
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Outline of 1.5-2.5 pages. Page means single side. 15-25 are number of paragraphs in entire essay. Which actually means 15-25 points in outline. This is reasonable length. It depends upon your writing speed and available time. Your paragraphs should be equal to number of points in your outline and must follow the same sequence. One must finish essay at least 10 minutes before time. Read your essay at least once during that time to correct your mistakes. You must have calculated time for each part of essay in your mind. Construct your outline and write your essay accordingly.
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