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Are Modern Wars not Holy Wars?

1. Introduction

a) Meaning: What is a Holy War? The war fought on the basis of Religious Faith
b)Thesis Statement: Modern Wars are absolutely Holy Wars.

2. Holy Wars of Modern Era

a) President Bush’s declaration of Afghanistan Attack as Crusades
b) Shia Sunni Conflict in Middle East: Saudi-Iran Standoff and Hot Engagement in Yemen
c) ISIS’s and Al-Baghdadi's onslaught against West on the name of Faith and Caliphate
d) Jew-Muslim Conflict in West Bank on Aqsa Mosque
e) Taliban fight against the NATO for establishing a Caliphate


3. Why Modern Wars are Holy Wars?

a) Religious Intolerance leading to armed conflicts
b) Fanning Sectarian Violence for Vested Interests: Case of Saudi-Iran Insurgency in Syria & Yemen
c) Faith as a stimulant to stir extremist elements
d) Creation of Faith-based groups for gaining Strategic Depth in a region: Case of Israel in Middle East
e) Wars fought on the basis of Faith are most violent and perennial

4. Conclusion

a) Modern wars are based on Faith and Religious Differences
b) Sectarian and Religious differences are fueled for vested interests

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Is colonial Mentality Impeding Pakistan’s Progress?

1. Introduction

a) What is colonial mentality? A mindset of taking masses as subjects
b) Thesis Statement: Colonial Mindset is absolutely impeding Pakistan’s progress


2.Exploring the Term “Colonial Mentality”

a) A Mindset of taking masses as subjects not as masters
b) No accountability of Public Representatives and Public Servants before the Public
c) Non Inclusive approach of Policy Makers
d) Fundamental rights are discretionary not inherent
e) Politicians and Bureaucrats “Reign” not “Serve”


3. How Colonial Mentality is Impeding Progress?

a) Non inclusiveness of masses leads to flawed Policy Formulation
b) Considering public as Subjects creates Trust Deficit
c) Unaccountability harbors Corruption and Embezzlement of Public Funds
d) Inequality between “Rulers” and “Subjects” leads to Socio- Economic Backwardness
e) Colonial practices are redundant in changed Social Status and different Governance Dynamics
f) Colonial mentality is hindering the educated yet financially weak segments of society from contributing


4. Conclusion

a) Colonial Mentality has been a hurdle in Nation’s progress
b) Colonial evils must be done away with in National Interest
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Life without Controversy is no life. But why one should not choose the safe haven of conformism?


1. Introduction

a) Controversy does not entail any corruption
b) Thesis Statement: Adhering to Conformism might be safe but not advisable


2. Why Conformism is not Advisable?

a) Conformism leads to moral and ethical weakness
b) Sheer servility compromises the truth and reasoning
c) It impedes innovation and creativity
d) Compliance mars free opinion
e) A conformist becomes a mere puppet whose strings are pulled by others
f) No difference of opinion entails obsequious behavior
g) Conformism impedes generating multiple solutions to a problem


3. Benefits of Difference of Opinion

a) Encourages free thinking and originality
b) Provides creative and innovative solutions
c) Ensures free play and accountability
d) Generates multiple way outs


Conclusion

a) Conformity in the form of Servility leads to degenration
b) Argument and difference of opinion is the basic tool of reasoning
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Feminism is not really a Third World Issue


1: Introduction

a) Meaning: Defining the Third World
b) Feminism: Advocacy for equality of women in everything
c) Patriarchy as an antithesis to Feminism
d) Historical Background of Movement
e) Current Global Scenario

f) Thesis Statement: Feminism is largely a Third World Issue

2: How Feminism is largely a Third World Issue?

a) Women in third world are subjected to discrimination professionally, economically and politically
b) Women advocacy groups demand affirmative action: Means Feminism is more pervasive in third world
c) Liberalism and Feminism are Interconnected: More liberalism guarantees more women emancipation in West
d) Third World's Female literacy rate is lower than male
e) Backward status of women in TWCs.
f) Female harassment and rapes: More in TWCs (India's Case Study)


3: Why Feminism is largely a Third World Issue?

a) Patriarchal dominance in third world
b) Cultural and Religious Issues limiting the female participation
c) Naturally weak and dependent status in third world
d) Lack of education and growth opportunities in TWC countries
e) Western education aims at inclusiveness which is absent in TWCs
f) Women considered as custodians of Home


4: Pakistan's Scenario as a developing country

a) Literacy rate lower than males: 45% to 69%
b) Honor killings and Forced Marriages
c) Female quota as Affirmative Action
d) Male children are preferred over female ones
e) Females are discouraged to join professional careers


5: Conclusion

a) Third world Socio-Politic and Economic Structures undermine gender equality
b) Circumstantial Issues reflect that Feminism is largely a third world issue
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Feminism is not really a Third World Issue


1: Introduction

a) Meaning: Defining the Third World
b) Feminism: Advocacy for equality of women in everything
c) Patriarchy as an antithesis to Feminism
d) Historical Background of Movement
e) Current Global Scenario

f) Thesis Statement: Feminism is largely a Third World Issue

2: How Feminism is largely a Third World Issue?

a) Women in third world are subjected to discrimination professionally, economically and politically
b) Women advocacy groups demand affirmative action: Means Feminism is more pervasive in third world
c) Liberalism and Feminism are Interconnected: More liberalism guarantees more women emancipation in West
d) Third World's Female literacy rate is lower than male
e) Backward status of women in TWCs.
f) Female harassment and rapes: More in TWCs (India's Case Study)


3: Why Feminism is largely a Third World Issue?

a) Patriarchal dominance in third world
b) Cultural and Religious Issues limiting the female participation
c) Naturally weak and dependent status in third world
d) Lack of education and growth opportunities in TWC countries
e) Western education aims at inclusiveness which is absent in TWCs
f) Women considered as custodians of Home


4: Pakistan's Scenario as a developing country

a) Literacy rate lower than males: 45% to 69%
b) Honor killings and Forced Marriages
c) Female quota as Affirmative Action
d) Male children are preferred over female ones
e) Females are discourages to join professional careers


5: Conclusion

a) Third world Socio-Politic and Economic Structures undermine gender equality
b) Circumstantial Issues reflect that Feminism is largely a third world issue
Salam sir, great to see you back, I want to ask one thing. I attempted this essay and my explanation was sort-of similar to yours. In introduction, I didn't make a separate sub-heading for thesis statement and instead just gave a sub-heading with statement that feminism is an important third world issue. Is it ok? Or would I be in trouble for not mentioning that the statement is thesis statement?
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Salam sir, great to see you back, I want to ask one thing. I attempted this essay and my explanation was sort-of similar to yours. In introduction, I didn't make a separate sub-heading for thesis statement and instead just gave a sub-heading with statement that feminism is an important third world issue. Is it ok? Or would I be in trouble for not mentioning that this is thesis statement.
Wa alaikum asslam! Thesis statement is basically the stance or your take on the issue, it has to be very specific and clear. In rest of the essay you substantiate the stance taken. Now having established what a thesis statement is, considering your statement "feminism is an important third world issue",you have just eluded to the significance of the topic, you have not taken a clear stance which either could have been in favor of topic or against it.

However, this does not matter since you had not given the heading "Thesis Statement" so you could get away with that. Follow my words for next time, I wish you best of luck in your noble endeavors. Good luck for 46th CTP.
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Wa alaikum asslam! Thesis statement is basically the stance or your take on the issue, it has to be very specific and clear. In rest of the essay you substantiate the stance taken. Now having established what a thesis statement is, considering your statement "feminism is an important third world issue",you have just eluded to the significance of the topic, you have not taken a clear stance which either could have been in favor of topic or against it.

However, this does not matter since you had not given the heading "Thesis Statement" so you could get away with that. Follow my words for next time, I wish you best of luck in your noble endeavors. Good luck for 46th CTP.
Thank you very much for your advise and comment sir. I will make sure to follow your pattern if I fail this time. It really to-the-point and elaborate.
How I am wishing right now that I wouldn't have committed the blunder I did.
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