Please evaluate my essay outline for the topic " Life without controversy is no life. But why should not a person choose the save haven of conformism? " I'm unfamiliar with essay writing skills and these are my very first attempts without any proper guidance so I'm seeking your help.
Introduction
1. Life without controversy is colorless and boring.
2. Contended-mind always comes up with innovate ideas and emerging talent.
3. The consequence of the controversy is victory to either side. No loss, only gain.
4. Controversy is contentment.
5. Controversy brings transformation and bears fruitful results as in;
1.1 Politics
1.2 Religion
1.3 social life
6. One should not choose the save haven of conformism because conformism is the lowest form of servitude.
7. Prolong of ignorance
8. Not standing against the tyranny is itself tyranny. (Quote)
8. Conformism induces the oppressors.
Conclusion

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