Please review this outline: National Integration
 

NATIONAL INTEGRATION

Thesis Statement:
Our beloved country, has been struggling with divide and diversity it borne ever since independence. Ethnic divide, economic deprivation, political instability, lack of education are a few issues to count; which have emerged as fissures in the crippling edifice of Nation. All these crisis jeopardize the integration of the state and threaten the federal structure itself.

1. INTRODUCTION
a.Ingredients of national integration
b.Pakistan a fragmented reality
c. Thesis Statement

2. National integration
a. Historical Background
b. Forces against concept of Creation of Pakistan

3. Causes of Disintegration
a. Feudalism and colonial mindset
b. Linguistic Divide
c. Unequal Distribution of Wealth between Provinces
d. Sectarianism
e. Weak educational system
f. Poor management of resources.
g. Politics of electable in spite of competent leaders
h. Divide / Disparity between center and provinces
i. Involvement of Foreign agencies in destabilization

4. Recommendations to achieve National Integration
a. Comprehensive national education policy
b. Equitable Distribution of Economic Resources
c. Giving Provinces their due shares in natural resources
d. E-Governance
e. Abolishing Feudal culture
f. Implementation of provincial Autonomy
g. Unifying Religious Education

5. Conclusion

[QUOTE=KarimFatemi;1079925]NATIONAL INTEGRATION

Thesis Statement:
Our beloved country, has been struggling with divide and diversity it borne ever since independence. Ethnic divide, economic deprivation, political instability, lack of education are a few issues to count; which have emerged as fissures in the crippling edifice of Nation. All these crisis jeopardize the integration of the state and threaten the federal structure itself.

1. INTRODUCTION
a.Ingredients of national integration
b.Pakistan a fragmented reality
c. Thesis Statement

2. National integration
a. Historical Background
b. Forces against concept of Creation of Pakistan

3. Causes of Disintegration
a. Feudalism and colonial mindset
b. Linguistic Divide
c. Unequal Distribution of Wealth between Provinces
d. Sectarianism
e. Weak educational system
f. Poor management of resources.
g. Politics of electable in spite of competent leaders
h. Divide / Disparity between center and provinces
i. Involvement of Foreign agencies in destabilization

4. Recommendations to achieve National Integration
a. Comprehensive national education policy
b. Equitable Distribution of Economic Resources
c. Giving Provinces their due shares in natural resources
d. E-Governance
e. Abolishing Feudal culture
f. Implementation of provincial Autonomy
g. Unifying Religious Education

5. Conclusion[/QUOTE]

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Thesis statement is not supposed to be more then 2 lines

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