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But, there are points i wanna raise: first, 4-b heading looks a bit ambiguous. Though, its correct but relevancy is effected. Second, "The way forward" is not required. Usually, in such essays solutions are not demanded. Hope it helps! |
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Too many of us are not living their dreams because we are living our fears.
1. Introduction 2. Forms of fear: a. Fear of failure 3. How these fears make oneself incapable of achieving dreams: a. Stops a person from taking step toward dream 4. Conclusion |
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I wanted to include some other viewpoints as well such as voilence linked with incompetence in domestic abuse and the racial viewpoint-the idea that some races are more prone to voilence and hence are "incompetent" or "inferior" (backed up with arguments such as the Colonizers' Civilising the savages campaign and the US justice system and the disproportionate amount of black male arrests). But I felt that these deviated from the core too much so decided to leave them off. I wanted to wrap it up with the way forward portion but I do see your point. The 4-b I added to show that not only those in power can make the mistake of resorting to voilence to cover incompetence but often the opressed take that route as well. In fact there are studies done that show peaceful protests have a substantial percent more chance of success than voilent ones. In any case appreciate the comments. I'll bear them in mind. |
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Thank you! I really enjoy these topics but they are rarely taken up because of how open they are to interpretation and how creative one needs to get to link arguments. One is advised against attempting these but I feel they should be discussed more.
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Instead of oneself simply use one in the title of 3. Also wherever there is dream add the s since it is dreams in the main title and we should stick as close to the original wordings as possible to reinforce the idea. I would also like to propose some other portions to the essay such as inspiring examples of Individuals who overcame their fears and are living their dreams (here include examples such as famous writers like Stephan King whose first story was rejected 30 times, or athletes, stars, politicians, tech moguls anyone whose story isnpires you personally. People overcome unbelievable odds to stand where they are today and we shouldn't only see their achievements but also acknowledge the fears and obstacles they overcame-the chances they took.) Also a philosophical tinge could be given to the essay as well if you want by including a small portion on WHY is it important that we learn to overcome our fears and live our dreams. Add points to this such as the wasted potential, personal satisfaction/living to the fullest, if we don't follow our dreams or stand for a cause are we really alive? (Everybody dies but not everybody lives- Prince Ea I highly recommend his video. You can find it on youtube. Its short 5 minutes but very inspiring.) Overall I think you've done a great job and covered the basic points very well. I hope you find my input helpful. |
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I could not add much points bcz you know well that essay is to be done in 3 hrs. Therefore, i considered that view and made time-relative outline. Plus, "why" part really seemed necessity. |
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I'm an engineering student and want to improve my writing expression including vocab and sentence structure for my essay. Kindly help me out.
Whenever I try to write on any topic and I'm like blank. How can I improve myself. Any tips and tricks are appreciated. Thank you! Sent from my Redmi Note 4 using Tapatalk Sent from my Redmi Note 4 using Tapatalk |
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Is Democracy panacea for all political and economic evils? 1. Introduction 2. Present status of democracy in Pakistan: Flourishing 3. Democracy panacea for political evils: i. Promotes political cohesion 4.Democracy panacea for economic evils: i. Curbs corruption 5. Conclusion Note: i seem to run out of ideas about "economic evils" part. Its bcz i was in kinda dilemma about issues like reducing FDI, twin deficts, debts, etc. i think democracy can not bring FDI, reduce deficits and debts. Thus, didnt add. Review the outline. Share thoughts on above question. Thanks, |
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