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Emerging power of Social media: Prospects and Problems

1- Introduction
2- Prospects of Social Media
2.a. Emerging power of social media in Politics
i. It acts as democratic agent
ii. It promotes political stability
iii.It is used to start political campaigns

iv. It is used to say formal statements by Statesmen
2.b.Emerging Power of social media in Society
i. It creates awareness and maturity among the masses
ii. It is source of formal and informal education
iii.It works as social activist for the human rights
iv. It curtails the crimes in society
v. It is source of news
vi. It is source of entertainment

2.c. Emerging Power of Social Media in Economy
i. It helps in starting new businesses
ii. It promotes business
iii.It develops business connections
iv. It provide access to international market
v. It is fastest, cheap and reliable source of communication

3- Problems of social media
a. It can be used to defame a person for personal interests
b. It wastes time in irrelevance
c. It weakens family bond
d. It can fragile morality
e. It can adverse impacts on health
f. It can promote terrorism, extremism and violence
g. It is declining reading habits
h. It endorses vulgarity in society
i. It spreads fake news and propaganda
j. It lacks the privacy
k. It a source of online frauds and harassment
l. It is Imposing of Western culture

4- way forward to overcome the problems
a. Gradual reduction in use
b. Strong vigilance of parents over their children
c. Increase trend of sports and extra-curricular activities
d. Capacity enhancement of regulatory institutions
e. Implementing existing and new laws
f. Curbing terrorist hiring over social media
g. Owners of social media should curb fake news
h. International cooperation

5- Conclusion

Social media is the ultimate equalizer. It gives a voice and a platform to anyone willing to engage.” ( Amy Jo Martin)

Social media is emerged as largest and most influencing platform of modern world for exchanging information and engaging the large number of masses in different ways in their daily life. Social media is the set of online websites or communication channels that exchange or transmit information to large number of masses. It has got highly significance in daily life as it is the cheapest, reliable and fastest medium of communication. It is accessible in every corner of world and used by all age-groups. It is very common for its uses in businesses, trades and connectivity people worldwide. It promotes democratic norms, provides political knowledge, manages rule of law, and stands as voice of innocent and oppressed people. It creates maturity, builds awareness, and keeps the masses updated to contemporary world. It assists in running the machinery of government, emerging social evils and exposing culprits. It provides educational and professional training, establishes business relations, overcomes the unemployment, boosts religious teachings and entertains the people. As a coin has two faces in the same way social media has some problems as well besides positive prospects. It can be used in threatening the people and targeting them for personal benefits. It can be used to spread terrorism, extremism, social anarchy, hate speeches, and vulgarity. It can be used to harass the women and blackmail people. It weakens family bonds, causes health issues, and destabilizes traditions and cultural values. It is the source of propaganda and fake news, doing online fraud and fragile morality. There are number of solutions that can be implemented to overcome the problem created by social media.
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your outline and intro are well written. But, i found some mistakes in Iroduction.
1. Social media has emerged as the largest
2. high significance not highly. How adverb can modify noun. There should be an adjective
3.There are a number of solutions
4. Also avoid repetition. It can be used to harass the women and blackmail people. Here you can write: it is being exploited to.....
I hope you understand. Also, use e-commerce and e-governance because it is online system.
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My thoughts
your outline and intro are well written. But, i found some mistakes in Iroduction.
1. Social media has emerged as the largest
2. high significance not highly. How adverb can modify noun. There should be an adjective
3.There are a number of solutions
4. Also avoid repetition. It can be used to harass the women and blackmail people. Here you can write: it is being exploited to.....
I hope you understand. Also, use e-commerce and e-governance because it is online system.
Yes. You are right. Your all corrections are noticeable and valid.
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thats really overwhelming to hear. the thing is mam i want to apply for FSP. i need the subjects i should take for that . furthermore i would like to have some notes or other material if you have regarding the compulsory subjects.
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Emerging power of Artificial intelligence


1. Introduction
2. What is Artificial Intelligence?
3. History of Artificial Intelligence
4. Applications of Artificial Intelligence

i. Automated customer service
ii. Advanced search Engines and social networking websites
iii. Advanced healthcare system
iv. Intelligent data collection and processing in Finance
v. Smart cars and drones
vi. Smart phones
vii. Smart home devices
viii. Security and surveillance
ix. Weather forecasting
x. Face and speech recognition and biometric system
xi. Robotics
xii. Automated manufacturing process

5. Conclusion

With the dawn of 21st century world has moved towards new era of intelligent machines. These intelligent machines are capable to do anything that a human can do. Even these machines are more powerful, less prone to errors and fast in doing tasks. They have replaced humans in repetitive, tedious and complex tasks. Intelligent machines can think, perceive process and make decision based on data they retrieve from their surroundings. This is possible because of the artificial intelligence which has revolutionized the world almost in every field. Self-driving cars on road, drones used in defense and surveillance, smart home devices and interactive security system are the blessings of artificial intelligence. Moreover, artificial intelligence can be noted in advanced healthcare system with sophisticated diagnosis and treatment system. Industries are using artificial intelligence to automate their manufacturing process. Businesses are using artificial intelligence for foresee and get intelligent data prominent for success of business. Artificial intelligence in search engines and social networking websites have made swift access to desired data and people at anytime. Automatic customer support with the help of artificial intelligence has made more trustable services to customers. Artificial intelligence is being used in advertisement to provide ads relevant to users based on their interests and locations. Speech recognition, face recognition and biometric system have made people identifiable. Artificial intelligence in satellites has connected people worldwide and provided access to outer space information.

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Pakistan not a poor country but poor in management

1. Introduction
2. Potentials of Pakistan which make Pakistan not a poor country.
i. Pakistan the land of four powerful ethnic groups – a challenge to rivals
ii. Pakistan rich in natural and mineral resources
iii. Pakistan the fertile land – a economic potential to export
iv. Pakistan the gateway to Central Asia
v. CPEC- the corridor to Middle East
vi. Pakistan the neighbor of two largest markets of Asia
vii. Some world’s largest glacier are in Pakistan
viii. Northern Area of Pakistan is the tourist place
ix. Young population is a great resource of Pakistan
x. Powerful army is a great challenge to adversaries
xi. Deepest sea routes are in Pakistan
xii. Pakistan is the only Muslim Atomic country
3. Poor management of Pakistan that makes Pakistan poor.
i. Bad Governance
ii. Political Instability
iii. Lack of Accountability
iv. Absence of Rule of Law
v. Lack of far-sighted Financial policies
vi. Lack of literacy and technical education
vii. Lack of true leadership to lead Pakistan
viii. Flawed Foreign Policy to counter national interests worldwide.
ix. Lack of independent judiciary
x. Lack of separation of power
xi. Lack of land and agricultural Reforms
xii. Lack of water reserves to conserve water.
xiii. Lack of long-term energy conservation and production policies
4. Conclusion
-you need to divide the outline in other levels of analysis
-your expression should be self explanatory
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Please suggest me corrections and suggestion.

Emerging power of Artificial intelligence


1. Introduction
2. What is Artificial Intelligence?
3. History of Artificial Intelligence
4. Applications of Artificial Intelligence

i. Automated customer service
ii. Advanced search Engines and social networking websites
iii. Advanced healthcare system
iv. Intelligent data collection and processing in Finance
v. Smart cars and drones
vi. Smart phones
vii. Smart home devices
viii. Security and surveillance
ix. Weather forecasting
x. Face and speech recognition and biometric system
xi. Robotics
xii. Automated manufacturing process

5. Conclusion

With the dawn of 21st century world has moved towards new era of intelligent machines. These intelligent machines are capable to do anything that a human can do. Even these machines are more powerful, less prone to errors and fast in doing tasks. They have replaced humans in repetitive, tedious and complex tasks. Intelligent machines can think, perceive process and make decision based on data they retrieve from their surroundings. This is possible because of the artificial intelligence which has revolutionized the world almost in every field. Self-driving cars on road, drones used in defense and surveillance, smart home devices and interactive security system are the blessings of artificial intelligence. Moreover, artificial intelligence can be noted in advanced healthcare system with sophisticated diagnosis and treatment system. Industries are using artificial intelligence to automate their manufacturing process. Businesses are using artificial intelligence for foresee and get intelligent data prominent for success of business. Artificial intelligence in search engines and social networking websites have made swift access to desired data and people at anytime. Automatic customer support with the help of artificial intelligence has made more trustable services to customers. Artificial intelligence is being used in advertisement to provide ads relevant to users based on their interests and locations. Speech recognition, face recognition and biometric system have made people identifiable. Artificial intelligence in satellites has connected people worldwide and provided access to outer space information.

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-focus on punctuation marks
-Grammar
-make coherence natural
-your introduction should be reflection of the outline
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-focus on punctuation marks
-Grammar
-make coherence natural
-your introduction should be reflection of the outline
Thank you for your suggestions.
Can you please show me Grammar or punctuation marks errors.
I have mentioned all the items of outline in introduction. Which part of outline is not reflecting in outline?

For "make coherence natural" can you show me some examples.
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Emerging power of Artificial intelligence


1. Introduction
2. What is Artificial Intelligence?
3. History of Artificial Intelligence
4. Applications of Artificial Intelligence

i. Automated customer service
ii. Advanced search Engines and social networking websites
iii. Advanced healthcare system
iv. Intelligent data collection and processing in Finance
v. Smart cars and drones
vi. Smart phones
vii. Smart home devices
viii. Security and surveillance
ix. Weather forecasting
x. Face and speech recognition and biometric system
xi. Robotics
xii. Automated manufacturing process

5. Conclusion

With the dawn of 21st century world has moved towards new era of intelligent machines. These intelligent machines are capable to do anything that a human can do. Even these machines are more powerful, less prone to errors and fast in doing tasks. They have replaced humans in repetitive, tedious and complex tasks. Intelligent machines can think, perceive process and make decision based on data they retrieve from their surroundings. This is possible because of the artificial intelligence which has revolutionized the world almost in every field. Self-driving cars on road, drones used in defense and surveillance, smart home devices and interactive security system are the blessings of artificial intelligence. Moreover, artificial intelligence can be noted in advanced healthcare system with sophisticated diagnosis and treatment system. Industries are using artificial intelligence to automate their manufacturing process. Businesses are using artificial intelligence for foresee and get intelligent data prominent for success of business. Artificial intelligence in search engines and social networking websites have made swift access to desired data and people at anytime. Automatic customer support with the help of artificial intelligence has made more trustable services to customers. Artificial intelligence is being used in advertisement to provide ads relevant to users based on their interests and locations. Speech recognition, face recognition and biometric system have made people identifiable. Artificial intelligence in satellites has connected people worldwide and provided access to outer space information.

Please suggest me corrections and suggestion.
My thoughts
I dont think that there is any wrong with outline and intro but some mistakes i have noted:
1. With the dawn of 21st century, the world has moved towards a new era of
2.Businesses are using artificial intelligence for foreseeing and getting intelligent data prominent for success of business.
3. Also, use connectors like besides, and, additionally, also, similarly. Without them, your inro seems irregular etc
i hope you understand.
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I dont think that there is any wrong with outline and intro but some mistakes i have noted:
1. With the dawn of 21st century, the world has moved towards a new era of
2.Businesses are using artificial intelligence for foreseeing and getting intelligent data prominent for success of business.
3. Also, use connectors like besides, and, additionally, also, similarly. Without them, your inro seems irregular etc
i hope you understand.
Your suggestions are valid.
Thank you
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