Gender equality is a myth,Check please

[IMTIAZ AHMAD KHAN]

Dear Fellows and CSPs,
Please evaluate the Outline and Introduction Critically.


Gender equality is a myth

Outline

1)Gender equality is a myth-Yes,to greater extent
2)Men and Women are two distinct and unequal creatures
2.1)By physique-man strong,woman weak and fragile
2.2)By duties and rights
2.3)By feelings/emotions
3)Gender Discrimination-In different Civilizations
3.1)Ancient Greek Civilization
3.2)Roman Civilization
3.3)Islamic Civilization
3.4)Western and Hindu Civilizations
4)Distribution of rights and duties has adored and maintained the World Order
5)Difference does not mean Gender Discrimination or parity
6)Both Genders should enjoy basic human and civil rights
6.1)In Social Setup
6.2)In Political Corridors
6.3)In Economic Fabrics
6.4)In Religious rites and rituals
6.5)In all walks of life
7)Middle way is the best way
8)The basic duties should not be sacrificed at the altar of equality
9)Conclusion

Introduction
Gender equality is a phenomena advocated by social rights activists,civil society workers and media men since industrial revolution but the discussion is not yet concluded.Man and woman are assigned specific roles and statuses regarding their mental and physical capabilities.Men are considered as tougher and more practical as compared to women.In fact this distinction has beautified and facilitated the order of the world and maintained its peace and order but it should be not misunderstood with gender discrimination and parity. Resultantly exploitation in terms of social,political,religious,economical and domestic domains should be halted.As a matter of fact,both genders should enjoy equal basic and civil rights.Therefore,middle way,as professed by Islam,can play a decisive role in settling the issue.Women should also have their shares in the development of their individual and communal lives of their countrymen provided their basic duties remain uninterrupted.By doing this,they will not only acquire self-confidence,courage and trust but also economic independence to excel in all spheres of life.Consequently,they will play a very positive and constructive role in the country's development.

[faisal town]

Dear you have deviated from the theme.

[Jokhio amir]

country life is better than urban life.
seniors please make constructive outline on the above mentioned essay. i direly need this.

[salmanleghari]

Brother ,
I personally like your outline and introduction . I also attempted the same essay in CE-2013.

Furthermore get your essay checked from any senior english Professor.

[CH OSAMA]

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