Essay group practice for CSS-2022
 

Hi everyone! I've just started practicing full length essays. I'll be sharing my outlines and essays here. All members are welcome to share their ideas so we can practice together. A favorable response from senior members is also expected. I'm posting my first ever outline here. Please feel free to make corrections and give your feedback.
“Do not waste water even if you were at a running stream.”
Outline:
I. Introduction
Thesis statement: “Water must not be wasted as it is already scarce in many regions with depleting reserves all over the world. The biggest contribution towards saving water for contemporaries and future generations can be made by simply not wasting it. Wasting water is equal to wasting life because water is not just important for life; water is life.”
II. Why water should not be wasted?
i. Water is the most essential resource for life becoming scarce day by day.
ii. Water shortages are prevailing all over the world, mainly due to mismanagement.
iii. The precarious water crisis in Pakistan is a case in point.
III. What are the manifest implications of wasting water?
i. Wasting water can intensify scarcity of fresh water for drinking purposes.
ii. Lack of water for proper sanitation can expose people to various diseases resulting in poor health standards.
iii. Non-availability of water for agricultural use can eventually lead to food scarcity.
iv. Commercialization of water in case of water shortage can increase the cost of living.
v. Excessive extraction of water can result in the destruction of natural habitat of fresh water organisms.
IV. What will be the benefits of water conservation in the long run?
i. It will ensure the biological survival of mankind with adequate fresh water resources for present and future generations.
ii. Ample water will be available for sanitation leading to low rate of propagation of diseases.
iii. Sufficient water will be available for agricultural use in order to guarantee an uninterrupted supply of food.
iv. Effective exploitation of conserved water will help to unveil the untapped potential of hydropower.
V. How not to waste water?
i. Awareness campaigns should be launched through electronic and print media to educate the masses on the repercussions of wasting water.
ii. Reformation of agricultural sector is indispensable for reduction of water wastage.
iii. The use of water-efficient techniques and machines should be encouraged in industries, offices and homes.
iv. Laws should be promulgated for the safety and protection of already existing water reservoirs.
VI. Conclusion

I'm not an expert or anything and the essay outline looks commendable but I would just like to add a few points.
1-You've mentioned water wastage several times but you haven't elaborated how.
2- A little insight into the history of the water dispute with India as well as the ongoing debate over water sharing between provinces.
3- Besides the wastage of water there are several other reasons for water scarcity including explosive population growth and climate change.
4- I think a seperate heading for agricultural water wastage and as well as one for how to overcome it, wouldn't be a bad idea.

Thank you for ur suggestions! Actually I have tried to keep my essay simple and relevant to the topic, following the layman’s approach. I would consider adding some of the ur points. ��

Outline: Pros and Cons of Globalization
 

Please comment on this one also. The second outline goes as follows:
Pros and Cons of Globalization
Outline
I. Introduction
II. Globalization – A natural process of connecting civilizations
III. Benefits accrued from Globalization
a. Accelerated Economic Growth Worldwide – The Economic Aspect
b. Fast, effective and developed means of communication – The Social Aspect
c. Intercultural Communication – The Cultural Aspect
d. International Organizations – The Legal Aspect
e. Global Cooperation – The Political Aspect
f. Enhanced Technological Advancement and Scientific Revolution – The Technological Aspect
IV. Challenges posed by Globalization
a. Uneven economic growth – Economic challenge
b. Social evils and disparities – Social Challenge
c. Compromised cyber security with an unsecure cyberspace promoting cybercrimes – Technological challenge
d. Political exploitation of underdeveloped countries at the hands of superpowers – Political challenge
e. Vulnerability to Global risks such as health, climate and environment related risks etc. – Environmental challenge
f. Cultural homogeneity affecting unique cultural identities – Cultural challenge
V. Globalization itself offers solutions to the problems created by it
VI. Conclusion

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can someone guide me whether i have to provide these outline headings during writing the body or its just to guide the reader how the paragraphs would go. secondly do i have to give the thesis statement heading when giving one. i have not currently join academy due to financial reasons . thanks in advance