Comment on my essay

[Izaz4u]

Originally Posted by Khurshid.

Essay koi difficult nahi hota. Buss flow bun jaye paper kay douran tu sab fit hay. Flow tab banta hay jab Apkay essay ka thesis apkay control may hota hay. Essay ka thesis tab control may hota hay jab apko apnay essay ki direction ka pata hota hay. And essay ki direction ka pata tab chalta hay jab apko apnay topic kay baray may knowledge hoti hay. And knowledge tab hoti hay jab study ki hoti hay. SO simple!

khurshid by,,,,ur comments on essay were quite realistic like machiavelli on state craft,,, this shows ur stature,,,excellent,and matchless,,,,,etc and pls share ur experience about ur essay 2009, regarding magnitude

[Khurshid.A.Mahsud]

Originally Posted by Izaz4u

khurshid by,,,,ur comments on essay were quite realistic like machiavelli on state craft,,, this shows ur stature,,,excellent,and matchless,,,,,etc and pls share ur experience about ur essay 2009, regarding magnitude

Yara Izzaz buddy, is time tu apko zyada nahi bata sakta. I am feeling dizzy. But aik golden tip apki khidmat may arz hay Essay kay hawalay say.


TOPIC: Compare Voltaire and Iqbal.

Now agar baki saray topic is say bhi mushkil hon aur yehi apko attempt karna par jaye tu ap kya karo gay?

Ab agar apnay in dono ko deeply study kiya hoga tu ap inki philosophies ko compare kar sakain gay. But agar aap ko kuch bi nahi pata inki philosophies ka tu kya karna paray ga?

Aik golden trick suno:

Apnay essay ka main topic yeh rakho:
We can not compare them;
reasons:
dono kay zamanay alag thay
political conditions alag thien
economic conditions alag thien
social conditions alag thein
Then in cheezon ka insaan kay souchnay par effect ko bayaan karo.
Agar ap is style par likho gay, simple english may, achi presentation kay sath. Tu i think you will atleast get 40 marks.
But yeh golden tip extreme situation kay liye hay. Baki jitni practice karo gay sentences bananay ki utna apki writing may flow aye ga.

[Izaz4u]

Yara Izzaz buddy, is time tu apko zyada nahi bata sakta. I am feeling dizzy. But aik golden tip apki khidmat may arz hay Essay kay hawalay say.


TOPIC: Compare Voltaire and Iqbal.

Now agar baki saray topic is say bhi mushkil hon aur yehi apko attempt karna par jaye tu ap kya karo gay?

Ab agar apnay in dono ko deeply study kiya hoga tu ap inki philosophies ko compare kar sakain gay. But agar aap ko kuch bi nahi pata inki philosophies ka tu kya karna paray ga?

Aik golden trick suno:

Apnay essay ka main topic yeh rakho:
We can not compare them;
reasons:
dono kay zamanay alag thay
political conditions alag thien
economic conditions alag thien
social conditions alag thein
Then in cheezon ka insaan kay souchnay par effect ko bayaan karo.
Agar ap is style par likho gay, simple english may, achi presentation kay sath. Tu i think you will atleast get 40 marks.
But yeh golden tip extreme situation kay liye hay. Baki jitni practice karo gay sentences bananay ki utna apki writing may flow aye ga.
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KHURSHID BY,,,,,,,,,,,,, THIS IS EXREMELY EFFICACIOUS WAY TO EXPLORE THE TOPIC,,,,,,,,IRRESPECTIVE OF TOMOROW'S RESULT, U WON ME........ THANX A LOT,, AND SPECIAL PRAYS FOR U REMARKABLE SUCCESS IN CSS 2010. UR DISCOURSE ON ESSAY SHOWS UR SCHOLARSHIP

[Dolokhov]

khurshid bhai iss topic ko" Pakistan is very rich in natural resources but very poor in their management" ko kaisay attempt kerna chahiye
i attempted it in the paper

[Khurshid.A.Mahsud]

Originally Posted by Dolokhov

khurshid bhai iss topic ko" Pakistan is very rich in natural resources but very poor in their management" ko kaisay attempt kerna chahiye
i attempted it in the paper

Look, i have no idea about this topic. Absolutely no idea!
I dont know much about the natural resources of Pakistan.
And i am not sure if i can apply some trick to write on this topic from some other angle.

You know i also have no idea about Energy Crisis. But us topic kay sath may trick kar sakta hon. But yeh topic bahot specific hay. Iss may apko natural resources highlight karnay honagy and then management kyon bad hay. Its too specific.
however, let me tell you that agar apnay isko attempt kiya hay tu baki topics kay comparison may is may marks zyada ayein gay.

[Dolokhov]

Intro
second parah was about the resources in which PAK is rich(as well as mismanaged) not the one which are rich and managed
third parah
first resource
Coal
all the details(figures) of coal situation in pak
then mismanagement with example like coal plant in 90s but could not complete
because of political games and point scoring
2 water same method as above
situation of water and its mismanagement
3 oil n gas(i discussed them separately )
4 solar n wind energy
solutions
for every resource separate solution in separate para
conclusion
19 pages excluding out line (1 n1/2 page)

[Dolokhov]

actually prepared all the crises but was not prepare for this kind of essay aur samajh nahi a raha tha k kia likho mismanagement kay baray mein

[Khurshid.A.Mahsud]

Originally Posted by Dolokhov

ok i tell u how i attempted it
Intro
second parah was about the resources in which PAK is rich(as well as mismanaged) not the one which are rich and managed
third parah
first resource
Coal
all the details(figures) of coal situation in pak
then mismanagement with example like coal plant in 90s but could not complete
because of political games and point scoring
2 water same method as above
situation of water and its mismanagement
3 oil n gas(i discussed them separately )
4 solar n wind energy
solutions
for every resource separate solution in separate para
conclusion
19 pages excluding out line (1 n1/2 page)

Thats a good one yara. You have done it. I think you will get through it. InsAllah!

[Dolokhov]

izaz u attempted the same topic plz tell me more about ur way of attempting it

[Izaz4u]

dolokhov,khurshid by,,,sajjad ali, and all others respectable r requested to comment on my essay. magnitude 2000words.




MY ESSAY WENT AS,,,,v r not poor in natural resoces,but poorly managed.



INTRODUCTION;,,,,,,,,,,,my ist sentence was ,,,,,,,,,in 21st century economy is taken asa religion.it is is the blood in vein of nation-state, vitality in human muscle,base of brutal wars and a reason for govt to rule.then connected natural resouces with economy and highlighted then the global enviroment


GLOBAL RUSH FOR NATURAL RESOUCES;,,,,,,,,,,,,,
PLANTATION OF ISRAEL,TO CAPTURE OIL REACH MIDDLE EAST,
IRAQ WAR FOR OIL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
WOT A FICTION,,,,,,,,,,to creat clout in CAR'S

IN THIS GLOBAL ENVIRONMENT I DISCUSSED THE THE FOLLOWING NAURAL RESOUCES,,IE
COAL,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
GAS,,,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
OIL,,,,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
FORESTRY,,, OCCURENCE AND POR MANAGEMENT,
WTER AND MISMAGEMEGMENT,,,,,,,,,,
VERY SMALL TOUCH TO MINERALS AND ITS POOR MANAGEMENT,

CAUSE OF POOR MANAGEMENT,,,,,,,,,,,,
LACK OF CAPITAL,,,,,,,,,,, LACK OF TECNICAL SKILLS,,,,,,,,,,,POOR LEADERSHIP,POLITICAL DISHARMONY,,,, CENTRE PROVINCE CONFLICTS,,, VESTED INTERESTS,,, I DECLARED KASHMIR AS A WHITE ELEPHANT WHICH LEAVES NOTHING FOR EXPLORATION,,,,,,,,,,,LAW AND ORDER CRISES ETC


ADRESS,,,,,,,,,,,,,

TECHNICAL EDUCATION STRESSED,,
NEED FOR COMPETENT LEADERSHIP,
POLITICAL STABILITY AND PEACE,
HELP SOUGHT FROM DEVELOPED COMMUNITIES IN EXPERTISE AND TECHNOLOGY,
ASSIGNED SPECIAL ROLE TO CHINA,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
LAID DOWN SOLUTIONS FOR VARIOUS MISMANGEMENTS OF WATER, COAL,GAS,FORESTRY,SEPARATELY,

CONCLUSION,,,,,, THE LAST SENTENCES WERE AS, vr not poor bur poorly managed.competent leadership is the cry of the day, olny then v can achieve all the colors of the rainbow. it is not too late to mend.when there is a will there is a way.a stitch in time saves nine;otherwise it is no use crying over the spelt milk.