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[zuhaib ahmed]

Sweet are the uses of adversity
CSS ESSAY IN 2003

"Adversity is a great teacher."
J.J Rousseau

Adversity can be defined as misery, affliction, tragedy, hardship, difficulty and any unfavorable or havoc situation of life. Adversity by nature is a great teacher. He who faces it and enhances real experience of life he gets its zesty taste. There is mystery in misery which hides real lessons behind its thick curtains. A ship of life which sails smoothly in hardships, reaches the shore of success. He gets rubies who dives into depth of sea. Indeed, one who is difficult for difficulties gets its unlimited uses and everlasting lessons.





Difficulties never come to overwhelm but they appear to make conscious. They try to subjugate and crave to pull one's legs but he who stands like a strong mountain for him nothing is tempestuous winds. Even, one who falls, he knows his strength and he takes all hurdles as a challenge for his being. He stands again and wins like king Bruce. History is full with magnanimous and upright human beings who dared against difficulties and got saccharine uses of adversities.

If we peep into pages of history, we find great warriors, strong discoverers and outstanding inventors. For warriors warships were worship, for discoverers discoveries were dedication and for inventors inventions were ardor. Those who faced and used difficulties optimistically they became history makers. Thomas Edison and Isaac Newton are one of thousands.

Thomas Edison was a newspaper seller and he was afraid of dark. He wanted to invent a bulb for his night phobia and for world. He tried almost one thousand times to invent a light bulb but he remained unsuccessful. He did not give up and surrender; his all tries were unsuccessful except one. Each try gave him strength and eager unto success. His labor bore fruit; his struggle made him succeeded and took him towards peaks. When he was asked about his failures, he replied "I didn't fail 1,000 times. I found 1,000 ways how not to create a light bulb" Indeed, Thomas Edison got sweet uses of adversity and got success.

Isaac Newton a great scientist was from a poor family. He was a posthumous child. He was clever and intelligent since his childhood but was not engrossed in school life and his mother used to say that he will grow to be a farmer. He faced many difficulties in his school life. When he had stepped in university, he dedicated his being for Mathematics and science. He had burnt candles of nights and changed the world of science and technology. His laws gave a new soul to mechanics, physics and astrology. Almost three centuries are passed but Isaac Newton is known all over the world. Indeed, it was his passion and ardor against hardships which raised him like a sun and enlightened entire world.

According to a verse of Holy Quraan which says life is an examination. Allah examines human-kinds through various ways. He sends difficulties and hurdles in his follower's life and he observes how his follower passes these hurdles. He looks that does his follower complains or surrenders his will. He who crosses life with faith, optimism and smashes each adversity like a thrasher he gets his goal. And, so are the Countries which face difficulties and utilize their sweet uses they are developed.

Half century ago China was not a developed country, they were home of mishaps and adversities. Their peoples had been idles in nature but a single revolutionary personality Mao Tse-tung stood firm like rock, commanded a long-march and brought a pace in China. He started new world of dedication and labour. Every person of china worked hard from dawn to dusk, they burnt candles of night and moved heavens into earth with everlasting passion and spirited enthusiasm. Now, China has became most powerful country of world. Indeed, they learnt a lot of difficulties.



There is a proverb” Prosperity makes friends; adversity tries them.” Undoubtedly, life is a season of gala and rainy days. Sometimes black clouds hover over and sometimes white clouds take wing over. Friends walk hand to hand when there is prosperous segment but when rainy days appear then they run away and hide. In misfortune and mishap one can know and experience who true friend of him is. As Hazrat Ali R.A says "Don't observe him who shelters you in mishaps but him who leaves you."

Adversities make one mature and experienced. He who has perceived and faced immense troubles in life he is most experienced man. He knows how to get one from deep and dark ditch as he is well-known. There are many ingredients of experience in life and adversity is most essential of them. Through afflictions, person does not only be aware but he becomes well known. A person who has seen difficulties and felt mysterious darkness, sympathetic feelings are born within him.

A person who has observed difficulties in his life, he possesses affectionateness in his heart for others. He tries to work for those who are in miseries of life. He feels their sorrows and soulful sighs on account of only he can feel pain that has been with that phase of life. Adversities bestows candle to him and he kindles others candles. This is the way adversities teach at every curve of life. There are many people who are afraid of difficulties and they try to hide themselves.

One should not hide and run away from difficulties. Man should be passionate and enthusiastic. Difficulties are part of life which are to be faced but not avoided. If difficulty is avoided, next time it comes stronger than before. Fear is a sign of coward and for this Tipu Sultan beautifully says. “One day's life of a lion is preferable to hundred years' of a jackal”


I conclude with quotation of Winston Churchill:
"A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty." Undoubtedly, difficulties teach us that things which none can teach in this world. They make us aware, experienced, passionate, strong and humanitarian. Life is a process of learning and one learns a lot from hardships.


By:

Xuhaib Ahmed Pirzada The Traveller

[hafizask]

where is the outilne of this essay ? the most imp part of essay is outline so don't forget to write while you are practicing essay.

[zuhaib ahmed]

Originally Posted by hafizask

where is the outilne of this essay ? the most imp part of essay is outline so don't forget to write while you are practicing essay.

Yes, OUTLINE is important part of essay.
Do check it........ I compose essays without outlines, well,
I will try to make outlines. =) But, plz check this.

Thank you.

[Hamza Kahlon]

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Thanks.

I need it checked.

Dear Zuhaib
Im not much of a senior but il still give some feedback which is strictly my opinion, right or wrong.

1- i would never attempt such essays. Actually im at complete loss of words if i have to write on such. Im more of a current affairs or specific issues type of guy. Many seniors will also recommend u not to attempt essays of such type as their scope is, kinda, indefinite :/

2- few positives id list....i like the ingredients of ur essay...ur essay is constructed properly, as in its intro, main body, conclusion etc.....you have used the heavy weight vocab almost perfectly(it showed that you knew what u were saying).....u used qoutations effectively where needed and not excessively....

in short i really liked your essay. Even without an outline u were able to balance it just fine. But il insist that u must have an outline so that during the exam because of pressure and time constraints, an outline will help u keep a check and balance on ur essay.

3- Again,il say that these topics are tricky and risky. Try to avoid them.

In the end, with full honesty, as an unworthy examiner, i will DEFINITELY, not fail u. if im in a normal mood id give u 45+ marks. If im in a analytical mood il give u 45- marks. And if im in good forgiving mood, il probably give u 55+ marks .

And yes my friend, all of the above i just mentioned, does happen :P


P.S. I would like to read an essay(complete) from u on some pakistani issue. Would like to see how good are you on that.

Nevertheless,a commendable effort

All the best and goodluck. Hope i was of help

God Bless

[zuhaib ahmed]

Originally Posted by Hamza Kahlon

Dear Zuhaib
Im not much of a senior but il still give some feedback which is strictly my opinion, right or wrong.

1- i would never attempt such essays. Actually im at complete loss of words if i have to write on such. Im more of a current affairs or specific issues type of guy. Many seniors will also recommend u not to attempt essays of such type as their scope is, kinda, indefinite :/

2- few positives id list....i like the ingredients of ur essay...ur essay is constructed properly, as in its intro, main body, conclusion etc.....you have used the heavy weight vocab almost perfectly(it showed that you knew what u were saying).....u used qoutations effectively where needed and not excessively....

in short i really liked your essay. Even without an outline u were able to balance it just fine. But il insist that u must have an outline so that during the exam because of pressure and time constraints, an outline will help u keep a check and balance on ur essay.

3- Again,il say that these topics are tricky and risky. Try to avoid them.

In the end, with full honesty, as an unworthy examiner, i will DEFINITELY, not fail u. if im in a normal mood id give u 45+ marks. If im in a analytical mood il give u 45- marks. And if im in good forgiving mood, il probably give u 55+ marks .

And yes my friend, all of the above i just mentioned, does happen :P


P.S. I would like to read an essay(complete) from u on some pakistani issue. Would like to see how good are you on that.

Nevertheless,a commendable effort

All the best and goodluck. Hope i was of help

God Bless

Indeed, what you said was correct according to my level of mind and yours. Dear, I love and like to write literary and philosophical portion of Essay paper. There are certainly 4 or 5 literature related and philosophical quotations and sayings. therefore, what suits my nature i write that.
As you said, you are more of current affairs type and i am of literature related. =)

I have great time to go through on account of i am in intermediate means FSC part 2.
I go like snail and just take beans and pearls of essay writings. i try to make rosary of my ideas in writing skill.
Why these are risky, i do not get you. I talked to an expert, he said if your writing and ideas are scholastic, enough mature and defined the topic, you can get good marks.
I await your precious comments. =)

Thanks a lot, Dear.

[Hamza Kahlon]

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Indeed, what you said was correct according to my level of mind and yours. Dear, I love and like to write literary and philosophical portion of Essay paper. There are certainly 4 or 5 literature related and philosophical quotations and sayings. therefore, what suits my nature i write that.
As you said, you are more of current affairs type and i am of literature related. =)

I have great time to go through on account of i am in intermediate means FSC part 2.
I go like snail and just take beans and pearls of essay writings. i try to make rosary of my ideas in writing skill.
Why these are risky, i do not get you. I talked to an expert, he said if your writing and ideas are scholastic, enough mature and defined the topic, you can get good marks.
I await your precious comments. =)

Thanks a lot, Dear.

Oh man. Ur quite young right now. To be honest keeping in mind ur age, i think u surpass all ur peers in writing, especially essay writing. I thought you were preparing for css lol.
Dont worry about risky topics at all or outlines, just focus on writing.
All ur ideas must b coherent, which you've shown in this essay. In this stage of life, just focus on ur writing and write on what you like to write about. U have a skill/talent to write so let it blossom like an orchard of tulips dont worry about anything else right now dear.

All the best for future

[zuhaib ahmed]

Originally Posted by Hamza Kahlon

Oh man. Ur quite young right now. To be honest keeping in mind ur age, i think u surpass all ur peers in writing, especially essay writing. I thought you were preparing for css lol.
Dont worry about risky topics at all or outlines, just focus on writing.
All ur ideas must b coherent, which you've shown in this essay. In this stage of life, just focus on ur writing and write on what you like to write about. U have a skill/talent to write so let it blossom like an orchard of tulips dont worry about anything else right now dear.

All the best for future

Yes, i am 18.
How did you like style of my writing?
yes, i am engrossed to writing and try to make it bloom like Lilly.
I am not worried about but want to posses grip in it.
how am i going on trek of essay writings?

[prince93]

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