I wrote on equality of men and women and pakistan,wrote 16 pages and am reproducing my outline here,kindly comment on it as I don't feel satisfied with it.

Intro:

Women constitute almost 50% of world's popoulation
Women are participating in every field of life with men

Status of women in Islam:

Western misperception that Islam believes in oppression of women
Islam believes in equality of both men and women and the rights that Islam gave to women 1400 years back are being given to women now.
Women worked as traders and fought alongside men in wars

Status of women in Pakistan:

Male dominated society and women are treated as a property
Sold like animals in markets,not allowed to go out side of homes and their main duty is to reproduce and take care of their families
Not allowed to marry the person of their choice and in case they do,they are killed and their bodies are thrown away,
Contrary to Islamic teachings and has more to do with our tradition.
Role in development of Pakistan:

Tide is slowly in their favour now.
Participating in all fields of life alongwith men
Women are more hard working and taking distinctions in educations
Women in operational branches of armed forces
Women in Parliament,Dr.Fehmida Mirza as first women speaker of the National assembly.Their role in legislation
Women in Economic sphere,Dr.Shamshad Ahmed as first Governer of State bank


Role of Government:
Women Empowerment bill
Women Protection Bill
Benazir Income Support Program
Increased stress on female education

Conclusion:

Women are in no way inferior to men and both are working together to make Pakistan a better country.

I wrote 16 pages on it and my outline was almost 2 pages long,is it good enough because I don't feel satisfied with it.

@ Imaad Afridi

Brother you wrote 16 pages including outline or excluding out?? And rough idea that how many words you right on a single side of a leaf???

I wrote 18 pages including outline. My out line was on first 4 pages. Rest of the 14 pages was covered with essay material having approximately 160 to 170 worlds on single side of a leaf. Reaching more or less 2300 words. I wrote on " Dialogue is the only way to combat Terrorism". If I include the Words of Outline too, the essay would cross 2500 words. I believe that I could be able to secure atleast 50 marks in Essay paper.

Your essay is nicely outlined but I would suggest following points to be added.
CRIMES AGAINST WOMEN
Sexual Violence
Trafficking
Dowry
Domestic Violence
You could also incorporate these ''evil practices'' under your banner ''Status of Women In Pakistan.
Cultural & Religious Inequality
Purdah
Early Marriage
Honour Killing
Marriage to Quran
Deprivation of Legal Inheritance