Originally Posted by Izaz4u

dolokhov,khurshid by,,,sajjad ali, and all others respectable r requested to comment on my essay. magnitude 2000words.




MY ESSAY WENT AS,,,,v r not poor in natural resoces,but poorly managed.



INTRODUCTION;,,,,,,,,,,,my ist sentence was ,,,,,,,,,in 21st century economy is taken asa religion.it is is the blood in vein of nation-state, vitality in human muscle,base of brutal wars and a reason for govt to rule.then connected natural resouces with economy and highlighted then the global enviroment


GLOBAL RUSH FOR NATURAL RESOUCES;,,,,,,,,,,,,,
PLANTATION OF ISRAEL,TO CAPTURE OIL REACH MIDDLE EAST,
IRAQ WAR FOR OIL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
WOT A FICTION,,,,,,,,,,to creat clout in CAR'S

IN THIS GLOBAL ENVIRONMENT I DISCUSSED THE THE FOLLOWING NAURAL RESOUCES,,IE
COAL,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
GAS,,,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
OIL,,,,,,,,,,,,OCCURENNCE AND MISMANAGEMENT,
FORESTRY,,, OCCURENCE AND POR MANAGEMENT,
WTER AND MISMAGEMEGMENT,,,,,,,,,,
VERY SMALL TOUCH TO MINERALS AND ITS POOR MANAGEMENT,

CAUSE OF POOR MANAGEMENT,,,,,,,,,,,,
LACK OF CAPITAL,,,,,,,,,,, LACK OF TECNICAL SKILLS,,,,,,,,,,,POOR LEADERSHIP,POLITICAL DISHARMONY,,,, CENTRE PROVINCE CONFLICTS,,, VESTED INTERESTS,,, I DECLARED KASHMIR AS A WHITE ELEPHANT WHICH LEAVES NOTHING FOR EXPLORATION,,,,,,,,,,,LAW AND ORDER CRISES ETC


ADRESS,,,,,,,,,,,,,

TECHNICAL EDUCATION STRESSED,,
NEED FOR COMPETENT LEADERSHIP,
POLITICAL STABILITY AND PEACE,
HELP SOUGHT FROM DEVELOPED COMMUNITIES IN EXPERTISE AND TECHNOLOGY,
ASSIGNED SPECIAL ROLE TO CHINA,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
LAID DOWN SOLUTIONS FOR VARIOUS MISMANGEMENTS OF WATER, COAL,GAS,FORESTRY,SEPARATELY,

CONCLUSION,,,,,, THE LAST SENTENCES WERE AS, vr not poor bur poorly managed.competent leadership is the cry of the day, olny then v can achieve all the colors of the rainbow. it is not too late to mend.when there is a will there is a way.a stitch in time saves nine;otherwise it is no use crying over the spelt milk.

Originally Posted by sajjadali350

i choose these resources in my essay

water

land(indus plains)

energy resources

human resource.

minerals and precious stones

Originally Posted by Izaz4u

sajjad by,,,,,,,,,slight touch at the out set to the global rash for natural resources just to high light the importance of natural resources and global environment of energy security and then directly came to pakistan's case

Originally Posted by Izaz4u

sajjad by,, ur esay seems more eloborative for it contains more material than mine,

Originally Posted by Izaz4u

to b honest,,,,,, human resource ,soil management r the points missing in toto, in my essay, further ur eloboration of minnerals ie copper,stone etc is good than mine, how u attempted the 2nd part of the essay , this also seems appealing. so u should not worry at all, u will in shah ALLAH qualify essay with flying colors.just tell me about mine.