you mean how to handle these problems or solutions

I think essay is all about how you present your point of view.

i agree with u.

your arguments matter the most in ur essay.

sajjad by and mahsud by , r u satisisfied with my introduction and conclusion?

Bhai topic se jo hata woh samjho gia
essay sirf uss topic per likhna hai other than that koi bhi knowledge jo essay k sath na jata ho is irrelevent
app ne dekha ho ga k 2009 mein buhat se candidates terrorism aur women right per likh ker bhi fail thy because woh toplic se hat gay thy so let uss de k hamatay sath kia hota hai
try to puri ki hai topic per rahnay ki
and above all english correct honi must hai ab ussa ka pata tu khud ko bhi nahi chalta
it means ke result anay do
phir dekhtay hain kia hota hai

sir your introduction and conclusion are excellent in my opinion.you have great command on expression.i dont have this level of command. i cant right such expressive english.

my english is simple.as you can access from my english on this forum.

Let me share one tip with you people, my friends!

ENERGY CRISIS.

Now honestly telling you that i dont have any idea about the figures and technical details relating to this topic.But still we can write a good essay on this topic.How? Let me explain it below.


You know, if you think about any topic in your mind, you will find that it can be treated in a number of ways. Think about the above topic closely; how can we alter it to suit ourselves. Matlab yeh keh mujay is topic ki technical side ka kuch nahi pata. Tu kya karain? Karna yeh hay kay is topic ko iss angle say likhain kay humko technical cheezain na likhni parain jo hamko ati nahi.

So hum apna essay thesis yeh banayein gay: Effects of Energy Crisis on our lives. Ab yeh aisa angle hay jiko ham handle kar saktain hain.

Introduction: sirf batana paray ga kay hamaray mulk may gas oil and bijli nahi hay. loadshedding ho rahi hay gas aur bijli ki. oil shortage hota hay. Zindagi affect hoti hay.

Body: Zindagi affect kaisay hoti hay
reasons1: sonay ki problem
reason2: operation theatres may problem
reason3: education may problem
reason4: karobar ko nuksaan, industries ko nuksan, unemployment
reason5: transport kay karaye barh jatay hain(gas and oil shortage say)
reason6: political tensions, hartal aqainst loadshedding, law and order situation etc,

Conclusion:

Now, this type of essay may not get you high score, but if you present these points in sequence and in simply correct language, i think 40 marks tu confirm hain. However yeh chair chaar har topic kay saath nahi ho sakti. And please is rule ko follow karnay say pehlay kisi experienced teacher say confirm karwa lain.

css is not possible by human efforts alone rather it is the will of GOD Allmighty, so every moment we should seek His Help as well.

khurshid by na kar,,,,,,,,,,,,,pls comment on my essay availabe in the previous pages,please analyse my introduction and conclusion as well. i m waiting for ur valuable comments ,

Brothers I have also attempted on Natural Resources of Pakistan and Mismanagement topic and here is my outline and starting paragraph as well.

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/199879-post153.html

Please comment on my outline as well, although result is very near but its good to share and discuss.

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Shiraz A.K
Assistant Commissioner (IRS)

Hi Sakk


it sounds pretty good outline to me and also a good start.
One thing that you forgot to mention is the dependency on non - conventional energy generating methods...

so far ... so good!