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wht will be its outline???? plz give suggestions

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wht will be its outline???? plz give suggestions
ok.i will tell you the outline.but lets elaborate this topic first for clearance.

two things are mentioned here...just war...unjust peace.

now the emphasize should be on these two words.but lets define what is just war and what is unjust peace.

superficially it might look very easy to define it but basically it is a specific theory propounded many years ago by the Romans.

according to them just war theory is a doctrine of military ethics of Roman philosophical and catholic origin,studied by moral theologians,ethicists and international policy makers,which holds that a conflict can and ought to meet the criteria of philosophical,religious,or political justice,provided it follows certain conditions.
there are some conditions laid by christian catholic church regarding this just war.

they listed four main strict conditions for legitimate defense by military force.

the damage inflicted by the aggressor on the nation or community must be lasting,grave and certain.
all other means of putting an end to it must have been shown to be impractical and ineffective.
there must be serious prospects of success.
the use of arms must not produce evil and disorders graver than the evil to be eliminated.the power of modern means of destruction weighs very heavily in evaluating this condition.

now what is unjust peace...

where people are denied rights or when a foreign country occupies your country.under this condition they silence us by the power of their guns but in fact it is the silence of oppression when you are oppressed so much tormented so much frightened so much that you lose the power to fight for your rights.this is called unjust peace when you are living a life of slaves or every now or then other nations deem it fit to oppress you.there are many examples as it is going on in Kashmir,Bosnia,Chechniya.

if you want peace you must prepare for war.

people who chose security over liberty will receive neither nor deserve either.
a person once said...give me liberty or give me death..

temporary peace and unjust peace is useless.it stands on shacky grounds and can be razed to ground with just one stroke then what's the point in defending it so much.

John F Keneddy said that If we make peaceful revolution impossible,we make violent revolution inevitable....

off all the tyrannies a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive

now if we look at the meaning of whole sentence it goes as...

fighting b/w countries for a fair and and good cause is better than no fighting in a situation that is not fair.

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Dear thnx a lot for help, wht abt outline????
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Introduction

what is just war
what is unjust peace

when war is called just ?

just cause
comparative justice
legitimate authority
right intention
probability of success
last resort
proportionality

in war how combatants (attacking side) should act.

principles of distinction
principles of proportionality
principle of minimum force
ending of war
just cause for termination
right intention
public declaration.
discrimination
dont isolate the surrendering side.

advantages of just war

militarily
politically
socially
economically
psychological

examples where war was justified

american war of independence (it gained them liberty after long spell of slavery)
the second world war (the allied forces had just reasons to wage war )
persian gulf war
korean war in 1950
afghan jihad against soviet union
irish war of independence (irish were right in their freedom struggle )
american attack on japan ( japan had crossed the pearl harbor bridge and america had to defend it self )
british assault on germany (germany after occupying french was eying brittain)
pak wars against india.

disadvantages of unjust peace

politically
socially
economically
psychologically

countries going through unjust peace

kashmir
afghanistan
palestine
chechniya
iraq
bosnia

Islamic concept regarding just war

Conclusion..a just war is in the long run far better for a man's soul than the most prosperous peace.

dont know whether its good or bad..need comments as well..seniors plz help.
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My attempt is not good I know but at least bata to do plzzzzzzz.
Where is fault,what to add and what to remove.

I think '' how combatants should act '' wali thing is not looking good in it.

Need help..friends...Its killing me.

umarabbas where are you.I know you can help me.Just put down your outline.

I'm waiting but without much hope..
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Good work but without knowlege, the art of manipulation, and good english the essay colud not be attempted successfully.
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skip the combatant Headline. Regarding just war there are many fought by muslims in early period. especially the battle of Badar. Just war is one which is fought not for personal glorification but for some worthy cause... . All other are unjust
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Introduction:
Definition of war
Definition of just war and unjust peace
Body:
Concept of Jus ad bellum
When it is justifiable to go for war
Concept of Jus in bella
Conduct of war
Presence of a legitimate authority to wage war
Ultimate goal of just war is to re-establish peace
Right intention
Just cause
Redress a wrong suffered
Comparitive justice
Liklehood of success
Last resort
Proportionality between voilence used weapons used
Discrimination between combatants and non combatants
Moral Problems
Historical examples
American civil war
Wars of indepences fought by asian and african nations against Europeans in the 19th and 20th centuries.
Present world nations suffering from unjust peace
Kashmir
Palestine
Chechnya
Afghanistan etc etc
Conclusion:
Its better to wage war against the cruelity rather than suffering in the long run to save the coming nations.

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Though I am not that good on essay but in my opinion its a fine attempt but change that heading "how combatants should act" but don't change its contents. And one more thing I don't think that the example of "persian gulf war" settles in. Rest is a very gud attempt.

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Though I am not that good on essay but in my opinion its a fine attempt but change that heading "how combatants should act" but don't change its contents. And one more thing I don't think that the example of "persian gulf war" settles in. Rest is a very gud attempt.

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Thanks a lot Sajid and Usman..

but why not Persian Gulf War example..It was waged by U.N authorized coalition forces.
From thirty four nations even Saudi Arabia,Egypt had forces in it...and Saudi Arabia was the greatest financier..

Is it because it was lead by USA and UK..but i think they had the justification for that..Iraq had occupied Kuwait..and there was no legitimacy in that act.

What do you think about it..was it an unjust war ?...I think it was a just war.

usman.....plz do comment on it.
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