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What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state

Introduction

Independence in its true sense becomes the basis of development in all the essential spheres of life.
Developed countries are truly independent states.
Take an Example of existing world powers.
-Pakistan is comparatively less developed because its true independence is hijacked by the following factors
Body
1. Incompetent Economy
- loans and foreign aids at heavy costs. (U.S,U.N) Global war on terror.
- Rivalry with India and extravagant defense expenses render economy inadequate.
- Inflation
- Unemployment
- Poverty
- Imbalanced social classification based on financial influence, feudalism, land lordship.
- Improper utilization of natural resources and men power. Deficient technology, unskilled technicians
- Faulty infrastructure (Reckless Roadways and public spots), slow tourist and trade activities.
2.Weak Institutes
-Government institutes fail to deliver on their respective duty charters. Declined Progress graph of PIA,FIA,NAB,AUDIT,WAPDA,SSGCL,CIVIL SERVICES,EDUCATION and the like various other small institutes.
-confronts between Executive and judicial classes.
-Widely pervasive corruption engulfing nearly all the state departments.
-Trend of bribery regardless of fair play, conventional favoritism, nepotism and appointment of unqualified staff on this criteria.
3.Illiteracy
- About half of the population is illiterate
- Copy culture
- Awarding fake degrees.
- Unqualified faculty at educational institutes.
- Shortage of Schools and Colleges and inoperative ones used by Local influentials in rural areas.
- Insufficient facilities and modern equipments in govt. educational centers.
- Corrupt administration in charge of viable functioning of educational institutions (From EDO To Head MASTER) All the officials are involved in exploiting government fund utilities for the development of education sector in the country.
-Most of the female portion of the society is deprived of education due to unawareness and conservative ideas.
4. Dysfunctional Political Structure
-Political Parties are founded on dynastic principles. A Few selected individuals are privileged to govern.
- politics for the sake of individual benefit not for that of state at large. Corrupt politicians and nro.
culture of “LOTA –IIFAFA” money factor in the interchange of parties by politicians>deaf ear to their national responsibilities.
- Fake degree holder parliamentarians and ministers.
- Trammeling Martial laws in the past.
5. Foreign interference in national policymaking and injured sovereignty of the state.
- Widely held belief of American dominance on national policy making>trust deficit between population and government.
- lose control over international boundaries>influx of refugees and foreign agents continues.
- unauthorized aerial attacks by us drone technology killing dozens of Pakistanis on regular basis.
-credulous subscription to diplomatic campaigns of foreign countries GWOT,SEATO.
-Alliance with America coasted far heavier than it would have in case of Russia during cold War Era.
6. Terrorism
-faulty foreign policy, political injustice, illiteracy and religious extremism collectively hand in hand produced the menace of terrorism that swept across Pakistan more than any other stake holder.
Handing over air bases to American forces in course of post 9/11 episodes enraged Pakistani public to a huge extent.
-Massacres committed by military operations in the tribal areas were initiated by US sponsorship and is continuously exacting heavy life tolls in these areas. This sets base for launching suicide bombers in order to avenge the blood of their dear ones.
-Diplomatic conspiracies>unrest in Baluchistan is allegedly a master piece of us-india intrigue.
- Blockade of foreign investment due to terrorism
-Political Assassinations.

Conclusion
Pakistan is in the face of these fatal challenges which are indeed killing the traits of its true independence and taming them requires a good deal of serious commitment. Her efforts to reach the status of truly independent state are on slow pace which do not guarantee immediate results.
A community with a definite territory can not claim to be an independent community unless it displays its independence in true sense. Pakistan thus needs to put her on straight line by combating the certain hurdles on her way to becoming a truly independent state.

outline two
 

Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by print and electronic media

Introduction.
The people have right to know what their administration is doing for them and what activities occur all around in their state. Realization of this right led to the freedom of media. Media was freed from official regulations on this doctrine but despite the maximum freedom granted, media falls short of discharging on its fundamental purpose of presenting the truthful news , reports and stories.
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IRRESPONSIBLE BEHAVIOUR BY MEDIA AFFECTING ITS TRUE PERFORMANCE.
1. Race for commercial ends and not for national service.
a. Mushrooming of Pvt. Newspapers and T.v news channels has set into motion a commercial competition among them
b. Exaggerated reporting on the unnecessary issues for the extravagant publicity.
c. Reporters at local as well as national level sale their loyalities to the corrupt officials and guilty people for not revealing the truth of their crimes or for exaggerating their duty performance to state.
d. Discredit the innocent and the honest public servants if they refuse offering such reporters their illegal dues.
2. Partial attitude.
a. Only focus on the excessive criticism of the government and falsifying the truth of its successful services to the people.
b. Presenting the ministers and even the head of state in forms of cartoons and telecasting comic shows in order to insinuate them.
c. Govt is discouraged by this partial and irresponsible attitude of media and its performance is thus influenced. (in order to avoid such criticism govt restructures its otherwise viable policies)
3. Vague attempts for gaining popularity regardless of their serious spillover.
a. Organizing wrestling table talks among state politicians exacerbating already pervasive fraction among political parties.
b. National issues worthy of intensive attention are sidelined while spectacular political tussles gain prime notice of media
c. Irrelevant political unrest emerges that obstructs state in delivery for national development and progress.
4. free hand coverage of certain incidents and state policies helps anti state actors in formulating effective designs.
>Due to unbridled media coverage of even trivial issues Enemy gets an idea of interior weak points and attempts exploiting them for rather big crisis at national level.

5. Leakage of sensitive state affairs and spots throwing states in new diplomatic wars while creating trust deficit among them.
a. Wikileaks , Not fully true cables.
b. Refusal of accused people to wikileaks.
c. Widening of misgivings among the countries in the wake of these leaks.
6. poor reporting of the one channel disclosed by the other
 contemporary tussle between GEO TV and CABLE OPERATORS.

Conclusion

Media retains an extremely vibrant potential to influence the state affairs. Its responsible execution may bring to the state an era of good governance, justice, transparency and thus over all prosperity. At the same time its irresponsible work projects the state in complications there by impeding its ways to successful functioning

good effort but where is the SOVEREIGNTY the main element for an independent state. It must be discussed.

sovereignty is discussed dear but not under a separate caption.
itz the consistent element a common concern in all almost all the sub titles.
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