Outline


1-Introduction:
Problems and restrictions for the people in a time is called winter of the world.

2.Analysis of past eras:
a-Roman and French Revolutions-great examples.
b-Arab darkness, before emergence of Islam-Islam a great help for the people.

3.The time we live in is the winter of the World:
a-Natural Disasters.
b-Man made problems.


Causes of becoming the contemporary as winter:
a-Misuse of natural resources.
b-Evil nature of human beings.


Remedy/Solutions:
a-Control on the misuse of natural resources.
b-To stop the ill will of people.


Conclusion:
Past times faced the great problems but were recovered. Present era needs effective measures to come on the right way. Because the time we live in is the winter of the World.



"The time we live in is the winter of the World".

When there are a numerous problems and restrictions for the people in the World that time is known as the winter of the World. Comparing the past eras with the present scenario, it would be analyzed that the present time is very much difficult time. There are many causes behind this that nuclear expansion, corruption, misuse of natural resources, etc are growing day by day. The effective measures to curb over the worst time are required. Thus, the time we live in is the winter of the world.

The past eras have played vital role to deal with the time for living easily. The examples of Roman and French revolutions have great importance in the difficult time.Both the nations revolutionized to build their social,economic and political aspects of life according to the need of time.

The Arab period, before Islam, is also called the time of great darkness.To fulfill the need of brightness in the people of that time,Islam brought the light of awareness for the people.

The contemporary time is also called the winter of the world. The problems of natural disasters, insecurities, terrorism, imperialism, etc are spreading. These problems have been badly affecting on the social, economic, political and religious, aspects of human life. Such time of great restrictions have been regarded as tuff time.

There are many causes behind making the time worst. On the one hand, the natural disasters are creating the unrecoverable hurdles and on the other hand the human beings are developing the difficulties. Global Warming, Earthquakes, Acid rain, etc, are due to the misuse of natural resources. Such as Chlorofluorocarbons, are harmful for the ozone layer in the atmosphere of the earth. Such types of problems make human life so injurious.


Human beings have also created problems for themselves due to their evil nature. The desires, of imperialism by using nuclear weapons and corruption to destroying any other person’s life, have greatly affected the human beings. Thus, human beings are largely deprived from the rights.

There are some solutions to convert the winter days into spring days. Firstly, human beings must control over the misuse of natural resources. E-g: Fuel, chlorofluorocarbons, Uranium, etc. Secondly, the wishes and desires of the imperialists and corrupt people should be stopped.

In a nutshell, the past times have also crossed the line of difficulties but the measures by the reformers or religious light has brought it on the right path.The contemporary era is the winter of the World but the effective steps can recover the time into spring.



I REQUEST ALL THE MEMBERS FOR ASSESSMENT.

arthur-your attempt is good piece of work. you have taken the essay in right direction and flow of your essay is also accurate. my findings about your essay are as follows:
-your essay is too short;the examiner requires 2500 to 3500 words. this slab of words is not hard and fast rule but one's words should be as close to this slab as possible.
-causes,solutions etc are given in paragraphs. in other words one paragraph should be reserved for one cause.but you have given all suggestions in one paragraph.

I think this essay is not about the current misfortunes of the world.

It means that people always consider past time good than the current time.
" Pichla daur acha tha ab tu haal bura hay"

If this essay is

"the time we are living in is the winter of the world"

then it would mean the catastrophic time of the current world.

I may be wrong but i think it so.

sorry to say but you are certainly wrong. This applies to present misfortunes of the world and hardships that humanity is faced with particulary with referrence to economy and nuclearisation.

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"The calmer I appear, the more dangerous I am."

If you google it, you'll find a book "The Winter of the World" by Poul Andersen published in 1976 in which he decribed the Afghan War and World Order Phenomenon. "We are living in Winter of the world" means; the current scenario is exactly the same, described by Poul decades ago. It's an era of cold wars; nations are fighting with each other under cover. There is no change in geographical lines on map but in mindsets and public will. Great powers are ruling poor nations via un-seen supremacy and Democracy is regarded as the most important tool or let's say weapon.

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Fixed signs.