kindly comments on the Essay "Women empoerment in Pakistan"
 

all the seniors and CSPs are humble requested to assess outlines and give me guideline for Essay

women empowerment in Pakistan
outlines
Introduction
Brief History
Leading factors that blight women in Pakistan
>Rampant illiteracy
>Abject poverty
>Hegemony of Feudal lords
>Misinterpretation of Islam
>Male dominant culture
>rotten governance
>Sluggishness of Media
Effects of grim state of women in Pakistan
> Social unease
>Population growth
>Poor socialization of children
>Worldwide criticism on Pakistan
>Politico-economic effects
Pragmatic solutions to empower women of Pakistan
>easy and free education among for women
>Liberal participation in local and national politics
>curb on feudalism
>transparent religious role
>Rigid implementation of law
> Check on inhuman tribal laws
>financial opportunities for women
>Increase in quota system in all sectors
>effective role of media
Conclusion

women empowerment in pakistan
 

its a good attempt but along with it u can also add steps taken by govt in different eras like our great quaid had positive attitude towards women and many women organizations were started under Fatima Jinnah guidance.first women bank was started during benazir era and Fatima Jinnah university,harassment of women at workplace bill2009.

[QUOTE=faisal88;296193]all the seniors and CSPs are humble requested to assess outlines and give me guideline for Essay

women empowerment in Pakistan
outlines
Introduction
Brief History
Leading factors that blight women in Pakistan
>Rampant illiteracy
>Abject poverty
>Hegemony of Feudal lords
>Misinterpretation of Islam
>Male dominant culture
>rotten governance
>Sluggishness of Media
Effects of grim state of women in Pakistan
> Social unease
>Population growth
>Poor socialization of children
>Worldwide criticism on Pakistan
>Politico-economic effects
Pragmatic solutions to empower women of Pakistan
>easy and free education among for women
>Liberal participation in local and national politics
>curb on feudalism
>transparent religious role
>Rigid implementation of law
> Check on inhuman tribal laws
>financial opportunities for women
>Increase in quota system in all sectors
>effective role of media
Conclusion[/QUOTE]
Good one!
divide these points under adequate headings.

for instance,
Social causes
Political causes
Economic cause

remember faisal,
most of the student fail in essay owing to following reasons
1.irrelevant write-up.(to tackle this always read ur title after every 10th line)
2.discuss history in the beginning.
3.mix their society with islam w/o justification.
ur outline is satisfactory
one more thing, always categorize ur work into
1.more imp
2.imp
3.less imp
cause ur start must hit ur topic.
u can apply the latter points in all 12 papers.

dear wellwisher,

writing a little bit of history at the start is not recommended??? Wat do u think???