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Old Wednesday, July 06, 2011
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i agree with mareeya, fill it up with quotes,stories,examples,experiences, data, big names etc but to the point honey.
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hmm... newbie here. i see some experienced folk giving their point of view regarding your essay. Some observations and suggestions are spot on. I have 2 points in mind.

1. I really think that the quality of language is good but the content is tangential to what is desired by the examiner.

2. Do include quotes but don't stereotype the essay, try to innovate a little. throw in quotes where you want to assert a point of view. Strike a balance, don't overdo the quotes (equally bad as their dearth).

This is purely a personal opinion and no offense to the senior members.
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1. Introduction
2. Youth as focal point in building of a Nation
3. Abilities and Energies Youth Posses
4. Juxtaposing Youth with Vicissitude a nation bears in the backdrop of POLITICAL Life of a country
5. Effects of Opinion and Moves of Youth over Country's contingency plans
6. Power to Youth means empowering the futuristic approach
7. Progress of a country at the disposition of Youth, an analysis on
7.a. Economical Aspect
7.b. Cultural Aspect
7.c. Societal Aspect
7.d. Scientific and Technological Aspect
8. Problems Faced by youth
9. Status and powers vested with the youth in Pakistan
10. Epitome and Conclusion

Can anyone let me know what is being overdone and is there anything missing?
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1. Introduction
2. Youth as focal point in building of a Nation
3. Abilities and Energies Youth Posses
4. Juxtaposing Youth with Vicissitude a nation bears in the backdrop of POLITICAL Life of a country
5. Effects of Opinion and Moves of Youth over Country's contingency plans
6. Power to Youth means empowering the futuristic approach
7. Progress of a country at the disposition of Youth, an analysis on
7.a. Economical Aspect
7.b. Cultural Aspect
7.c. Societal Aspect
7.d. Scientific and Technological Aspect
8. Problems Faced by youth
9. Status and powers vested with the youth in Pakistan
10. Epitome and Conclusion

Can anyone let me know what is being overdone and is there anything missing?
nice effort dear vgud
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