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Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism


Introduction

O, people if you save a life of humane
you saved whole mankind and if you kill
a humane you killed whole mankind.(al-quran)
It’s true ,terrorists are killing innocent people on the name of their self created believes or so called ideology ,but it’s also true in order to kill these ill minded terrorist other thousands and thousands innocent lives have been taken by the claimer of life saver.Sloughtering those who haven’t committed any crime in order to take revenge from terrorists is not fair in any circumstances and in any religion. If we have a glance on history then we can analyze that every war started with the bloodshed and ended with the dialogue, terrorism is also a deadly war against mankind on the basis of self created ideology of some sick minded people and can be undermine by the useful dialogue. Dialogue is not only save numerous lives but also a best solution to control the economic gloom of fighting powers.

Root causes of terrorism
- Palestine brutal killings
- New world order and misuses the concept of jihad
- 1989 to onward in Afghanistan
- Israel’s backing to terrorist in Baluchistan
- Kashmiri still far from basic rights
- Lust of natural resources
- Iraq invasion
- India’s backing and training to afghan to be anti Pakistan


Whey war is not the best solution
- Economies of both the countries went to dust.
- Numerous innocent lives turned to death.
- Once the war fought it become a salient hate in the hearts of both sides forever

How to dialogue
- Directly by two parties
- By using any intermediary
- By negotiation

Outcomes
- Economic well being
- Infrastructure building
- Political establishment
- Innocent lives saved
- Peace and prosperity flourish
Conclusion
Peace can only possible by having useful dialogue

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please check my essay,s outline

very good
dialogue among civilization instead of clash among civilization , this thinking should also be presented in the essay.

Economies of both the countries went to dust?
think about word [B]countries[/B] do you know terrorist has no country its an organization which work for their on interset.
Kashmiri still far from basic rights
who is terrorist there?