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Write an essay, post it over here. Then, one can guide you well. I hope, you understand what I say. |
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But work on connective devices in order to make the essay cohesive.
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zuhaib ahmed (Sunday, November 18, 2012) |
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Thanks a lot for appreciation. Yes, I shall do as you suggested. I shall surely try to learn and use connective devices. |
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rocking atempt
keep it up |
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, November 19, 2012) |
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My this Essay has been plagiarized. It seems I have become a good writer.
Here it is: http://www.antiessays.com/free-essays/329116.html |
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Outline of "The Suffering Soul in the Scientific Age"
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Being an engineer, and without a literary background. I would write it as follows. I think, Zohaib did the mistake of not focusing on "scientific age" and I think he wrote a borderline essay. He should have concentrated more on, why modern science is still not able to fulfill the spiritual void? Any way here goes my outline. Any comments would be appreciated. The Suffering Soul in the Scientific Age Introduction Materialism in past and present, but soul is still not satisfied Background Why soul is suffering? Concept of soul suffering in Philosophy, Psychology, and Islam Suffering Soul even though science transformed the politics: Democracy, and electoral process is scientific, yet anyone is satisfied with results Government intrusions have increased Terrorism is the product of the scientific age Suffering soul even though science has transformed the economics: Job dissatisfaction is on the increase People are ever-more dependent on technology, causing frustration More luxury, creates more emptiness Global Warming is a source of great anxiety Even though gdp/capita is on the rise, but happiness is not increasing Race for more money is creating anxiety, debts are on the increase Financial Crisis in US/EU Natural Disasters still not manageable Suffering soul even though science has transformed the society: Society is alien to “spiritualism” – cause of its anxiety Music, Nightclubs, tranquilizers, and even suicide are not “satisfying”. Better education, yet more anxiety Better health facilities, yet more anxiety Crimes have become more sophisticated – shows anxiety among criminals Longing for village life is increasing Media has increased human suffering Science failed to solve “ethnic problems” Science failed to solve “drug abuse” Recommendations: Spiritualism can solve international conflicts Tide of materialism be controlled, to increase work productivity Spiritualism can promote peace-loving society Conclusion |
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zuhaib ahmed (Saturday, December 22, 2012) |
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international crisis in terrorism
Motivations, powers and ideas of the contemporary terrorists have become unified and globalised in their nature; the globalization of terrorism has made the acts of terror more ferocious than ever before and if they remained unchecked they would result in world anarchy.
Outline A.Booming dogma of terrorism 1. Poor process of socialization leads to callous breeding of terrorism in society 2. A safe mean to revenge and inflicting pains of retaliation upon the adversary 3. Getting lime light to advertise the cause B.Universalized nature of today’s terrorism 1. extended field of action from physical space to human body results in indirect and indiscriminate killing throughout the world 2. combination of religious fervor with intent militant political ideology makes terrorists a universal danger 3. Globalization of ideas and technology has made terrorists dark shadowy forces cannot be found and identified; terrorists living in Russian have been operating networks in Pakistan without any identity. 4. Universal terrorism aimed at inducing harassment, uproar, and sense of insecurity among people and this creates suspicions in international societies against one another C.Terrorism crisis is hitting the world hard 1. Limiting the feelings of security and creating a situation where every heart is terror stricken 2. Causing real damage to the notion of freedom struggles against foreign oppression 3. Debilitating the already vulnerable nations of third world 4. Widening the, already deep divide, between Islam and west D. factors reinforcing terrorism in world 1. State arming a group of people other than the regular military 2. Use of militias to attain political goals opens the feebleness of state to militias which is later exploited by them 3. Peer pressure on a terrorist to conform to the norms of his group and spirit of revenge 4. economic and social neglect of a group or minority E. Who is at the helm of affairs? 1 Big powers and their cold war did alot in nurturing the terrorist networks 3. Rapport between states and terrorists and dual policies of state 4. Opposing interests of the world led to the failure of Un resolution 1373, a convention against funding to terrorists. F. How terrorism can be dissipated? 1. its cycle ends when people accord sordid status to every terrorist 2. Strong government response in the incubation period curbs the roots of terrorism 3. Reformation movements and shedding off the legacy of revenge in hope of promising bright future drive the end of callous terrorism Conclusion Technology makes the transformation of ideas as swift and easy as it has never been before and its natural concomitant is the globalization of ideas. The globalization of ideas revolutionizes the nature of terrorism too and makes it global. The technologically facilitated close interactions of the terrorists make them shadowy forces which cannot be find or identified. They broke the limits of domestic government and domestic land and became dynamic enough to kill the Pakistani bankers in world trade centre USA and French and Spanish mountaineers in the mountains of Pakistan. The French revolutionist, who introduced the word ‘le terreur’ had an identity but today’s terrorist has no identity, he has merged himself with the global network of terrorists and emerges more devastating and dangerous. Not a single day passes without a terrorist action in different countries of the world, terrifying the people that they are the potential targets next time. The terrorism saga is multidimensional and multifaceted and the people have no salvation because states, to keep their status quo, have been pouring money in the coffers of terrorists throughout the world. |
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seniors plz check and evaluate my essay it contains intro only and no conclusion but i gave a comprehensive outline so you can easily guide and criticize my mistakes
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Great job!
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