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Old Sunday, July 08, 2012
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Mass Media can be hindrance in our social progress

1- INTRODUCTION

a- Power of mass media in 21st century and thesis statement
b- How media can make or break?

2- WHAT IS MASS MEDIA?

a- Radio
b- Television
c- Print
d- Alternate media


3- What mass media is supposed to do ?

a- Educate
b-I nform
c- National solidarity
d- Political Consciousness
e- Watchdog

4- How media is a hindrance in social progress? /What media is actually doing?

a- Developed vs Underdeveloped nations
b- Corporate Media
c- Media promotes agendas of selected few
d- De stabilisation of under-developed countries
e- Technological disparity

5- Scholars who showed the other side of the picture

a- Karl MArx
b- Noam Chomsky
c- Gramsci
d- Thussu

6- Pakistan: a case study

7- Preventive measures

a-Media accountability
b- social responsibility
c- steps against corporate media
d- citizen journalism

8- Conclusion
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Dear Senior Members ! Why this Kolaveri Di ??

I was expecting a detailed evaluation of my essay but no one bothers to reply
I attempted this essay in PMS exams so i need the comments of senior members. Hope you will spare some time for this essay.
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Your outline seems to be ok. However, I feel further points could have been added in section 4 (How media is a hindrance in social progress? /What media is actually doing?).

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Dear Senior Members ! Why this Kolaveri Di ??

I was expecting a detailed evaluation of my essay but no one bothers to reply
I attempted this essay in PMS exams so i need the comments of senior members. Hope you will spare some time for this essay.
You have aptly outlined the essay.It still depends how you expanded your outlines in detail.
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This is what i would like to comment on.
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1. No mention to how and where are we socially progressing that media hindered us ?
1.what mass media is supposed to do.
Under this caption you missed international role that media should play.
2.
How is media hindrance.
under this heading Pakistani media needs to be criticized more as your case is Pakistan.
It should therefore be specified how media hampers social vehicle In Pakistan.
along with all your points already written.
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However. Your outline is striking and I hope you'll pass the essay.
Thumzup.
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You have aptly outlined the essay.It still depends how you expanded your outlines in detail.
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This is what i would like to comment on.
.
1. No mention to how and where are we socially progressing that media hindered us ?
1.what mass media is supposed to do.
Under this caption you missed international role that media should play.
2.
How is media hindrance.
under this heading Pakistani media needs to be criticized more as your case is Pakistan.
It should therefore be specified how media hampers social vehicle In Pakistan.
along with all your points already written.
.
However. Your outline is striking and I hope you'll pass the essay.
Thumzup.

1- In "Pakistan: A case study" i mentioned the social progress and provided almost 6 examples of how media is a hindrance in our social progress.

2- The role of international media is discussed and criticised in " How media is a hindrance" and "The scholars who showed the other side of the picture.

3- The importance of media locally and globally is discussed in "the power of media in 21st century " and "how media can make or break. "


Thanks for the comments. I appreciate
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