Seniors please check my essay outline
 

NOT ECONOMY BUT THE POLITICS IS THE KEY TO SUCCESS.

PLZ CHECK THE OUTLINES THAT I MADE...AND I M REALLY UPSET...MY HANDWRITING WAS NOT SO GOOD .NO QUOTATION I ADDED..I FILLED ABOUT 15 PAGES ..I DONT THINK THE LENGTH DEMANDED THAT I COULD FILL UP THE WHOLE ANSWER BOOK AND WITH EXTRA SHEETS...BUT ANY HOW I TRIED TO ATTEMPT IT. THE LEVEL OF LANGUAGE WAS JUST SIMPLE WORDS..

OUTLINES

introduction
not education but politics is the key to success
what is politics
origin of politics
political philosophers
politics as a subject
importance of politics
what is a politcal sturcture
government and organs of government eg judiciary legislature and executive
can a society survive without a political struture?
a society without political setup
no education
no law and order
unemployment and poverty
street crimes
no foreign policy
social crisis
no foreign investment
economical disaster
what is an economy?
can any economy survive without a political sturcture?
current international scenario
a strong political structure a strong economy, poor government so poor economy
strong political governments of world
uk
usa
ussr etc
current pakistan scenario
how any economy flourish if there is strong political structure?
good infrastructure
means of communicaton
foreign investment
sales and texation
managed city district government
law and order
buniness laws
foreign trade
conclusion

dear ..u tried well...your outlines are good...at least these outlines can give u passing marks...ur writing was not so good, it does not matter a lot.. but at least it should be readable ...my friend Atif Dar got 16 poistion in 2010 with not good writing style...so dont worry ...jo ho gya so ho gya...next ki tyari kro...CSS is an unpredictable exam about papers and marking ...may u get more marks with little hope OR may u get low marks with high hope...so carry on for remaining papers ..hope for the best... best of luck

ambreens i am not a senior member here,but in my humble opinion you must need to improve your righting style, please opt a mature writing style, just replace your words like;instead of "give"=impart, characteristic=traits, very important= Crucial , criminal =Culprit and "only=merely" .

ambreen your outline is good . but you should need to add islamic point of view on politics in your outline.