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I know I made blunder in essay paper .. lol but I cannot help it now... so lets see how examiner will react to my essay...........this was my first chance so I will prepare good for 2014
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can u tell me that u wrote in the favor of the topic or not. i mean i wrote that one should not worry about tomorrow and live in the present. did u approached in the same way??????
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i wrote on purpose and meaning of education
in thesis statement i wrote that education in pakistan is failed to deliver its meaning and purpose and thn in outline i mentioned causes y it failed to deliver its purpose , its effects on society, and then suggestions to make it fulfill its purpose

i dun know my approach is correct or not....

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I attempted Means and purpose of Education...

My outline was:
Quotation dali.... Nelson Mandela ki Education se related
Introduction
Means of Education
Purposes:
1. Economic Purpose..
(i) to gain technology
(ii) To compete with others
(iii) To boost agricultural production by educating farmers
(iv) Industrial education
2. Sociological purpose...
(i) To develop peaceful society
(ii) To educate the people
(iii) To make the people healthy
(iv) Poverty alleviation
(v) To reduce the ethnic/linguistic problems
3. Political pupose..
(i) to produce honest leadership
(ii) .......................................or bhi kuch points likhe is me...yaad nahi

4. Psychological purpose...
(i) to make the people mentally strong
(ii) no desensitization
(iii).......................aik do points or the is mein
5. Conclusion....
Last quotation likhi magar half as invigilator snatched the paper because time was over

Problem is that my length was not more than 1000 words with no proof reading except Introduction and Conclusion..
Now please comment what are the chances??
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I attempted Means and purpose of Education...

My outline was:
Quotation dali.... Nelson Mandela ki Education se related
Introduction
Means of Education
Purposes:
1. Economic Purpose..
(i) to gain technology
(ii) To compete with others
(iii) To boost agricultural production by educating farmers
(iv) Industrial education
2. Sociological purpose...
(i) To develop peaceful society
(ii) To educate the people
(iii) To make the people healthy
(iv) Poverty alleviation
(v) To reduce the ethnic/linguistic problems
3. Political pupose..
(i) to produce honest leadership
(ii) .......................................or bhi kuch points likhe is me...yaad nahi

4. Psychological purpose...
(i) to make the people mentally strong
(ii) no desensitization
(iii).......................aik do points or the is mein
5. Conclusion....
Last quotation likhi magar half as invigilator snatched the paper because time was over

Problem is that my length was not more than 1000 words with no proof reading except Introduction and Conclusion..
Now please comment what are the chances??
you attempted well and best of luck

following points were also important

Modes of education:
Educations system:
Impacts of Education on Society:
society without education:
stepts taken by govt :
role of media :
measures:
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same as mine outline. how much marks i will score with this outline. any suggest.
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but i wrote 2200 words.
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your attempt was descent. . .
A comparison of the " percieved " and " actual " meaning and purpose of education may also be added.
Examples of Muslims past glory in the field of education (science/philosophy/literature ) which laid foundation for European Renaissance could also be mentioned.
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i think this essay was meant to denounce the prevailing concept of education i.e obtaining degree merely for the purpose of getting job and luxurious life by presenting the true meaning of education that is awareness regarding oneself, one's society etc...and accordingly the purpose would have been character building, promotion of critical thinking, cognitive development, making this world a better place to live, knowing the unknown be it in the form of discoveries, solving mysteries, or innovations etc
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I second your opinion. The main point to ponder here was the explanation of real meaning and purpose of education. which is of course :
To make human beings different from other creatures.
Enable human beings to live peacefully in this world.
Character building.
Mutual harmony among fellow beings.
To ease the life on earth.
cognitive development and so on.....
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well i have not written on meaning and purpose of education but to me the most important areas in this essay would be mental,physical and spiritual education
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Originally Posted by seher bano View Post
I attempted Means and purpose of Education...

My outline was:
Quotation dali.... Nelson Mandela ki Education se related
Introduction
Means of Education
Purposes:
1. Economic Purpose..
(i) to gain technology
(ii) To compete with others
(iii) To boost agricultural production by educating farmers
(iv) Industrial education
2. Sociological purpose...
(i) To develop peaceful society
(ii) To educate the people
(iii) To make the people healthy
(iv) Poverty alleviation
(v) To reduce the ethnic/linguistic problems
3. Political pupose..
(i) to produce honest leadership
(ii) .......................................or bhi kuch points likhe is me...yaad nahi

4. Psychological purpose...
(i) to make the people mentally strong
(ii) no desensitization
(iii).......................aik do points or the is mein
5. Conclusion....
Last quotation likhi magar half as invigilator snatched the paper because time was over

Problem is that my length was not more than 1000 words with no proof reading except Introduction and Conclusion..
Now please comment what are the chances??
Your points resemble with mine.
I started my essay with a well known quote "Reading without reflecting is like eating without digesting" (Burke)
I don't remember exact wording of my intro but my first line was ; Education liberates mankind from shackles of desperation and disparity to the light of knowledge. It brings revolutionary and evolutionary changes in human nature etc.

Conclusion: I compared social sciences with natural sciences. With the exploration of natural sciences men have penetrated into sky, landed over the moon and discovering many secrets of universe yet they do not have control on their nature. A man can be a good scientist but can not be a good human unless he reflects what education demands. etc

Conclusion Quote: Amal se banti hy zindagi jannat b jahanam b ye khaki apni fitrat men naa nori hy naa nari hy... (IQBAL)

I tried my best ab jo Allah ko manzoor.

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