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I doubt whether the remedies can be given under the heading of Limitations but still, I am hopeful that you will make it through Inshallah.
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sir please tell me wether i be able to pass the paper
Free Speech Should Have Limitations
Outline A. Introduction B. Concept of freedom of speech 1. In Us 2. In European countries 3. In Pakistan: article 19 c. Misuse of freedom of speech by media 1. it promotes hate speech under the guise of freedom of speech 2. it intervenes in the personal lives of celebrities 3.it promotes vulgarity and obscenity under the name of freedom of speech 4.it promotes violence under the garb of freedom of speech 5. it promotes sensationalism d. Misuse of freedom of speech by general public 1. it defames religious and general personalities or other people and institutions 2. it posts blasphemous and immoral material on social media 3. it spreads rumors via sms via mobile E. causes of the misuse of freedom of speech by media and general public 1. media is an enterprise 2. Immature media does not know the impact of news 3. absence of clear-cut code of conduct 4. people do not know the worth of freedom of speech F.Limitations on freedom of speech G. does this possible? yes h. way forward I. conclusion Freedom of speech is one of the fundamental rights enshrined in the constitutions of all the democratic countries of the world. It is considered the most important article and right in the modern state, as it lies down the foundation of free ,vibrant and democratic society. However, in the recent events this precious right has been violated by both media and general public. they can do whatever they want. In other words, media and general public misuse and misinterpret freedom of speech; therefore, there should be some limitations on the freedom of speech. ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= in conclusion, freedom of speech must be curbed if it is misused by media and general public. there are many causes of misuse of freedom of speech by media and public. However, if the above mentioned suggestions are taken into consideration, the situation will improve. freedom of speech is precious right. Many countries do not have this valuable right.therefore, media and general public should use it responsibly....................................... .................................................. .................................................. . I wrote about 14 pages and conclusion was about one page. |
[QUOTE=Naveed_Bhuutto;574889]Please Evaluate: Free Speech Should have limitations
________________________________________ [B][COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Dear Senior, please evaluate my essay as this is exactly what I wrote in paper. Although a few paras had skipped out ov my mind but I have tried my level best to reproduced the outline. [B]I wrote approx 35 to 37 paras with a total of 2800 words[/B], looking at the idea do you think that I will make it through? Please Comment [/COLOR][/B] [CENTER][B][I][SIZE="5"][COLOR="RoyalBlue"]"Free Speech should have Limitations"[/COLOR][/SIZE][/I][/B][/CENTER] [B]1) Introduction[/B] [I]The main idea was that except God, everything in one way or the other have some defined limited. Be it this world or universe, nothing is without limits.[/I] [B]2) Need of Free Speech[/B] -since human civilization -From the times of Mesopotamia to Mughal Era. [B]3) Philosophy of Free Speech[/B] -As Old as the times of Pythagoras -Founding Father: John Locke advocated freedom of speech in this book "Two Treaties" -Exercised in West initially in Sweden and USA -1791 Freedom of Speech as 1st Amendment in US Constitution -1973 Freedom of Speech as Article 19 in Pakistan Constitution [B]4) Free Speech and Blasphemy[/B] -Salman Rushdie “Satanic Verses” and publication of Blasphemous Cartoons in Denmark -Blasphemous Cartoons published in French Newspapers -Terry Jones Burn Qur'an Day on Facebook -Blasphemous Movie: Innocence of Muslims -Prince Charles Scandal and London high Court Verdict [B]5) Use and Abuse of Free Speech[/B] [B]6) Free Speech in Pakistan[/B] -Media enjoying excessive freedom resulting in ignorance of "Media Ethics" and being biased -Media Hype -Pakistani Media should have certain defined limits [B]7) Free Speech in Islam[/B] -Islam allows Freedom of Speech, Choice and Liberty but with defined limits [B]8) Free Speech in West[/B] -West allows Freedom of Speech but seems to be confused in knowing it limitations [B]9) Logical Consequences of Free Speech without limitations[/B] - World in a state of chaos - Ethnic violence and Racism - Islam and Muslim worst effected by abuse of Free Speech [B]10) Pragmatic Solutions to define limits to Free Speech[/B] -UNO should play it role -West should stop playing double game -World Leading countries should play their role -There should be distinct difference between Free Speech and Blasphemy -World should learn to respect each other Religion, Belief and Customs [B]11) Conclusion[/B] [I]Hurting one's belief, abusing one's customs and tradition, throwing tantrum and doldrums on religious personalities is not use but abuse ov freedom of speech. There is a dire need to define certain limit to Free Speech in order to exercise it safely. [/I][/QUOTE] well done. it is a good essay. inshallah you will definitely pass. Here I would like to give some suggestions to improve your essay. First of all take a direct plung into the subject of the essay. As the subject is free speech should have limitation. so one should directly start as " speech is free but truth is sacred" or " excess of everything is bad. Then your second line should be that " The notion of freedom of speech is not interpreted correctly by the people. It has and should have limitations. Limited free speech would ensure peace in the society. Excess freedom of speech would erode the very foundations of our democratic society. Then go further in your introduction and include all the necessary points. Exactly hitting the target in the essay is a key to success. Despite your essay is good. Inshallah it take passing marks. |
[QUOTE=sarmadalimahar;652474]Free Speech Should Have Limitations
Outline A. Introduction B. Concept of freedom of speech 1. In Us 2. In European countries 3. In Pakistan: article 19 c. Misuse of freedom of speech by media 1. it promotes hate speech under the guise of freedom of speech 2. it intervenes in the personal lives of celebrities 3.it promotes vulgarity and obscenity under the name of freedom of speech 4.it promotes violence under the garb of freedom of speech 5. it promotes sensationalism d. Misuse of freedom of speech by general public 1. it defames religious and general personalities or other people and institutions 2. it posts blasphemous and immoral material on social media 3. it spreads rumors via sms via mobile E. causes of the misuse of freedom of speech by media and general public 1. media is an enterprise 2. Immature media does not know the impact of news 3. absence of clear-cut code of conduct 4. people do not know the worth of freedom of speech F.Limitations on freedom of speech G. does this possible? yes h. way forward I. conclusion Freedom of speech is one of the fundamental rights enshrined in the constitutions of all the democratic countries of the world. It is considered the most important article and right in the modern state, as it lies down the foundation of free ,vibrant and democratic society. However, in the recent events this precious right has been violated by both media and general public. they can do whatever they want. In other words, media and general public misuse and misinterpret freedom of speech; therefore, there should be some limitations on the freedom of speech. ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= in conclusion, freedom of speech must be curbed if it is misused by media and general public. there are many causes of misuse of freedom of speech by media and public. However, if the above mentioned suggestions are taken into consideration, the situation will improve. freedom of speech is precious right. Many countries do not have this valuable right.therefore, media and general public should use it responsibly....................................... .................................................. .................................................. . I wrote about 14 pages and conclusion was about one page.[/QUOTE] I hope you will make it through dear as you have tried to cover all the aspects in your essay. The ionly thing is that your outline looks a bit scattered. Wish You best ov Luck [QUOTE=amjad imran marwat;652483]well done. it is a good essay. inshallah you will definitely pass. Here I would like to give some suggestions to improve your essay. First of all take a direct plung into the subject of the essay. As the subject is free speech should have limitation. so one should directly start as " speech is free but truth is sacred" or " excess of everything is bad. Then your second line should be that " The notion of freedom of speech is not interpreted correctly by the people. It has and should have limitations. Limited free speech would ensure peace in the society. Excess freedom of speech would erode the very foundations of our democratic society. Then go further in your introduction and include all the necessary points. Exactly hitting the target in the essay is a key to success. Despite your essay is good. Inshallah it take passing marks.[/QUOTE] Thank You for your valuable comments :). |
[QUOTE=sarmadalimahar;652474]Free Speech Should Have Limitations
Outline A. Introduction B. Concept of freedom of speech 1. In Us 2. In European countries 3. In Pakistan: article 19 c. Misuse of freedom of speech by media 1. it promotes hate speech under the guise of freedom of speech 2. it intervenes in the personal lives of celebrities 3.it promotes vulgarity and obscenity under the name of freedom of speech 4.it promotes violence under the garb of freedom of speech 5. it promotes sensationalism d. Misuse of freedom of speech by general public 1. it defames religious and general personalities or other people and institutions 2. it posts blasphemous and immoral material on social media 3. it spreads rumors via sms via mobile E. causes of the misuse of freedom of speech by media and general public 1. media is an enterprise 2. Immature media does not know the impact of news 3. absence of clear-cut code of conduct 4. people do not know the worth of freedom of speech F.Limitations on freedom of speech G. does this possible? yes h. way forward I. conclusion Freedom of speech is one of the fundamental rights enshrined in the constitutions of all the democratic countries of the world. It is considered the most important article and right in the modern state, as it lies down the foundation of free ,vibrant and democratic society. However, in the recent events this precious right has been violated by both media and general public. they can do whatever they want. In other words, media and general public misuse and misinterpret freedom of speech; therefore, there should be some limitations on the freedom of speech. ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= ================================================== ======= in conclusion, freedom of speech must be curbed if it is misused by media and general public. there are many causes of misuse of freedom of speech by media and public. However, if the above mentioned suggestions are taken into consideration, the situation will improve. freedom of speech is precious right. Many countries do not have this valuable right.therefore, media and general public should use it responsibly....................................... .................................................. .................................................. . I wrote about 14 pages and conclusion was about one page.[/QUOTE] Please consider these points. 1. Very bad selection of the topic. 2. He hasn't asked about concept: irrelevant start. 3. Outlines must have phrases not complete sentences. 4. You have given examples in 'concept' instead of your arguments where free speech is misused. 5. Under your heading of 'CAUSES' you have given totally wrong causes: Media is an enterprise; So what? This itself cannot be the cause of misuse of free speech whatsoever. 6. The main topic is discussed at the end, and that also without arguments as to why should there be limitations? Conclusion: I will fail you. Let's see what does the assessor do. Do let me know about it when you get result. My apology. But so is the CSS, dear :) |
[QUOTE=Riaz Khokhar;655846]Please consider these points.
1. Very bad selection of the topic. 2. He hasn't asked about concept: irrelevant start. 3. Outlines must have phrases not complete sentences. 4. You have given examples in 'concept' instead of your arguments where free speech is misused. 5. Under your heading of 'CAUSES' you have given totally wrong causes: Media is an enterprise; So what? This itself cannot be the cause of misuse of free speech whatsoever. 6. The main topic is discussed at the end, and that also without arguments as to why should there be limitations? Conclusion: I will fail you. Let's see what does the assessor do. Do let me know about it when you get result. My apology. But so is the CSS, dear :)[/QUOTE] Waooooo............... I am Impressed with the standard of your checking. If you have some time, i would rather request you to also have a look at my outline and do please comment, Regards |
[QUOTE=Naveed_Bhuutto;574889]Please Evaluate: Free Speech Should have limitations
________________________________________ [B][COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Dear Senior, please evaluate my essay as this is exactly what I wrote in paper. Although a few paras had skipped out ov my mind but I have tried my level best to reproduced the outline. [B]I wrote approx 35 to 37 paras with a total of 2800 words[/B], looking at the idea do you think that I will make it through? Please Comment [/COLOR][/B] [CENTER][B][I][SIZE="5"][COLOR="RoyalBlue"]"Free Speech should have Limitations"[/COLOR][/SIZE][/I][/B][/CENTER] [B]1) Introduction[/B] [I]The main idea was that except God, everything in one way or the other have some defined limited. Be it this world or universe, nothing is without limits.[/I] [B]2) Need of Free Speech[/B] -since human civilization -From the times of Mesopotamia to Mughal Era. [B]3) Philosophy of Free Speech[/B] -As Old as the times of Pythagoras -Founding Father: John Locke advocated freedom of speech in this book "Two Treaties" -Exercised in West initially in Sweden and USA -1791 Freedom of Speech as 1st Amendment in US Constitution -1973 Freedom of Speech as Article 19 in Pakistan Constitution [B]4) Free Speech and Blasphemy[/B] -Salman Rushdie “Satanic Verses” and publication of Blasphemous Cartoons in Denmark -Blasphemous Cartoons published in French Newspapers -Terry Jones Burn Qur'an Day on Facebook -Blasphemous Movie: Innocence of Muslims -Prince Charles Scandal and London high Court Verdict [B]5) Use and Abuse of Free Speech[/B] [B]6) Free Speech in Pakistan[/B] -Media enjoying excessive freedom resulting in ignorance of "Media Ethics" and being biased -Media Hype -Pakistani Media should have certain defined limits [B]7) Free Speech in Islam[/B] -Islam allows Freedom of Speech, Choice and Liberty but with defined limits [B]8) Free Speech in West[/B] -West allows Freedom of Speech but seems to be confused in knowing it limitations [B]9) Logical Consequences of Free Speech without limitations[/B] - World in a state of chaos - Ethnic violence and Racism - Islam and Muslim worst effected by abuse of Free Speech [B]10) Pragmatic Solutions to define limits to Free Speech[/B] -UNO should play it role -West should stop playing double game -World Leading countries should play their role -There should be distinct difference between Free Speech and Blasphemy -World should learn to respect each other Religion, Belief and Customs [B]11) Conclusion[/B] [I]Hurting one's belief, abusing one's customs and tradition, throwing tantrum and doldrums on religious personalities is not use but abuse ov freedom of speech. There is a dire need to define certain limit to Free Speech in order to exercise it safely. [/I][/QUOTE] You will fail. Why? Because: The required arguments about the topic are given only at the 9th number. [B]Free speech should have limitations.[/B] Why should it have limitation? Give arguments. This is how the essay is. After introduction, you have to come directly at your arguments. Do not beat about the bush as regards what is freedom of speech, when did it start...blah blah.. Remember: Quantity does not matter; quality does. |
[QUOTE=Naveed_Bhuutto;655847]Waooooo............... I am Impressed with the standard of your checking. If you have some time, i would rather request you to also have a look at my outline and do please comment,
Regards[/QUOTE] Have already done 'the welfare work' :P |
[QUOTE=Riaz Khokhar;655848]You will fail. Why? Because:
The required arguments about the topic are given only at the 9th number. [B]Free speech should have limitations.[/B] Why should it have limitation? Give arguments. This is how the essay is. After introduction, you have to come directly at your arguments. Do not beat about the bush as regards what is freedom of speech, when did it start...blah blah.. Remember: Quantity does not matter; quality does.[/QUOTE] Man keeping difference of opinion aside, I must admin that you truly deserve applaud for your quality checking :). Excellent Argument that I directly should have come to the point. But there a few Essayist who says that apart from directly hitting the target one should have some sort of build up in their essay as well. [B]Introduction Background Present Scenario Causes Effect Remedies Conclusion[/B] Therefore Number 9 in my Essay will have to remain at number 9 as those were the effects of Free Speech without Limitations. |
[QUOTE=Naveed_Bhuutto;655850]Man keeping difference of opinion aside, I must admin that you truly deserve applaud for your quality checking :). Excellent Argument that I directly should have come to the point. But there a few Essayist who says that apart from directly hitting the target one should have some sort of build up in their essay as well.
[B]Introduction Background Present Scenario Causes Effect Remedies Conclusion[/B] Therefore Number 9 in my Essay will have to remain at number 9 as those were the effects of Free Speech without Limitations.[/QUOTE] Dear, it depends upon the topic-type of the essay. Energy Crisis: Causes and consequences. Poor governance in Pakistan. These are sort of topics that may require background, present scenario, causes and consequences, etc. But, topics, as of your attempted one, do not require at all as such things. |
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