Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relation
 

I have some doubts in the outlines of the essay, which i attempted in my second attempt of CE- 2013.
Please critically analyze the outlines and tell me the chances of my success in the essay.

[I][B]Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships.[/B][/I]

1. [B]Introduction[/B]
2. [B]Negative Impacts of Social Networks on Relationship[/B]
i) Fake and Insincere relationship
ii) Growing virtual relationship
iii) Decreasing social gatherings
iv) Creating misconceptions
3. [B]Positive Aspects of Social Networks on relationship[/B]
i) Increasing virtual communities and associations
ii) Ridging communication gulf
4. [B]Social Networks in Pakistan[/B]
i) Strengthening social relations
ii) Providing platforms for free speech
iii) Inculcating political sense among young generations
5. [B]Critical analysis of social networks in Pakistan[/B]
6. [B]Pragmatic measures to strengthen true and sincere relationship via social networks[/B]
i) Reforms in social networks sites
ii) Check on hyper-connectivity
iii) Campaign via social networks
[B] 7. Conclusion [/B]

[QUOTE=faisal88;586302]I have some doubts in the outlines of the essay, which i attempted in my second attempt of CE- 2013.
Please critically analyze the outlines and tell me the chances of my success in the essay.

[I][B]Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships.[/B][/I]

1. [B]Introduction[/B]
2. [B]Negative Impacts of Social Networks on Relationship[/B]
i) Fake and Insincere relationship
ii) Growing virtual relationship
iii) Decreasing social gatherings
iv) Creating misconceptions
3. [B]Positive Aspects of Social Networks on relationship[/B]
i) Increasing virtual communities and associations
ii) Ridging communication gulf
4. [B]Social Networks in Pakistan[/B]
i) Strengthening social relations
ii) Providing platforms for free speech
iii) Inculcating political sense among young generations
5. [B]Critical analysis of social networks in Pakistan[/B]
6. [B]Pragmatic measures to strengthen true and sincere relationship via social networks[/B]
i) Reforms in social networks sites
ii) Check on hyper-connectivity
iii) Campaign via social networks
[B] 7. Conclusion [/B][/QUOTE]
i am not in favour of the concept that modern communication means have put end to real, true and sincere relationship. i am totally against it. the modern developments in the field of communication means have converted the the world into a village. simillarly, in the modern era nobody is spare from the hectic routine life. these means have made the lives of people more easy and comfortable.

dear i do not know what was your conclusion and opinion about this essay. however i hope you will cross the line successfully.

[QUOTE=faisal88;586302]I have some doubts in the outlines of the essay, which i attempted in my second attempt of CE- 2013.
Please critically analyze the outlines and tell me the chances of my success in the essay.

[I][B]Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships.[/B][/I]

1. [B]Introduction[/B]
2. [B]Negative Impacts of Social Networks on Relationship[/B]
i) Fake and Insincere relationship
ii) Growing virtual relationship
iii) Decreasing social gatherings
iv) Creating misconceptions
3. [B]Positive Aspects of Social Networks on relationship[/B]
i) Increasing virtual communities and associations
ii) Ridging communication gulf
4. [B]Social Networks in Pakistan[/B]
i) Strengthening social relations
ii) Providing platforms for free speech
iii) Inculcating political sense among young generations
5. [B]Critical analysis of social networks in Pakistan[/B]
6. [B]Pragmatic measures to strengthen true and sincere relationship via social networks[/B]
i) Reforms in social networks sites
ii) Check on hyper-connectivity
iii) Campaign via social networks
[B] 7. Conclusion [/B][/QUOTE]
i am not in favour of the concept that modern communication means have put end to real, true and sincere relationship. i am totally against it. the modern developments in the field of communication means have converted the world into a village. simillarly, in the modern era nobody is spare from the hectic routine life. these means have made the lives of people more easy and comfortable.

dear i do not know what was your conclusion and opinion about this essay. however i hope you will cross the line successfully.