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''MEDIA BRINGS ECONOMIC AWARENESS AND ADOPTION OF BETTER POLICIES.''
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Media highlights economic status of a country. It creates a sense of responsibility among citizens of a country to minimize wasteful expenditure of money. Likewise, media brings awareness about budget of a country and tells about rate of various commodities in national and international markets. Similarly, it shows the efforts of state in collecting revenues, preserving foreign exchange reserves and in controlling inflation. Moreover, government is helped by media in devising and retiring fiscal and monetary policies. Media also reflects natural resources of the state, wealth owned by people and changes in economic states of the world. Eurozone crisis was a hot topic in international media, which resulted in adopting better economic policies by the rest of the world. Similarly, owing to media coverage, government of Pakistan put...
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forward economic aid and income support programmes for people of 2010-11 flood hitted areas of Balochistan and Sindh. Therefore, the flood victims, in the following years, having faced myriad challenges in the form of collapse of homes, destruction of crops and shortage of food, were at the priority list of government's economic and resource allocation policies. Thus, media not only brings economic awareness but also does help in adopting better policies.
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forward economic aid and income support programmes for people of 2010-11 flood hitted areas of Balochistan and Sindh. Therefore, the flood victims, in the following years, having faced myriad challenges in the form of collapse of homes, destruction of crops and shortage of food, were at the priority list of government's economic and resource allocation policies. Thus, media not only brings economic awareness but also does help in adopting better policies.
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introduction; media is regarded as the fourth pillar of the state. a state cannot survive without a strong, free, independent,active and constructive role of the media.
marits or advantages of a media
a. it criticizes the govenment policies and informs the people about its repercussions on their future.
b. it conveys the people,s aspirtaions and demands to the goverment and also the reaction of the people to some actions of the government.
c. it is the most quick way of eduating the people.
d. it protects the interests of the state and its people and fights against those who wants to harm the state and its people.
e. it creats coordination among different insititutions of the state.
f. it is the most efficient way of passing information and news on national and interntional level
g. it fights against crimes.social evils, ignorance, tyrrany,injustice, and terrorism.
h. it endures to make sure to safeguard the interests of the state and its people.
i. it is the cheap source of entertainment for the people.
j. it keeps the government on the right track.

negative role of the media

a. sometimes, it doesnot remain neutral and become politicized.
b. passing of wrong information, thus thereby misguides the people about an important issue.
c. it spreads hopelessness and disappointment among the people by exaggerating a very common issue.
d. waistage of time.
e. some people use media just for making money and against the state.
f. it also promotes new ways and means of commiting crimes among the people.
g. free and independant media is dangerous for the moral development of an islamic society.


overall, the role played by the media in the modern times cannot be denied. it is the heart of the state and the state cannot play its due role without its fully opertional media.

good, but actually I wanted to have my piece of writing be checked and evaluated.
If someone can do favour for me here?

[QUOTE=iranibilly;621484]Someone please check this paragraph and highlight mistakes in it. All the suggestions will be highly appreciated.
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''MEDIA BRINGS ECONOMIC AWARENESS AND ADOPTION OF BETTER POLICIES.''
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Media highlights economic [B]status[/B] of a country. It creates a sense of responsibility among citizens of a country to minimize wasteful expenditure of money. Likewise, media brings awareness about budget of a country and tells about rate of various commodities in national and international markets. Similarly, it shows the efforts of state in collecting revenues, preserving foreign exchange reserves and in controlling inflation. Moreover, government is helped by media in devising and retiring fiscal and monetary policies. Media also reflects natural resources of the state, wealth owned by people and changes in economic states of the world. Eurozone crisis was a hot topic in international media, which resulted in adopting better economic policies by the rest of the world. Similarly, owing to media coverage, government of Pakistan put forward economic aid and income support programmes for people of 2010-11 flood [B]hitted[/B] areas of Balochistan and Sindh. Therefore, the flood victims, in the following years, having faced myriad challenges in the form of collapse of homes, destruction of crops and shortage of food, were at the priority list of government's economic and resource allocation policies. Thus, media not only brings economic awareness but also does help in adopting better policies.
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As for the format it is good, however there are few grammatical mistakes.

If you want to make it more interesting just re arrange the material. Start it with the Eurozone example or Floods example which you have given in the end, then put all the other material.
In this way you will have an interesting start and then you can come to the point that media highlights the economic problems and so and so)

Regards,