War 0n terrorism and Pakistan The cost of war for Pakistan
 

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War 0n terrorism and Pakistan
The cost of war for Pakistan
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[SIZE="3"][COLOR="Blue"]1. Terrorism is an illegitimate use of force by those who oppose existing social, political and economic arrangements.
2. History of terrorism is as old as the human civilization. But the seeds of this monster were sown in Pakistan after the invasion of Afghanistan by the world giant Sovied Union (Russia).
3. Some piercing factors to lead this catastrophe in Pakistan are political instability, military rules and weak and poor writ of government.
4. In the same way, the culture of sectarianism, the existence of multi ethnic groups and vulnerable and poor situation of governance by the civil and military governments are not less important factors.
5. Similarly, wrong interpretation of religious texts and prevailing wrong explanation about religion and religious ideas, economic disparity, poverty and injustice in Pakistani society are adding fuel to the fire for the promotion of terrorism.
6. The impacts of this curse on Pakistani society are multi phased and multi dimensional, which can be judged by the cripple economy, weak and ineffective political system and notorious name and fame of the Pakistani nation at the international level.
7. Similarly, the present situation of persistence fear and anxiety in the masses has created many psychological problems, which is destroying the very fabric of society because of constant atmosphere of fear, gory and carnage.
8. Terrorism can be rooted out from the by adopting diplomatic strategy and by conducting dialogue with the fanatic and extremist faction, rebels and terrorist and by halting the military operations for the time being to win their heart.
9. Drone attacks should be stopped that are quoted as “counter productive”. Because hate and mistrust regenerate strong sentiments of aggression and enmity.
10. Three should be strong writ of govt as well as making better the governance and the role of military and security agencies should be positive and constructive. As well as, inexpensive justice should be provided at the door steps of the poor masses.
11. Economy should be improved by utilizing all available and existing resources; corruption, poverty and the feelings of disparity and dejection should be eliminated and abridged at all cost.
12. Media should follow the code of conduct and unnecessary coverage to the terrorist and terrorism should be avoided to get rid of the hype and uncertainty. Moreover, the role of religious clerics should be positive and constructive.
13. Pakistan has to bear huge loss of economy and individuals, which must be acknowledge and appreciated at the international level without looking it with the yellow eyes.
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Good attempt bro but elaborate it more. Your points are valid but it looks like a paragraph not an essay so make a good outline and then go through that outline prepare some more material and read news papers to have more words on terrorism to write on this topic.

Although a good attempt but it's rather giving a look of paragraph rather than outline

war on terrorism and pakistan
 

thnx a lot for ur nice words.i,ll keep these valuable suggestions in my mind while writing an essay. still waiting for ur comments. regards,
tiamalik

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tiamalik[/QUOTE]

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Hello TiaMalik,

Was browsing the forum and came across your post. I liked the points and have copied them to for future reference. I tried to write them in a different way without the [bullets]. I tried to use only your points.

I will go for a detailed one in a day or two.

Thank you for sharing the points.

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Terrorism, the illegitimate use of force which oppose the existing social, political and economic arrangements. It will not be wrong to say that the history of terrorism is as old as the human civilization. The incidents which can be said as terrorism can be found in almost every civilization in history, no matter which civilization one goes for. Terrorism is observed all over the world due to different reasons which vary to the location and Pakistan is no exception to it. Terrorism in Pakistan is a major and highly destructive phenomenon in recent years and will tend to gain more power without proper measures.
As far as Pakistan is concerned, the seeds of this evil were sown in the holy-land after the Russian (Soviet Union) invasion into Afghanistan which happened in 1979. It is widely said that this is part of history created a mess for Pakistan.
Not just the invasion. A lot of factors are involved when we talk about terrorism in Pakistan. Political instability, military rules , the sectarianism, the brain washing of multiple ethnic groups, wrong interpretation of religious texts/ideas, economic disparity, poverty and above all the injustice in the society and lack of law and order practice. The poor grip of Government on all these factors is fueling the fire to promote the terrorism to a whole new level.
Terrorism always attacks the society in a number of ways. The crippled economy, weak and ineffective political system, bad influence of Pakistan on the rest of the world are some of the gifts of terrorism solely. The present situations of fear and anxiety are effecting the country socially, economically and psychologically.
Terrorism can be rooted out, destroyed and fully stopped. Other countries have done it so why can’t Pakistan?. Empowering law and order, adopting diplomatic strategies and negotiating with the extremist faction, terrorist groups can be considered as a good start. The Government should try to get firm writ on the governance and the security forces should be utilized in a positive and constructive manner. Justice should be provided without discrimination, which according to every aspect is the first rule to be followed.
Economy can be improved by utilizing all the available means. Corruption is a sin and should be treated as one, public awareness programs on how the corruption effects in long term should be made. Media can play an important role in educating the people regarding every situation mentioned.


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Time: 20 minutes.