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Never never never never never give up (from the CE 2013 reconducted in Faisalabad)


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1. Introduction and Contention

Consistency, perseverance, patience and self-belief are the prerequisites of conquering over any problem and crisis. An individual can pull the mountains down and perform a herculian task if he or she has the courage of not giving up. However, majority of people after sustaining a bit of pressure, give up, which is a behavior for one to be highly concerned about.

2. Examples from political history
(Z.A Bhutto's signing of Simla Agreement 1972 while facing a highly hostile government in a grave post-war situation)
(Passage of 13th amendment - Emancipation Proclamation - in the United States' constitution by Abrahm Lincoln in 1863 which was highly opposed in by the congressmen)

3. Success stories from history of science
(Thomas Edison's invetion of bulb after failing 99 times)
(Aeroplane invetion by Right Brothers etc.)

4. References from human evolution history
(Some important facts from cave-dwelling to the modern age)

5. Examples from animals' behavior
(Stroy of King Bruce and Spider can be quoted)

6. Those who lack consistent behavior

7. Causes of inconsistent attitude
a. Inability to sustain pressure
b. Losing hope
c. Self disbelief
d. Misinterpreting situation

8. Attaining consistent behavior
a. Triumph over situation
b. Taking the companions' consent
c. Avoiding panic
d. Exploring the options
e. Deciding on options
f. Relaxing to overcome stress

9. Conclusion



Your essay can be said a passing attempt. However, you had to focus on never never never give up than those of examples, and histories, I mean to say in this essay you have to prove that 'Why one must not give up" this is the main thing to mention here. Apart from that you have done a commendable job. I hope you will get through. Best of Luck..

Thank you brother for your valuable comments and suggestions. Yes, you have rightly poited out, a more literary argumentation can work even better than this attempt.

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Good Outline. I hope you would be including "The Reason for UN's existence" or "Why was it created" (a bit of an introduction). Without that you can't assess the achievements and failures of this body otherwise, a very nice attempt


I agree to your view sir. An introduction to the organization is really essential and I'll edit and put it in the outline.
I wish you could contribute some more of your outlines.


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Write on this topic;
"Are four pillars of state responsible for what ails Pakistan's today;
this topic share from jwt magazine.

According to my point of view first define separate all four pillars their rights and duties also mention separately and their combine effects on any nation and then also mention separation of power concept.
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"Are four pillars of state responsible for what ails Pakistan's today;

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1-INTRODUCTION

2-PRESENT SCENARIO

a-terrorism
b-social problems
c-rampant corruption
d-fragile economy
e-violation of sovereignty
f-and insufficient role of our institutions to tackle above problems.
f-yes, our institutions are responsible for the current circumstances (in introduction I agree with the topic that yes, due to insufficient role of our institution we are facing severe problems..

3-RESPONSBILITIES OF FOUR PILLARS OF STATE

a-Executive
b-Judiciary
c-Legislative
d-Media

4-INSTITUIONS ROLE IN CURRENT SCENARIO
A-Positive Roles of four Pillar of State
a-Executive's achievements since inception of Pakistan
b-Apex Judiciary and its achievements in providing justice
c-Legislation has tackled many problems related to contemporary issues (many examples)
d-Media has become a powerful and it also support other institutions

B-Negative Roles of four Pillars of State and awful scenario of our country
a-Incapable executive and records of corruption (according to TR)
b-Clashes among institutions
c-flaws in legislation
d-Hype role of Media in many perspective

5-INDEED OUR INSTITUTIONS ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE CURRENT CIRCUMSTANCES TO THE GREAT EXTENT

6-SOLUTIONS TO STRENGTHENING OUR INSTITUTIONS & SOLVING THE CURRENT PROBLEMS
-Effective role of every institution according to the constitution
-Coordination & Cooperation among the federal & provincial governments
-Western domination must be demolished in any cost
-Judiciary must be made strong enough to provide justice rapidly
-Media can do miracles in strengthening institutions to overcome the current problems
-Getting rid of clash of institutions
-Honest leadership is the need of hour
-allocations of the right person on right place in every institution
-Rule of Law
-Army's role to strengthening better relationships among the institutions
-Education must be provided in every corner of the country
-Individual's role to accept & respect our institutions


7-CONCLUSION


Please check out outlines, pin point the mistakes fully.

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Originally Posted by Abrahm Lincoln View Post
Never never never never never give up (from the CE 2013 reconducted in Faisalabad)


Outline

1. Introduction and Contention

Consistency, perseverance, patience and self-belief are the prerequisites of conquering over any problem and crisis. An individual can pull the mountains down and perform a herculian task if he or she has the courage of not giving up. However, majority of people after sustaining a bit of pressure, give up, which is a behavior for one to be highly concerned about.

2. Examples from political history
(Z.A Bhutto's signing of Simla Agreement 1972 while facing a highly hostile government in a grave post-war situation)
(Passage of 13th amendment - Emancipation Proclamation - in the United States' constitution by Abrahm Lincoln in 1863 which was highly opposed in by the congressmen)

3. Success stories from history of science
(Thomas Edison's invetion of bulb after failing 99 times)
(Aeroplane invetion by Right Brothers etc.)

4. References from human evolution history
(Some important facts from cave-dwelling to the modern age)

5. Examples from animals' behavior
(Stroy of King Bruce and Spider can be quoted)

6. Those who lack consistent behavior

7. Causes of inconsistent attitude
a. Inability to sustain pressure
b. Losing hope
c. Self disbelief
d. Misinterpreting situation

8. Attaining consistent behavior
a. Triumph over situation
b. Taking the companions' consent
c. Avoiding panic
d. Exploring the options
e. Deciding on options
f. Relaxing to overcome stress

9. Conclusion





Seniors please take a look a comment on the outline
My outlines" Never never never give up"
Introduction
1.You cannot achieve anything in you life in one attempt or without pouring required effort.
2.If you are going through hell, keep going on.
3.There r so many examples in the history.
4.Life is challenging , but this is what make it interesting.
5.Many of life's failure are people who died not realizing how closely they were to success when they give up.
6.Winston Churchill speech 1941
7.MacArthur commander of Us army highly praised personality in the world history because of his perseverance.
8.Trust in God.
9.Success is not final, failure is not fatal, it is the courage to continue that counts.
10.Never accept defeat even never think of it.
11.Stick to your goal and never stop trying.
12.Just keep in mind the saying of Paulo Coehlo (writer of Alchemist)"When you want something in your life the whole world conspires to help you achieve that"
Conclusion.
This is my outline I know its not up to the par.But this was my first attempt and I just jotted down my thoughts over the subject . it needs correction and proofreading.This type of essays are difficult to comprehend, its quite challenging to handle them and make them impressive or parhnay k qabil css k level or standard k mutabiq.Nevertheless it was interesting.
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My outlines" Never never never give up"
Introduction
1.You cannot achieve anything in you life in one attempt or without pouring required effort.
2.If you are going through hell, keep going on.
3.There r so many examples in the history.
4.Life is challenging , but this is what make it interesting.
5.Many of life's failure are people who died not realizing how closely they were to success when they give up.
6.Winston Churchill speech 1941
7.MacArthur commander of Us army highly praised personality in the world history because of his perseverance.
8.Trust in God.
9.Success is not final, failure is not fatal, it is the courage to continue that counts.
10.Never accept defeat even never think of it.
11.Stick to your goal and never stop trying.
12.Just keep in mind the saying of Paulo Coehlo (writer of Alchemist)"When you want something in your life the whole world conspires to help you achieve that"
Conclusion.
This is my outline I know its not up to the par.But this was my first attempt and I just jotted down my thoughts over the subject . it needs correction and proofreading.This type of essays are difficult to comprehend, its quite challenging to handle them and make them impressive or parhnay k qabil css k level or standard k mutabiq.Nevertheless it was interesting.
Dear you have proved the topic of essay, inshalllah you will make it. As you outlines seem to be perfect to the point indeed. Best of Luck.
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Thanks exclusively for your kind and encouraging words.I am trying my level best.Pray for me.
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What are the requirements of a good and perfect essay ?
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What are the requirements of a good and perfect essay ?
Answer:

Be yourself

Listen your own inner core's voice

Perfect outlines according to the topic

To the point

Starting of your essay must be attractive as first impression is the last impression

English language must be flawless in every perspective

Facts and figures must be mentioned, as it is a plus point

Make sure that you are on the topic, if you are derailed, then you will have to face the consequences in the result

If you lean the art of writing creatively, then you are the winning horse in the race

Last but not the least, keep keep and keep writing on, as writing practice will make you perfect, besides, the most important thing, must get your write ups checked by a senior or teacher which is good at English writing.

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Social Media and its Role in the Modern Age

1. Introduction and Contention
The social media has become a major part of the modern civilization. It is surely a defining factor that how integrated the human social interactions have become. Despite bringing the people together and virtually shrinking or removing all the distances among the people, the social media has brought about a variety of socio-political, legal, and moral challenges in the society.

2. Functions of Social Media
a. Social interaction
b. News and information dissemination
c. Business’s promotion
d. Shaping public opinion
e. Entertainment

3. Social Media Today
a. Over 62% of adults worldwide use social media
b. Top five countries with largest portion of population online
i. UK with over 53 million (85% of population)
ii. Germany with over 67 million (82% of population)
iii. France with over 52 million (80% of population)
iv. Japan 102 million (80% of population)
v. USA with over 244 million (79% of total population)
c. facebook is the largest social network with over 1.1 billion users worldwide
d. twitter is the world’s second largest social network with over 140 million active users
e. YouTube is the world’s largest video network with over more than 800 million news users every month

4. Benefits of Social Media
a. Freedom of expression
b. Free publicity
c. Promotion of entrepreneurship
d. Free and immediate communication
e. Online education
f. Integration of societies
i. Through promotion of culture, traditions, history, heritage and so on
g. Global harmony

5. Challenges of Social Media
a. Data protection and privacy
b. Decreasing reliability
c. Wider anonymity of the users
d. Misuse by the terrorist organizations (world security challenge)
e. Psychological cost of using social media
i. Perpetuation of loneliness (a research study: “Facebook Makes Us Sadder And Less Satisfied” at university of Michigan)
ii. Adverse impacts on relationships
f. Spread of ‘hate speech’
i. E.g. blasphemous video on YouTube last year

6. Dealing with the Social Media Challenges
a. Protection of privacy
i. Through technology
ii. Through legislation (local and international laws)
b. Proper management codes in business organizations
c. Intelligence surveillance
d. Reduction in the use of social networks – targeted at individuals
e. Public awareness campaigns on social media use

7. Conclusion


Everybody is requested to comment and suggest.

Jazaak-Allah
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