Contemporary Essays' Outlines
 

Dear forum fellows let's start drawing the outlines and getting them checked by the seniors at this forum. It's been realy hard for the aspirants to prepare for the subject of 'Essay' as everytime we view a new thread created containing questions and many of those are not answered.

Let's start portraying the ideas by drawing the outlines of the most contemporary topics from the papers of last five years or the current happenings (national and international).

The [B]outlines must be drawn with the first go within 15 to 20 minutes[/B] exactly like the time allocated on average by the candidates in the competitive exam. We may call it an [B]extemporaneous[/B] which will be helpful to bring out the actual gray areas in this particular subject and later those areas can be taken care of and improved on.

[B]Seniors [/B]are humbly requested to please help us all in this regard by checking the outlines and posting their valuable suggestions.

Anyone can add suggestions in this idea to enhance its productivity.

Regards

I start by posting the first outline
 

[B]Never never never never never give up[/B] (from the CE 2013 reconducted in Faisalabad)


[B][U]Outline[/U][/B]

[B]1. Introduction and Contention[/B]

Consistency, perseverance, patience and self-belief are the prerequisites of conquering over any problem and crisis. An individual can pull the mountains down and perform a herculian task if he or she has the courage of not giving up. However, majority of people after sustaining a bit of pressure, give up, which is a behavior for one to be highly concerned about.

[B]2. Examples from political history[/B]
(Z.A Bhutto's signing of Simla Agreement 1972 while facing a highly hostile government in a grave post-war situation)
(Passage of 13th amendment - Emancipation Proclamation - in the United States' constitution by Abrahm Lincoln in 1863 which was highly opposed in by the congressmen)

[B]3. Success stories from history of science[/B]
(Thomas Edison's invetion of bulb after failing 99 times)
(Aeroplane invetion by Right Brothers etc.)

[B]4. References from human evolution history[/B]
(Some important facts from cave-dwelling to the modern age)

[B]5. Examples from animals' behavior[/B]
(Stroy of King Bruce and Spider can be quoted)

[B]6. Those who lack consistent behavior[/B]

[B]7. Causes of inconsistent attitude[/B]
a. Inability to sustain pressure
b. Losing hope
c. Self disbelief
d. Misinterpreting situation

[B]8. Attaining consistent behavior[/B]
a. Triumph over situation
b. Taking the companions' consent
c. Avoiding panic
d. Exploring the options
e. Deciding on options
f. Relaxing to overcome stress

[B]9. Conclusion[/B]





Seniors please take a look a comment on the outline :))

Not economy but politics is a key to success (2013)
 

[CENTER][B][U]Not Economy but Politics Is a Key to Success[/U][/B][/CENTER]

[U][B]Outline[/B][/U]

[B]1. Introduction and Contention[/B]
The most integral determinant of success or failure of any nation is its economic condition. However, the economy is itself dependent on a system called ‘political system’. A country can only be economically stable, if it is politically strong, for economic policies emanate under political supervision. Unfortunately, in most of the developing countries and specifically in Pakistan, steps are taken to strengthen the economy without stabilizing their political system. Such wrong priority setting leads all the efforts astray.

[B]2. Lessons from history[/B]
a. Decline of colonial powers
(Due to the racial, cultural, ethnic and all kind of discrimination against the people living in the colonies under the colonial regimes. This all was because of the inefficient political system. Spanish, French, Ancient Greek most of the other colonial powers faced decline due to political crises)

b. Coming of revolutions
(All the major revolutions that impacted the world at large came with the cause to restructure the political setup in order to bring about the paradigmatic change in a particular geographical area)
i. American revolution
ii. French revolution
iii. Russian revolution
iv. Chinese revolution
v. Iranian revolution

[B]3. Political, economic and social systems[/B]
(The point is that the economic and social miseries bring about the major uprising that challenge the status quo i.e. political system that controls entire setup running the affairs of the country, exactly like what is happening in Pakistan presently)
a. Economic and social systems – drivers of political change
i. Abolition of slavery from the US
ii. End of apartheid in South Africa
iii. Uprising of civil rights movement in the US
iv. Rise of progressive intellectuals in 20th century

[B]4. Success stories of politically and economically stable countries[/B]
a. China’s status as fastest growing economy
b. India as an Asian giant
c. South Korea as one of the world’s leading economies
d. Brazil as an emerging state
e. Turkey’s politico-economic status

[B]5. Present political and economic status of Pakistan[/B]
(Politically divided people, creeping economic growth, social & ethnic divide, and ideological crisis in Pakistan are some of the major issues that require the political upgradation in the country)

6. Major hurdles or challenges against the political stability for majority of states
a. Lack of political will (specially in Pakistan)
b. Inefficient political leadership (specially in Pakistan)
c. Absence or silence of pressure groups
d. External involvement – US or any other powerful state (specially in Pakistan)
e. Lack of independent institutions
f. Ignorant populace due to illiteracy and dormant media
g. Ineffective policy-making and implementation
h. Crisis of identity (specially in Pakistan)

[B]7. Measures to be adopted for a favorable political change[/B]
a. Active involvement of pressure groups
b. Awareness campaign for the masses
c. Deciding on a single identity and ideology
d. Stregthning of constitutional power transition
e. Policies compatible with economic, social and political implications

[B]8. Conclusion[/B]




Comments and suggestions are welcome :)


Humblest Regards

Re-never give up
 

[QUOTE=Abrahm Lincoln;649111][B]Never never never never never give up[/B] (from the CE 2013 reconducted in Faisalabad)


[B][U]Outline[/U][/B]

[B]1. Introduction and Contention[/B]

Consistency, perseverance, patience and self-belief are the prerequisites of conquering over any problem and crisis. An individual can pull the mountains down and perform a herculian task if he or she has the courage of not giving up. However, majority of people after sustaining a bit of pressure, give up, which is a behavior for one to be highly concerned about.

[B]2. Examples from political history[/B]
(Z.A Bhutto's signing of Simla Agreement 1972 while facing a highly hostile government in a grave post-war situation)
(Passage of 13th amendment - Emancipation Proclamation - in the United States' constitution by Abrahm Lincoln in 1863 which was highly opposed in by the congressmen)

[B]3. Success stories from history of science[/B]
(Thomas Edison's invetion of bulb after failing 99 times)
(Aeroplane invetion by Right Brothers etc.)

[B]4. References from human evolution history[/B]
(Some important facts from cave-dwelling to the modern age)

[B]5. Examples from animals' behavior[/B]
(Stroy of King Bruce and Spider can be quoted)

[B]6. Those who lack consistent behavior[/B]

[B]7. Causes of inconsistent attitude[/B]
a. Inability to sustain pressure
b. Losing hope
c. Self disbelief
d. Misinterpreting situation

[B]8. Attaining consistent behavior[/B]
a. Triumph over situation
b. Taking the companions' consent
c. Avoiding panic
d. Exploring the options
e. Deciding on options
f. Relaxing to overcome stress

[B]9. Conclusion[/B]





Seniors please take a look a comment on the outline :))[/QUOTE]
Well really nice initiative,
though i am not senior but I would like to contribute;
in essay [B]Never.... Give up[/B],

a) inclusion of some quotations can make good start & ending ....
b) Also living examples of Micheal jordon, Malala can be added
c) there should be some way/strategy to adopt Never Give Up attitude
d) Is Suggestion section is represented by -Attaining consistent behavior ?????
e) finding correlation between never give up and success/failure, hard work, patience etc (optional)

fellows I wrote what i found missing, if anything is missing/repeated plz add up !!!!!

Dear u have made a good effort but i would like to suggest something which can be added.
Some recent developments in political culture of Pakistan,
Despite so many flaws in last government which has completed it constitutional tenure and successfully transferred power to new elected government.No doubt it is the first step towards democratic developments and continuation of policies in Pakistan.

[QUOTE=parwarsha;649287]Well really nice initiative,
though i am not senior but I would like to contribute;
in essay [B]Never.... Give up[/B],

a) inclusion of some quotations can make good start & ending ....
b) Also living examples of Micheal jordon, Malala can be added
c) there should be some way/strategy to adopt Never Give Up attitude
d) Is Suggestion section is represented by -Attaining consistent behavior ?????
e) finding correlation between never give up and success/failure, hard work, patience etc (optional)

fellows I wrote what i found missing, if anything is missing/repeated plz add up !!!!![/QUOTE]


Thank you for the valuable comments and suggestions.
Yes, a start with a quotation would be much proper and let me tell you honestly that I had mentioned Maulana Jalaluddin Rumi's qoutation "The miseries are the grounds of pleasures" when i expanded the aforementioned outline.

"Attaining consistent behavior" includes some methods to acquire the strength of not giving up.

I would appreciate even more if you contribute in terms of drawing the outlines as it can be helpful for the aspirants visiting this particular thread.


Kind Regards :)

[QUOTE=ADNAN ISLAM AWAN;649308]Dear u have made a good effort but i would like to suggest something which can be added.
Some recent developments in political culture of Pakistan,
Despite so many flaws in last government which has completed it constitutional tenure and successfully transferred power to new elected government.No doubt it is the first step towards democratic developments and continuation of policies in Pakistan.[/QUOTE]


Much appreciated dear.

some of the recent systemic changes (passage of 18th amendment, consensual NFC award, first ever constitutional transition of power etc.) can be mentioned. However, to justify the contention in our essay we need to concentrate on the areas that need absolute concentration by the political forces and pressure groups.


I'm sure you can also honour us by posting some of your work in the shape outlines.


Regards
Lincoln :)

Well I lack sound political as well as economic background to argue & justify in either way...... A senior of mine also advised me to avoid economic related essays ;)

but its really nice topic [B]Not Economy but Politics Is a Key to Success[/B], relevant to our current scenario of pak as well as of western states after Recession..........

I think Abraham though your effort is superb but still it needs qualitative & argumentative addition to justify your stance ..............

I suggest that input from subject specialists of Economics & Political science Form be included for more diverse, 3-dimensional eloquent justification , what you say Abraham ?????

[QUOTE=parwarsha;649402]Well I lack sound political as well as economic background to argue & justify in either way...... A senior of mine also advised me to avoid economic related essays ;)

but its really nice topic [B]Not Economy but Politics Is a Key to Success[/B], relevant to our current scenario of pak as well as of western states after Recession..........

I think Abraham though your effort is superb but still it needs qualitative & argumentative addition to justify your stance ..............

I suggest that input from subject specialists of Economics & Political science Form be included for more diverse, 3-dimensional eloquent justification , what you say Abraham ?????[/QUOTE]





In my view the topic "Not economy but politics is the key to success" requires more of an abstract rather than an objective or theoretical frameworks-driven approach. Therefore, to me consulting a subject specialist does not seem to be gravely important. If someone has a better approach towards the country's politico-economic affairs and standing in the international community, one can rise to the occasion in this regard.

Futhermore, the subject specialist can be consulted to learn more about the economically successful nations. Whereas the same can be learned from the online available sources.

Hope I've justified my view.

Anyways, Thank you parwarsha :))

UNO - Achievements & Failures
 

[CENTER][U][B]UNO - Achievements & Failures[/B][/U][/CENTER]

[B]1. Introduction and Contention[/B]

Ever since its inception, The United Nations has become partially successful in achieving its objectives.

[B]2. Extent of Issue[/B]

[B]a. Failures of the UN[/B]
i. Territorial and political disputes continue to linger
(Kashmir and Palestine disputes)
ii. It has failed to protect the territorial integrity of sovereign states
(Iraq war and Gaza offensive)
iii. It has failed in the field of disarmament
(Israel, North Korea, Iran)
iv. The US interference in the internal affairs of weaker countries
( Libya, Syria, South Korea, etc.)
v. It has failed to protect the deteriorating world climate
vi. Conditions of a lot of the poor women and children in underdeveloped countries have not improved

[B]b. Achievements of the UN[/B]
i. It has so far prevented the Third World War (Cuban Missile Crisis)
ii. Kept itself intact despite many crises
iii. Boosted the trade of goods and services
iv. Contribution of autonomous agencies – projects and programs carried out by them
v. Provided relief and help in distress, food shortage, housing and population issues
vi. Peacekeeping mission and its advantages
.Independence of Namibia
.Yugoslavia, Sierra Leone
.East Timor, Democratic Republic of Congo, Kosovo, Lebanon, and Ethiopia-Eritrea
vii. It continues introducing economic, educational, agricultural, and socio-cultural reforms

[B]3. Causes of failures[/B]

a. Financial dependence on major powers
b. Lopsided character of the UNSC
c. Optional jurisdiction of ICJ – the judicial organ of the UN
d. Divergence of interests between great powers paralyzes her i.e. it has
been badly failed in sorting out the recent Syrian crisis where the question
comes of " Clash of interests" between Russia and anti Russian block
e. Lacks of the executive machinery to implement decisions

[B]4. Reforming the UN[/B]
a. Expansion of UNSC
i. Increasing the number of permanent members
ii. Increasing the number of two-year term members
b. Reducing the financial dependence on a very few member states
c. Empowering the General Assembly to get its decisions implemented
d. Progressive principles of equality and justice must be observed

[B]5. Conclusion[/B]




Comments and suggestions are most welcome :)


Regards :)