Seniors pleaze check my essay on corruption on pakistan and amandment it

[lucky 88]

Corruption is world wide problem Pakistan also facing the big problem of corruption, corruption like a cancer eating up Government institutions/departments, there is National Accountability Bureau, Federal Investigation Agency, Pakistan Ehtsab Bureau to curb the corruption but these are not succeeded in their efforts.
According to the International Corruption Transparency Perception index 2011, Pakistan was stood at 42nd number and in 2012 it stood on 33rd number 9 number increased in a year it showed that the is no good governance. some politicians of the ruling party publicly stood and said there is no corruption in Pakistan now Pakistan is free from corruption the lack of government on his own party.
According to the National Corruption Transparency Report four Institution of Pakistan are at the top position on corruption which are they WAPDA , Police, Department Land Department and Education Department According to the chairman of the National Corruption Transparency of Pakistan siad corruption routed people of Pakistan on poverty, shortage of electricity, shorted of food etc.
the Haj schame is the four front of the corruption all Political Parties of Pakistan have been failed to Reduce the corruption.

[bmahmood]

Dear I think you need to work very hard in this paper to bring efficacy in your language standards. please try to cram the standard material. A lot of spelling and grammar mistakes are there in given text. Try to burgeon your phrases with facts and figures , so you will be able to grab the attention of examiner.
A well phrased essay which contains facts without spelling and grammatical mistakes can bring good marks for you.



With Regards

[lucky 88]

sir please indicate my mistakes & correct them thank you

[Matee ur Rehman]

Outline
Introduction
Topic Defined.
The pearl of truth are going to be vanish.
General Remarks.
truth......clear like crystal where spots of evils never stay.
Thesis Statement.
truth despite of having significant role and introduction of cheap sources as, media,net, research,...etc is rare in our society and its deficiency is affecting socio economic and political foundations of society.
Significance of truth
Beats vices and evils.
Ensures equality and justice
waters plant of trust in society
identification of man's place in society
Islam and truth
God's recognition with discovering reality
Holy Prophet follower of truth
Hazrat sheikh Abdul Qadir jailani and truth
Holy Quran ......true book with true lesson
Channels of truth
Holy Books.......messages of God
Research ........Discovery and inventions
Media.............with the eye of camera
internet.........sharing of information
Barriers in the way of truth
Biased Educational system
Media based on propaganda
Prejudiced Religious mind set
Power, Authority and Force
Nationalism
Conclusion

It is bitter fact that pearl of truth is going to be vanish with the passage of time. It is ornament which beautified every relation in this world. Man's curiosity always forced him to know the fact and his this nature helped him to search truth, what is truth of this universe, what is reality of man, what are facts and figures behind this world. Man wants to know. He wants to expose reality. He wants to unveil hidden truth. In this struggle, man has intermingled truth and fakeness. Now he is confuse. Truth is in small quantity and under the heap of lies, fakeness and deceives, it is not visible . Today, man has internet, media, and other sources to be aware but alas, still there are very small quantity of truth to guide man. Truth which was considered cheap commodity now has become rare and expensive.
truth is like crystal where spots of evils cannot stay.it curbs vices and evils which destroys society. Not denying from the fact that a society where plants of truth is watered and its fruits are given to new generation, never weakens its structure of progress and prosperity.

[Matee ur Rehman]

The cancer of corruption posses serious threat for social and economical life of our nation.It is hollowing social roots and destroying us by eradicating all moral values. As the virus of corruption is spreading, truth, sincerity, fraternity, love and sacrifice are being vanished. The disease of corruption is not only weakening our social foundations but it is becoming cause of economical decay of the state. Not denying from the fact that in our country from Prime Minister to an ordinary clerk have its spots which are raising questions on our religious hollowness but also widening the gulf between haves and haves not. It is waging a war in society to fulfill the lust for wealth. It is inviting poor's to take bath in this pool or if they are unable to do so then they are made able to join hands with anti social groups which create terror by plundering and killing. It is also giving birth inequality and injustice. The darkness of corruption is going to spread and we should take immediate action to curb it before its complete control over our institutions.



kindly check it

[Qasim Mahmood]

Good attempt, but i can only be used as paragraph writing, however, from Essay point of view, it is too short, one has to write approximately 2400 words Essay in the paper...
with an impressive outline and logical conclusion.

[Matee ur Rehman]

thanks but I was just wanted to show my expressions to members for getting remarks. please comment about truth in short supply ..written above