Please Evaluate, Energy Crisis in Pakistan. (Outline)

[amannan]

1. Introduction;
2. Energy Crisis a universal problem;
3. Energy Crisis in Pakistan;
4. Causes of energy crisis in Pakistan;
i. Energy theft
ii. Lack of accountability
iii. Uncompleted Projects
iv. No heed paid to other resources of energy
5. Impacts;
i. The seed of tolerance and patience is being diminished from our society.
ii. Students facing problem in their Institutions
iii. Loss of Industrialization
iv. Crippled Economy
v. Tarnished image of the state.
6. Measures taken by the Governments;
i. 19 IPP in 2003
ii. Increasing the water storage capacity of Mangla Dam in 2013.
iii. Few, places are decided for the wind power plants.
7. Current demand and supply gap;
8. Why we should leave Hydal energy and move towards other resources?
9. Remedies;
As the forms of energy are easily interchangeable, Pakistan should also use other resources to produce energy along with hydal energy.
i. Wind energy
ii. Nuclear energy
iii. Solar Energy
iv. Thar coal.
10. Conclusion.



A state is said to be in ‘energy crisis’ when the consumption of energy exceeds than the production of energy. Energy crisis is a universal problem, as many of the countries are experiencing it. Pakistan is also counted in those states and is miserably tangled in it. There are certain causes which include energy theft, lack of accountability, lying on single resource etc. This energy crisis has played a major role in maiming economy, devastating students’ education and less industrialization in Pakistan.


Our State Pakistan is rich in resources and can still overcome the energy crisis, if the above remedies are explored and tapped within a certain time limit.

[amannan]

Is there no one to evaluate it ??

[Naveed_Bhuutto]

Originally Posted by amannan

1. Introduction;
2. Energy Crisis a universal problem;
3. Energy Crisis in Pakistan;
4. Causes of energy crisis in Pakistan;
i. Energy theft
ii. Lack of accountability
iii. Uncompleted Projects
iv. No heed paid to other resources of energy
5. Impacts;
i. The seed of tolerance and patience is being diminished from our society.
ii. Students facing problem in their Institutions
iii. Loss of Industrialization
iv. Crippled Economy
v. Tarnished image of the state.
6. Measures taken by the Governments;
i. 19 IPP in 2003
ii. Increasing the water storage capacity of Mangla Dam in 2013.
iii. Few, places are decided for the wind power plants.
7. Current demand and supply gap;
8. Why we should leave Hydal energy and move towards other resources?
9. Remedies;
As the forms of energy are easily interchangeable, Pakistan should also use other resources to produce energy along with hydal energy.
i. Wind energy
ii. Nuclear energy
iii. Solar Energy
iv. Thar coal.
10. Conclusion.



A state is said to be in ‘energy crisis’ when the consumption of energy exceeds than the production of energy. Energy crisis is a universal problem, as many of the countries are experiencing it. Pakistan is also counted in those states and is miserably tangled in it. There are certain causes which include energy theft, lack of accountability, lying on single resource etc. This energy crisis has played a major role in maiming economy, devastating students’ education and less industrialization in Pakistan.


Our State Pakistan is rich in resources and can still overcome the energy crisis, if the above remedies are explored and tapped within a certain time limit.

Dear although a very good effort, but there are a few ratifications that i would like to see in your outlines, next time you make them.

1. Your heading are too simple to attract examiner attentions
2. Try to use attractive and powerful headings as almost entire Pakistan gives headings of causes, impact and remedies in their paper.
3. The causes you have mentioned are a bit weak except the 1st two.
4. More important points are mention late on no. 3,4 and 5. These point should be at the top.
5. What is the difference between measure taken by govt and remedies? if both are same then why separate headings?
6. No need of heading no. 7. it can be a subheading instead.
7. Remedies are not upto the mark. Why? because you just have mentioned that renewable resources should be use to overcome energy crisis and apne phir uski ki forms ko illustrate kia hai.... Is k ilawa bhi bahoot saari remedies hian jo aap mention kar sakte the.

Apart from all above, there are many positives in your outlines i.e. it was coherent, well ordered and well defined. Lekin since you asked me to evaluate your outlines therefore I have pointed at the grey areas of your writing.

[Naveed_Bhuutto]

Causes of energy short fall:

1- failure of the last regime to increase electricity:
2- Under utilization of the existing generating capacity:
3- Circular debts:
4.The repeated cutting down in Public Sector Development Program:
5 Other factors:

(i) Line loss:
(ii) Large scale of theft of electricity:
(iv) Over use of energy by transport sector:
(v) Domestic wastage:
(vi) General wastage:
(vii) Corruption and lack of political will in the concerned energy department:

(B) Effects of energy crunch:

1) Routine life:

2) Industries: Many industrial units have closed and many shifted their installation to Bangladesh. This poor industrial production has ultimately affected the GDP of Pakistan. Downsizing of the workers in industries. Many workers turned jobless. The buying capacity of people has reduced sharply.
→ Rise in the price of commodities.

3) Market: Markets are closed early due to the load shedding. Secondly production cost of commodities have raised.

4) Agriculture: the agricultural land that is dependent on tube well and dug wells, its yielding capacity has sharply reduced due to load shedding. As crops do not get water in time.


5) Strikes and agitation: Due to load shedding many strikes have occurred across the country, destroyed government installations.

6) Low National growth: load shedding has affected the national growth badly. Less progress or no progress at all in all walks of the country. Ultimately, less GDP growth rate.

(C) Measures:

1) immediate measures: Firstly, the problem of circular debt should be solved on proiority basis, in order to enable the power companies to clear their debts. Secondly, the agreement of importing electricity from Iron and Tajikistan needs to be implemented in a quick fashion. The Pak- Iron gas pipe line project needs to be completed on the earliest dates.

2) Mid term plan: First, all the gas and inefficient WAPDA plants should be replaced by more efficient and combined cycle plants. Second, there is an urgent need of modernizing the overloaded transmission and distribution system. The expenditure of updating our electricity system could be recovered in only three years through savings from the line loss.


3) Long term plans:


(i) Dams construction:
(ii) Gas exploration:
iii) Coal:
vi) Wind energy:
v) Solar Energy:

[amannan]

Originally Posted by Naveed_Bhuutto

Dear although a very good effort, but there are a few ratifications that i would like to see in your outlines, next time you make them.

1. Your heading are too simple to attract examiner attentions
2. Try to use attractive and powerful headings as almost entire Pakistan gives headings of causes, impact and remedies in their paper.
3. The causes you have mentioned are a bit weak except the 1st two.
4. More important points are mention late on no. 3,4 and 5. These point should be at the top.
5. What is the difference between measure taken by govt and remedies? if both are same then why separate headings?
6. No need of heading no. 7. it can be a subheading instead.
7. Remedies are not upto the mark. Why? because you just have mentioned that renewable resources should be use to overcome energy crisis and apne phir uski ki forms ko illustrate kia hai.... Is k ilawa bhi bahoot saari remedies hian jo aap mention kar sakte the.

Apart from all above, there are many positives in your outlines i.e. it was coherent, well ordered and well defined. Lekin since you asked me to evaluate your outlines therefore I have pointed at the grey areas of your writing.

Thanks, can you please have a look at my introduction and conclusion too ?
Its in the end, after the outlines