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Sir check my essay outline in essay forum
I have posted it there
" great nation win witjout fighting"
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higher education..... making money or improving education
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Sure dear, I will do that soon Insha Allah.
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Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent

Outline:

Introduction: certainly, violence is the last refuge of the incompetent.
1. Defining violence, refuge, and incompetent
2. Incompetent as:
- an individual
- a group
- a nation
- a government
3. Incompetency to:
- achieve
- persuade
- deliver
4. How violence is the large refuge of incompetent?
5. Examples, as:
- an individual
- a group
- a nation
- a government
6. How to deal with the subject?
- to be competent
Conclusion.
Dear, you took it in right direction but your essay just describes following sentence. Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent because violence is the last refuge of the incompetent. You must have proved that stance as well, you have just been describing the terms. Lets see, may Allah bless you.
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@ bilal. I attempted look to the easy for a holistic progress. I made a blunder ad I wrote whole essay in indian perspective as india is in east... would this cost me?? Sad for being so goof
Dear, I'm sorry to say, you made a fatal mistake. Neither India is a great Nation nor has it been peaceful.
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Violence as the last refuge of the incompetent:

introduction

historical background:

1. Romans with Jews.
2. Makkans to prophet Muhammad(s.a.w)
3. incompetents of 19th and 20th centuries.(suppressed peasantry to industry labor of industrial revolution.)
4. imperialists and the colonial states.
5. GERMANY after WW I ,Japan after WW II.
CURRENT SCENARIO:
6. MIDDLE EAST , AFGHANISTAN ,IRAQ AND AFRICA
7. WAR ON TERROR.
8. TTP vs Pakistan
9. insurgency in Balochistan.
social incompetents
10. religious extremists.
11. individual vs society.
impacts on society
12. class system.
13. sense if inferiority
14. violence and aggression.
how to eradicate incompetency and its effects?
15. solutions
16. through education.
17. justice
18. rights.
19 equality.
Conclusion.

(i wrote 9 paragraphs in total, and consider my self fail, still want to know about my outlines, senoirs plz comment and correct me critically.
9 paragraphs are enough to pass the paper provided what you have given is just awesome. I can't say about that topic, let me make its outline myself then we'll compare Insha Allah.
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*great nations win without fighting
Plz check my essay outline seniors

*-Introduction
-Fake image of western great nations
-View of islam
-Why we fight
For water
For resources
For geostrategic position

-Levels of fight
Regional fights
National fights
International fights

- characteristics of great nations
Ethical value
High human developement index
Education
Protection of human rights
Law and order*
Political stability
Strong institutions
Accountability
High FDI
High GDP

- hurdles for pakistan to become great nation .... fighting
Sectarian violence
Regional conflicts
National conflicts
So called jihadi movements
Seperatist movements
- effects of fights
Frustration
Phycological problems
Poverty
Tarnished political image
Iletracy
Less influence at international level
Security threats

- conclusions*" great nations win without fighting."No nation is great without ethical values. And all those nations who build their resources by violating human rights do not deserve to be great nation. Standards of great nations must be achieved without fighting. Infact fight is the big hurdle to achieve the goals and standards of great nation.
Dear, all your points, save characteristics of great nations, are irrelevant in my humble opinion, you must have been to the point, was it needed to present the fake image of western countries or telling about the problems of Pakistan in becoming a great Nation? If your stance was that Great nations win without fighting, then your thrust must have been at proving that stance and nothing else. However, we learn from our mistakes. Best of Luck.
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Violence is a large refuge of incompetent

Introduction
• Man is a social animal
• Traits differ from person to person
• Positive vs negative activities
• Differences can lead towards conflict
• Conflict acts as first brick of the building of violence
• Thesis statement leading towards conclusion

What is violence
Conflict as catalyst of violence
Individuals, groups and nations as incompetent
How violence becomes large refuge of incompetent?
• Through oppression
• Tyrant practices
• Threats
• Use of excessive force
• Sectarianism
• Terrorism
• Anarchy
When incompetents replace competent in world?
• Death of logic and reason
• Shun the practice of dialogue
• Reason: a forgotten lesson
• Rampant intolerance
• Hatred
• Absence of patience
• Lack of awareness and education
• Non-existence of ethical and moral values
Violence vs. dialogue
Violence leads towards more violence
Violence in shape of terrorism and oppression: a global scenario
• American occupation of Afghanistan and Iraq
• War on terror
• 9/11 attacks
• Indian oppression in Kashmir
• Mumbai attacks
• Israel- Palestine conflict
• Clash of civilizations
Pakistan: as a case study
• TTP and terrorist attacks
• Sectarianism
• Intolerance
• Ethnic and linguistic violence
• Political oppression
Remedial measures to curb the incompetents from using violence as large refugee
• Lessons from the life of prophet Muhammad (pbuh)
• Tolerance and patience
• Dialogue
• Reasoning and logic
• Encouraging competent, discouraging incompetent elements
conclusion
• Death of logic, reason and argumentation levels the ground for the incompetent elements to use violence as large refuge.
• tolerance, patience and dialogue are the way out from this menace.


note:i wrote this essay and in our center of Bahawalpur no correction was done to replace "large as last".
seniors please check my outline and comment about it
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Is we add one step more in great nations win without fighting.
Is Pakistan has a potential to achieve comity of nations:If YES
1) Through peace and dialouge
2) Through economy
3) Through progress
4) Through good governance
5) Through National sovereignty
6) Through National integrity
7) Through Accountability
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Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent:

Outline:

1. Incompetent is one who fails to convince and win hearts and minds of others peacefully, such entities take refuge in violence.
2. Organizations, Individuals, nations etc when rendered incompetent, resort to violence.
a)Terrorist organizations are incompetent as they fail to win others peacefully.
i)Tehrik e Taliban Pakistan(TTP) terrorism.
ii)LTTE terrorism in Srilanka.
iii) IRA terrorism in UK.
b) Incompetent individuals snatch away peace of world.
i)Napoleon Bonaparte’s violence
ii)Hitler and Mussolini as perpetrators of massive violence.
c) So called modern and democratic states , prove incompetent and take refuge in violence.
i)Indian violence in Kashmir.
ii) Israelis repression in Palestine.
d) Sectarianism is because of fact that incompetent individuals fail to recognize diversity as beauty.
i) Sectarian violence in Pakistan.
e) Often compatriots are incompetent to resolve their issues and incompetency of this form takes a country towards chaos, civil war and anarchy:
i)Bloodshed in Syria.
ii)Anarchy and violence in Bahrain.
f) Blasphemers are incompetent in challenging glory of divine figures that’s why they take refuge in blasphemy, another form of violence.
i)Salman Rushdie’s violence.
ii) Terry Jones blasphemy and violence.
iii)’Life of Muhammad’ movie as violence.

3. At times competent, one who is on sound moral footings and character, also take refuge in violence for want of other options.
i) Pakistan Army operation in Swat.
ii)Srilankan armed action against LTTE.
iii)British action against IRA.

4. World history demonstrates that competents shun violence.
i) Holy Prophet(PBUH) as ‘Rehmat ul Aalemeen’
ii)Quaid e Azam always rejected violence as a refuge.
iii) Character of Nelson Mandela.
iv) Lawyers movement in Pakistan was an absolutely peaceful movement.

5. What factors ensure and foster this refuge.
i) Ineffectiveness of UNO
ii)Lack of believe in humanity.
iii)Autocratic regimes.
iv)weak and ineffective judicial systems.

6. This refuge needs to be checked. This can be done by.
i) Strengthening UNO.
ii)Empowering OIC.
iii) Promoting values of humanity.
iv)Ensuring democracy.
v)Rehabilitating judicial systems.

7. Yes incompetent take refuge in violence but need of the hour is to practice such measures to curb this refuge and ensure peace of world.
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Look to the East for a holistic progress


1) Introduction
  • a) Meaning: The rise of Asia
  • b) Asian model of progress must be followed


2) Progressive Asian countries
  • a) Japan, World Technology leader
  • b) China, manufacturing giant
  • c) Malaysia, truly Asia
  • d) South Korea, an emerging economy
  • e) Taiwan, a technology wizard
  • f) Singapore, A trade master


3) What is holistic progress?
  • a) Peace
  • b) Progressive economy
  • c) High standard of living
  • d) Educated Masses
  • e) Intact Moral values
  • f) Sovereignty
  • g) Conquest of happiness
  • h) Peace of Mind
  • i) Intact Natural milieu


4) Components of Asian model of progress:
  • a) Peaceful advancement
  • b) Economies of Scale
  • c) Focus on optimal usage of Resources
  • d) Value Maximization


5) Cultural factors behind Asian success:
  • a) Hardworking and sturdy Masses
  • b) Consistent and Tenacious approach
  • c) Role of Confucius' thought


6) Conclusion:
  • a) Asian model of progress must be the benchmark for all
  • b) 21st century belongs to Asia

Brother, Your outline is good but it lacks relevancy except for Number 3. However, All depends on your expressions and arguments.
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Violence is the last refuge of the Incompetent

My whole essay revolves around in proving the statement that yes violence the last refuge of the incompetent.

Introduction:

Why is this so that a man axes his wife and chops off her legs? Why is this so that a dictator uses Sarin gas against his subjects? Why is this so that Muslims are fighting all over the world over whose version is true Islam? Why is this so that nations are trading bullets instead of goods? This is all due to the violence in the world.

[After Introduction, I have mentioned in few lines about what is violence and described the scope of essay that Violence is used on individual level, state level and global level….]

Body of Essay:

What makes an individual incompetent?
Ignorance
Arrogance
Selfishness
Aggressiveness
Intolerance

[All of these were explained in sequence, how one leads to other and finally to incompetence]

Use of Violence: How it is the last refuge of the incompetent:

At Individual Level: How?

[Family: First Social Institution of a Childhood…. Adoption of Violent Behaviour begins initially by breaking toys, misbehaving with siblings and parents when they fail to agree…]

[School, Colleges, Expression of Violent Behaviour, fighting with classmates and beating teachers on minor issues due to the absence of patience….]

[Beginning of Social Life, Adulthood, Marriage Life, Domestic Violence, its reasons and why husband take refuge of violence]

[Social Unrest linkage with Extremism, Militancy, Terrorism, why people are adopt these practices]

At State Level:

Government failure…..Public deficit….Public against Government…Government incompetency and adoption of violence….Infringement of Rights and Use of force against public…..Undemocratic Norms….Poor Governance Incompetent officers shed their responsibility on juniors coerce them and they in return adopt violent behaviour in the form of their public polices…..] Contemporary World Examples: Egypt, Thailand, Ukraine etc

At Global Level:
How and why the nations compelled to adopt violence. Shared examples of Territorial Disputes, Political Disputes

Suggestion: In One Paragraph

Conclusion:

[Conclusion of whole essay indirectly pointing out that how violence is the last refuge of incompetent at an individual, state and global level]
Last line, if violence is not controlled…..

Let there be light, God Said, There was Light
Let there be blood, Man says, there’s a ocean

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Default violence is a last refuge of incompetent!please check

1.Introduction
2.Historical evidence
2.1 Cave men and his violence-justified or not???(yes because he did not knew better)
2.2 Arabs before Islam and violent practices-justified or not??(there was no specific guidance and after Islam they rose and today..)
2.3 Gandhi civil violence-justified or not??(not justified he was an educated man)
2.4 U.S and political violence-justified or not??(claiming to be the "world saviors")
3.Types of violence's:-
3.1 Social
3.1.1 ethnic( extremism in nations-Pakistan,Darfur etc)
3.1.2 sectarian(1979 revolution)
3.2 Political
3.2.1 vested interests-political strategies of the world
3.2.2 vested interests -political strategies of the country
3.3 Economical
3.3.1 Hegemony of rich countries and their violent plans
3.3.2 Protectors of the third world-new ways of violence(nato and their human trafficking,rape,organ removal cases)
4.Factors leading to violent practices-the large refuge..
4.1 MIGHT IS ALWAYS RIGHT!!
4.2 LOOSE SOCIAL BONDS..
4.3 ECONOMIC DISPARITIES
4.4 PROXY WARS
4.5 DECREASING INTOLERANCE
4.6 LEAST RESPECTED HUMAN LIFE-"killing one human is equal to killing all"
4.7 INJUSTICE PREVAILS
5.21st Century and violence-first and last line of defence
5.1 divide and rule polices
5.2 technological advancement-more horrors and less fruitful(nuclear bomb,drones,spying satellites and humans as polio campaigns in Pakistan)
5.3 laws of deterrence(heavily armed countries)
5.4 failure of world body U.N
6.ways to curb violence
6.1 realization of human life importance
6.2 more economical progress less

i do not remember mush of but as i will recall it i shall post it.
p.s seniors please comment.
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Violence is a large refuge of incompetent

Introduction
• Man is a social animal
• Traits differ from person to person
• Positive vs negative activities
• Differences can lead towards conflict
• Conflict acts as first brick of the building of violence
• Thesis statement leading towards conclusion

What is violence
Conflict as catalyst of violence
Individuals, groups and nations as incompetent
How violence becomes large refuge of incompetent?
• Through oppression
• Tyrant practices
• Threats
• Use of excessive force
• Sectarianism
• Terrorism
• Anarchy
When incompetents replace competent in world?
• Death of logic and reason
• Shun the practice of dialogue
• Reason: a forgotten lesson
• Rampant intolerance
• Hatred
• Absence of patience
• Lack of awareness and education
• Non-existence of ethical and moral values
Violence vs. dialogue
Violence leads towards more violence
Violence in shape of terrorism and oppression: a global scenario
• American occupation of Afghanistan and Iraq
• War on terror
• 9/11 attacks
• Indian oppression in Kashmir
• Mumbai attacks
• Israel- Palestine conflict
• Clash of civilizations
Pakistan: as a case study
• TTP and terrorist attacks
• Sectarianism
• Intolerance
• Ethnic and linguistic violence
• Political oppression
Remedial measures to curb the incompetents from using violence as large refugee
• Lessons from the life of prophet Muhammad (pbuh)
• Tolerance and patience
• Dialogue
• Reasoning and logic
• Encouraging competent, discouraging incompetent elements
conclusion
• Death of logic, reason and argumentation levels the ground for the incompetent elements to use violence as large refuge.
• tolerance, patience and dialogue are the way out from this menace.


note:i wrote this essay and in our center of Bahawalpur no correction was done to replace "large as last".
seniors please check my outline and comment about it
Dear don't you think you have included many irrelevant points? In introduction you have included general statements about man and his nature etc. I think you have been to the point in rest of the essay but arguments were not valid. However, keep fingers crossed, fired bullet is a gone bullet.
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Is we add one step more in great nations win without fighting.
Is Pakistan has a potential to achieve comity of nations:If YES
1) Through peace and dialouge
2) Through economy
3) Through progress
4) Through good governance
5) Through National sovereignty
6) Through National integrity
7) Through Accountability
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That would have been an extra point, all that was required is proving or disproving that great nations win without fighting.
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Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent:

Outline:

1. Incompetent is one who fails to convince and win hearts and minds of others peacefully, such entities take refuge in violence.
2. Organizations, Individuals, nations etc when rendered incompetent, resort to violence.
a)Terrorist organizations are incompetent as they fail to win others peacefully.
i)Tehrik e Taliban Pakistan(TTP) terrorism.
ii)LTTE terrorism in Srilanka.
iii) IRA terrorism in UK.
b) Incompetent individuals snatch away peace of world.
i)Napoleon Bonaparte’s violence
ii)Hitler and Mussolini as perpetrators of massive violence.
c) So called modern and democratic states , prove incompetent and take refuge in violence.
i)Indian violence in Kashmir.
ii) Israelis repression in Palestine.
d) Sectarianism is because of fact that incompetent individuals fail to recognize diversity as beauty.
i) Sectarian violence in Pakistan.
e) Often compatriots are incompetent to resolve their issues and incompetency of this form takes a country towards chaos, civil war and anarchy:
i)Bloodshed in Syria.
ii)Anarchy and violence in Bahrain.
f) Blasphemers are incompetent in challenging glory of divine figures that’s why they take refuge in blasphemy, another form of violence.
i)Salman Rushdie’s violence.
ii) Terry Jones blasphemy and violence.
iii)’Life of Muhammad’ movie as violence.

3. At times competent, one who is on sound moral footings and character, also take refuge in violence for want of other options.
i) Pakistan Army operation in Swat.
ii)Srilankan armed action against LTTE.
iii)British action against IRA.

4. World history demonstrates that competents shun violence.
i) Holy Prophet(PBUH) as ‘Rehmat ul Aalemeen’
ii)Quaid e Azam always rejected violence as a refuge.
iii) Character of Nelson Mandela.
iv) Lawyers movement in Pakistan was an absolutely peaceful movement.

5. What factors ensure and foster this refuge.
i) Ineffectiveness of UNO
ii)Lack of believe in humanity.
iii)Autocratic regimes.
iv)weak and ineffective judicial systems.

6. This refuge needs to be checked. This can be done by.
i) Strengthening UNO.
ii)Empowering OIC.
iii) Promoting values of humanity.
iv)Ensuring democracy.
v)Rehabilitating judicial systems.

7. Yes incompetent take refuge in violence but need of the hour is to practice such measures to curb this refuge and ensure peace of world.
Brother good outline, but never include lexical definition of the terms. Its little unnecessary. Best of luck
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Brother, Your outline is good but it lacks relevancy except for Number 3. However, All depends on your expressions and arguments.
But dear if we don't corroborate the point that there really are progressive countries in Asia that must be looked toward for a holistic progress, then how will we proceed further? And if we don't tell him what makes them progressive and holistically progressive, how can we justify our stance? You said it all depends on arguments, and arguments are directed towards supporting the points in outline. I would like to see your version as well. May be I am wrong.
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Violence is the last refuge of the Incompetent

My whole essay revolves around in proving the statement that yes violence the last refuge of the incompetent.

Introduction:

Why is this so that a man axes his wife and chops off her legs? Why is this so that a dictator uses Sarin gas against his subjects? Why is this so that Muslims are fighting all over the world over whose version is true Islam? Why is this so that nations are trading bullets instead of goods? This is all due to the violence in the world.

[After Introduction, I have mentioned in few lines about what is violence and described the scope of essay that Violence is used on individual level, state level and global level….]

Body of Essay:

What makes an individual incompetent?
Ignorance
Arrogance
Selfishness
Aggressiveness
Intolerance

[All of these were explained in sequence, how one leads to other and finally to incompetence]

Use of Violence: How it is the last refuge of the incompetent:

At Individual Level: How?

[Family: First Social Institution of a Childhood…. Adoption of Violent Behaviour begins initially by breaking toys, misbehaving with siblings and parents when they fail to agree…]

[School, Colleges, Expression of Violent Behaviour, fighting with classmates and beating teachers on minor issues due to the absence of patience….]

[Beginning of Social Life, Adulthood, Marriage Life, Domestic Violence, its reasons and why husband take refuge of violence]

[Social Unrest linkage with Extremism, Militancy, Terrorism, why people are adopt these practices]

At State Level:

Government failure…..Public deficit….Public against Government…Government incompetency and adoption of violence….Infringement of Rights and Use of force against public…..Undemocratic Norms….Poor Governance Incompetent officers shed their responsibility on juniors coerce them and they in return adopt violent behaviour in the form of their public polices…..] Contemporary World Examples: Egypt, Thailand, Ukraine etc

At Global Level:
How and why the nations compelled to adopt violence. Shared examples of Territorial Disputes, Political Disputes

Suggestion: In One Paragraph

Conclusion:

[Conclusion of whole essay indirectly pointing out that how violence is the last refuge of incompetent at an individual, state and global level]
Last line, if violence is not controlled…..

Let there be light, God Said, There was Light
Let there be blood, Man says, there’s a ocean

Length: 2000+ words
That's good but incompetent is incompetent, telling the examiner what makes an incompetent incompetent is little beside the mark. However, you have done justice with the topic I guess. Best of luck.

P.S: tell me how could you remember all the objectives of papers?

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1.Introduction
2.Historical evidence
2.1 Cave men and his violence-justified or not???(yes because he did not knew better)
2.2 Arabs before Islam and violent practices-justified or not??(there was no specific guidance and after Islam they rose and today..)
2.3 Gandhi civil violence-justified or not??(not justified he was an educated man)
2.4 U.S and political violence-justified or not??(claiming to be the "world saviors")
3.Types of violence's:-
3.1 Social
3.1.1 ethnic( extremism in nations-Pakistan,Darfur etc)
3.1.2 sectarian(1979 revolution)
3.2 Political
3.2.1 vested interests-political strategies of the world
3.2.2 vested interests -political strategies of the country
3.3 Economical
3.3.1 Hegemony of rich countries and their violent plans
3.3.2 Protectors of the third world-new ways of violence(nato and their human trafficking,rape,organ removal cases)
4.Factors leading to violent practices-the large refuge..
4.1 MIGHT IS ALWAYS RIGHT!!
4.2 LOOSE SOCIAL BONDS..
4.3 ECONOMIC DISPARITIES
4.4 PROXY WARS
4.5 DECREASING INTOLERANCE
4.6 LEAST RESPECTED HUMAN LIFE-"killing one human is equal to killing all"
4.7 INJUSTICE PREVAILS
5.21st Century and violence-first and last line of defence
5.1 divide and rule polices
5.2 technological advancement-more horrors and less fruitful(nuclear bomb,drones,spying satellites and humans as polio campaigns in Pakistan)
5.3 laws of deterrence(heavily armed countries)
5.4 failure of world body U.N
6.ways to curb violence
6.1 realization of human life importance
6.2 more economical progress less

i do not remember mush of but as i will recall it i shall post it.
p.s seniors please comment.
That's good dear. It seems most people have attempted two topics, Great Nations win without war and Incompetent one. I'll also make an outline of Violence is the last refuge of Incompetent.
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Privatizing higher education-generating knowledge or making more money for the opulent.
1:INTRODUCTION:
-Importance of education for social economic and political development.
-privatization to solve problem of access through public-private partnership.
2:INDICATORS THAT PRIVATIZATION LED TO MONEY MAKING INSTEAD OF GENERATING KNOWLEDGE.
-WEF report 2013 i.e.higher education in Pakistan incapable to support competitive economy.
-ASER report 2013.not much changed in education sector since 2010.
-Human Development Index Report:Pakistan ranked 112/122.
3:WHY PRIVATIZATION LEADS TO MONEY MAKING?
-Ultimate aim of opulent is to maximize profit instead of consumer's welfare.
-Big businessmen rarely invest in research projects which may be unrewarded.
4:HARMFUL EFFECTS OUR SOCIETY WITNESSED DUE TO PRIVATIZATION OF HIGHER EDUCATION:
-socio-economic divide.
-"two nations" within one nation.
-breeding extremism.
5:WHAT IS TO BE DONE?
-higher budgetary allocation to expand public sector universities.
-Top down approach i.e hiring of foreign faculty to teach in local universities.
-focus on quality.
6:CONCLUSION:
-Education is a delicate matter and must not be left to opulent individuals to determine its fate.
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