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Any body who has attempted Pakistani sportswomen as new ambassador of soft image of pakistan??????
we can discuss and share our views.......
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I have written on this topic. my introduction, history and 4 paragraph were relevant, but then i shifted on propblems of womensports persons. I wrote that problems of women sportsperson should be resolved, so that we can further project the soft image of pak.
In introduction, i wrote that participation of women arises out of the social economic and political rights that have been given to women. The perception about pakistan that it deprives women of the aforementioned rights has, thus, changed considerably. My introduction was detailed and comprehensive, but now, i am worried that why i mentioned "problems" so much detailed.
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excellent man !!
i gave the similar intro
after that i stick to issues that womens of pakistan are known to be politically and socially subjugated but sportswoen have projected a new and good image.I remained confined to what sportswomen are projecting now :
i said that they are representing egalitarian society
they are representing a peacful society
they are represntng tolerant society and like wise gave the details of all these
what do u say??????
i am able to convince examiner................
i gave 9 headings for my essay in outline
i wrote 16 page essay.....
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Yeah, you are right. women participation in sports is, infact, a post-modern theme. No any woman can participate in sport activities untill social, economic and political conditions are favourable for her.
I do'nt know what would be the outcome of my essay. Infact, i focused on "new" word, hence thought it necessary to mention the problems of women sportspersons as well. Apart from this, i wanted to include descriptive and argumentative forms of discourse in my essay. Now, i am not sure whether it will pass or not.
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yeah.... i think remaining confined to the topic is the main issue...any how Allah knows better whether we have been able to convince examiner or not..
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Women Sports-persons as New Ambassadors of the Soft Image of Pakistan


Outlines:

(i): Introduction
(ii): Sports in modern world
(iii): Womens' participation in world sports
(iv): Women sports-persons as ambassadors
(v): Women sports-persons of Pakistan and the world
(vi): Sports facilities for women in Pakistan and the world
(vii): Sports opportunities for women in Pakistan
(viii): Role of women sports-persons in the world
(ix): Role that women sports-persons can play for Pakistan
(x): Importance of sports in Pakistan
(xi): Problems that Pakistan is facing at the moment
(xii) Image of Pakistan in the world
(xiii) How can the soft image of Pakistan be developed?
(xiv) Conclusion
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Default I attempted "Women Sportsperson as New Ambassador of Soft Image of Pakistan"

Outline:
1- Introduction
2- Importance of soft image of any country in the modern world
3- Prevailing image of Pakistan in the world
4- Causes of unsatisfactory image of Pakistan
a- False interpretation of Islamic laws regarding women
b- Feudalism
c- Illiteracy
d- Discouragement to women to participate in sports
5- Islam encourage the participation of women in every field of life
6- Islam allows women to participate in sports as Hazrat Aysha made race with Hazrat Muhammad (PBUH)
7- Women sportsperson are a good tool to develop soft image of Pakistan
a- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Islam in western world
b- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Pakistan
c- Women sportsperson will show the modernization in the Pakistani society
8- Soft image is very important for the development of the country
a- World is going to globalization so soft image attracts countries to come to invest
b- World organisations will come to Pakistan to enhance women status in Pakistan
c- Foreign investment will increase
d- Tour industry will boost up
e- Pakistan will serve as a source of Islamic preaching
10- Conclusion

Please evaluate my essay as i thought that this essay would be attempted by least number of candidate and argument in the favor of this topic is the policy of Pakistan and civil services.
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Outline:
1- Introduction
2- Importance of soft image of any country in the modern world
3- Prevailing image of Pakistan in the world
4- Causes of unsatisfactory image of Pakistan
a- False interpretation of Islamic laws regarding women
b- Feudalism
c- Illiteracy
d- Discouragement to women to participate in sports
5- Islam encourage the participation of women in every field of life
6- Islam allows women to participate in sports as Hazrat Aysha made race with Hazrat Muhammad (PBUH)
7- Women sportsperson are a good tool to develop soft image of Pakistan
a- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Islam in western world
b- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Pakistan
c- Women sportsperson will show the modernization in the Pakistani society
8- Soft image is very important for the development of the country
a- World is going to globalization so soft image attracts countries to come to invest
b- World organisations will come to Pakistan to enhance women status in Pakistan
c- Foreign investment will increase
d- Tour industry will boost up
e- Pakistan will serve as a source of Islamic preaching
10- Conclusion

Please evaluate my essay as i thought that this essay would be attempted by least number of candidate and argument in the favor of this topic is the policy of Pakistan and civil services.
your essay is good enough bro, but you have emphasised much on meaning and outcome of "soft image" while devoting less time for "how women sportspersons project soft image of pak." it is, however, okay if you have nicely presented your view on role of women players. This essay was, infact, about gender equality.
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Raja :
I think you have focused more on women sports in Pakistan ....Ambassador of soft image was the real crunch of the topic according to my perception.
Well i think hamza has done commendable effort as he has maintained a balanced approach in tackling the topic....
In inroduction he has introduced women in sports and then how they are projectng a new image...
I think demand from the examiner included the following:
1.Present image of Pakistan in the world
2.how this image can be made positive
3.Women participation in sports
4.Why need for a good,positive image?
5.How sportswomen are projecting a new and better image?
6.Failures of other modes of projecting softer image and womens success
7.Impacts of women participation in international sports events.
I wish success for you guys
This is my personal perception.Disagrrement to it would be appreciated
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